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35分写作限时满分练(一)Ⅰ.短文改错(2022安徽蚌埠三模)Irecalledoneofmyearliestmemoryofbaking.Ialwayssitatthekitchentablewhenmymombaked,a

ndIhadobservedmyprocessmanytimes.AsIstartedtotry,Ididn’tknowIshouldn’thandlethedoughwithmyhandstoomuchbutImadeamessi

nthekitchen.Asmymomarrivedathome,thesmelloffreshbakedbreadwelcomedher.Shepraisedmeformyattempt,insteadofblamemeforthest

ateofthekitchen.Whatsurpriseitwas!Thatnightshetoldmydadhowpleasingshewas,andwhatagoodjobI’ddone.Itisthemostwonderfulexpe

riencewhichalwaysremindsmeofmychildhood.Ⅱ.书面表达(2022山西太原二模)“英语活动周”正在向全校学生征集英语故事,请你以“AConflictwithMyParents”为题,写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.分歧的原因;2.化

解的过程;3.得到的启示。注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。AConflictwithMyParentsThereisnodoubtthatteenagerssometimeshaveconflictswith

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__________________________________________________________________________________35分写作限时满分练(一)Ⅰ.第一句:memory→memorie

s解析考查名词的数。oneof+名词复数。故将memory改为memories。第二句:sit→sat解析考查动词的时态。本文描述的是过去发生的事情,所以用一般过去时。故将sit改为sat。第二句:第二个my→her解析考查代词

。这里是指作者妈妈烤面包的过程,所以用代词her。故将my改为her。第三句:but→and/so解析考查连词。前后句是并列关系或因果关系,而非转折关系。故将but改为and/so。第四句:将home前

的at删去解析考查介词。副词home前不加介词。故将home前的at删去。第四句:fresh→freshly解析考查副词。动词baked前用副词修饰。故将fresh改为freshly。第五句:blame→blami

ng解析考查非谓语动词。介词of后用动词-ing形式。故将blame改为blaming。第六句:surprise前加a解析考查冠词。surprise“惊讶”为可数名词,且以辅音音素开头,故在surprise前加a。第七句:pleasing→pleased解析

考查形容词。逻辑主语是she,指人,所以用-ed形式形容词作表语。故将pleasing改为pleased。第八句:which→that解析考查强调句。分析句子结构可知,本句为强调句。其结构为“Itis/was+强调部分

+that(强调人可用who)+其他”,强调主语themostwonderfulexperience,应用that。Ⅱ.AConflictwithMyParentsThereisnodoubtthatteenagerssometimeshaveconflictswi

ththeirparents,andIamnoexception.Threeyearsago,Ijoinedtheschoolbasketballclubbutmyparentstoldmetoquit,arguingthatmytimes

houldbespentnowherebutinstudying.Thisreallyangeredmeandwequarrelledviolently.Frustrated,Iturnedtomyheadteacherandheoffere

dmemanyinsights.Inspiredbyhim,Iconversedwithmyparentssincerely,andwestraightenedthematterout.Ipromisedtostrikeabalancebetweenstudyandpla

yandtheypermittedmetopursuemyhobby.Eventually,basketballdidn’taffectmystudy.Instead,itenabledmetobettermana

gemytime.