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专题三求助信应用文+读后续写应用文写作假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教MissEvans写一封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;3.商定时间、地点。注意:写作词数应为80左右。【写作示例】Step1
:精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称、第二人称时态一般现在时和现在完成时段落布局第1段(开门见山)说明写信目的第2段(说明求助事项)介绍短剧情节,所求助的问题尾段(巧妙收尾)约定见面地点、时间,表达感激之情Step2:字斟句酌巧妙润色1.我写信是想就我们改编自课
本的一个剧本征求您的意见。①高级词汇:______________________________adaptedfromourtextbook.②高级句式(利用定语从句升级):________________________________________.2.我们不确定情
节是否完整,我们也想知道如何使用适当的语气来完美地说台词。①高级词汇和句式(宾语从句):____________________.Wearealsowondering________________________.②高级句式(利用“notonly...butalso...”合并两句):__
___________________________.③高级句式(利用倒装句升级):____________________________________________.Step3:衔接过渡斐然成篇____________________
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________________________________读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ididn'trealizethatatrulyprofoundmome
ntwasheadingmywayonehumiddayinJulywhenmycarbrokedowninStJoseph,Michigan.Atthatminute,intheparkinglotofthemotel,Iwantedtocry.Iwantedtoscre
am.That'swhenIstartedtalkingtoanolderwomanwhosatafewchairsawayfromme.“Soyou'rehavingsomerepairsdone?”sheaskedwithc
oncerninhervoice.Iguessedshecouldseethefrustrationonmyface.“Yes,”Isaidwithasigh.“Mycarcouldn'tstart.Iha
venoideaaboutwhathappened.”ItbegannormallyasthiskindladyandIstartedtotalk.Sheaskedmetotellheraboutwhathappenedtomycar.Idid,andthenwesettledintocom
fortable,casualconversation.Wetalkedaboutmytrip,herhome,herhusbandretiring,myparentsretiring.“Yourcarisready,ma'am,”saidthese
rvicemanagertothewoman.“Oh,thankyou,”shesaid.ShestoodupandIsmiledather.Shewishedmeluckasshegatheredherpurseandcarkeysfromtheseatnexttoher.Butthen
asshewasabouttowalkaway,shehesitatedandthenturnedbacktome.“Youknow,Ihavetotellyousomething,”shesaid,andIcouldseeaseriousexpressiononhe
rface.“Mydaughterdiedafewyearsago.It'ssohardevennowtodojustthesimplethings,”sheswallowedhard,exhaleddeeplyandwenton.“ButeverynowandthenI
meetsomeonewhoremindsmeofmydaughter,andtoday,youremindmesomuchofher.”Shesmiledwithtearsinhereyesandwenton,“Ibelievethatsometimespe
oplecometomylifetoremindmeofherandtoshowmethatmydaughterisstillwithmeandthatIcangetthroughthis.I'vesoenjoyedtalkingt
oyoutoday.”Agenuinesmilecoveredherface.“WhenyougethomeIwantyoutohugyourparents.Theyareveryluckytohaveyou.”注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。Ifelttearsofmyownwellingupinmyeyes.______________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________Afewhourslater,Ipulledintothedrivewayatmyparents'hou
se.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________【词汇积累】情感类concer
nn.担忧;关心frustrationn.沮丧;挫败动作类screamv.尖叫remindv.提醒;使想起【发散思维】1.Howdidtheauthorfeelafterhearingthewoman'swords?_____________________________________
___________________________________2.Whatdidtheauthordotothewoman?___________________________________
_____________________________________3.Whatdidtheauthordowhenshesawherparents?_____________________________________________________________________
___4.Howdidtheauthor'sparentsfeel?________________________________________________________________________5
.Whatlessondidtheauthorlearnfromtheexperience?________________________________________________________________________