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35分写作限时满分练(一)Ⅰ.短文改错(2022安徽蚌埠三模)Irecalledoneofmyearliestmemoryofbaking.Ialwayssitatthekitchentablewhenmymombaked,andIhad

observedmyprocessmanytimes.AsIstartedtotry,Ididn’tknowIshouldn’thandlethedoughwithmyhandstoomuchbutImadeamessinthekitchen.Asmymomarrivedathome,th

esmelloffreshbakedbreadwelcomedher.Shepraisedmeformyattempt,insteadofblamemeforthestateofthekitchen.Whatsurpriseitwas!Thatnightshetoldmyd

adhowpleasingshewas,andwhatagoodjobI’ddone.Itisthemostwonderfulexperiencewhichalwaysremindsmeofmychildhood.Ⅱ.书面表达(2022山西太原二模)“英语活动周”正在向全校学生征集英语

故事,请你以“AConflictwithMyParents”为题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.分歧的原因;2.化解的过程;3.得到的启示。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。AConflictwithMyParentsThereis

nodoubtthatteenagerssometimeshaveconflictswiththeirparents,andIamnoexception.___________________________________________________________________

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.第一句:memory→memories解析考查名词的数。oneof+名词复数。故将memory改为memories。第二句:sit→sat解析考查动词的时态。本文描述的是过去发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。故将sit改为sat。第二句:第二个my→her解析考查代词。这里是指作者妈妈烤面包的过程,

所以用代词her。故将my改为her。第三句:but→and/so解析考查连词。前后句是并列关系或因果关系,而非转折关系。故将but改为and/so。第四句:将home前的at删去解析考查介词。副词home前不加介词。故将home前的at删去。第四句:fresh→f

reshly解析考查副词。动词baked前用副词修饰。故将fresh改为freshly。第五句:blame→blaming解析考查非谓语动词。介词of后用动词-ing形式。故将blame改为blaming。第六句:surprise前加a解析考查冠词。surprise“惊讶”为可数名

词,且以辅音音素开头,故在surprise前加a。第七句:pleasing→pleased解析考查形容词。逻辑主语是she,指人,所以用-ed形式形容词作表语。故将pleasing改为pleased。第八句:which→that解析考查强调句。分析句子

结构可知,本句为强调句。其结构为“Itis/was+强调部分+that(强调人可用who)+其他”,强调主语themostwonderfulexperience,应用that。Ⅱ.AConflictwithMyParentsThereisnodoubtthattee

nagerssometimeshaveconflictswiththeirparents,andIamnoexception.Threeyearsago,Ijoinedtheschoolbasketballclubbutmyparen

tstoldmetoquit,arguingthatmytimeshouldbespentnowherebutinstudying.Thisreallyangeredmeandwequarrelledviolently.Frustrated,Itu

rnedtomyheadteacherandheofferedmemanyinsights.Inspiredbyhim,Iconversedwithmyparentssincerely,andwestraightenedthe

matterout.Ipromisedtostrikeabalancebetweenstudyandplayandtheypermittedmetopursuemyhobby.Eventually,basketball

didn’taffectmystudy.Instead,itenabledmetobettermanagemytime.