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专题三求助信应用文＋读后续写应用文写作假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教MissEvans写一封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1．剧情简介；2．指导内容；3．商定时间、地点。注意：写作词数应为80左右。【写作示例】Step1：精准审题

谋篇布局人称第一人称、第二人称时态一般现在时和现在完成时段落布局第1段(开门见山)说明写信目的第2段(说明求助事项)介绍短剧情节，所求助的问题尾段(巧妙收尾)约定见面地点、时间，表达感激之情Step2：字斟句酌巧妙润色1．我写信是想就我们改编自课本的一个剧本征求您的意见。①高级词汇：_______

_______________________adaptedfromourtextbook.②高级句式(利用定语从句升级)：______________________________________．2．我们不确定情节是否完整，我们也想知道如何使用适当

的语气来完美地说台词。①高级词汇和句式(宾语从句)：____________________.Wearealsowondering________________________．②高级句式(利用“notonly...butalso...”合并两句)：_______

________________________．③高级句式(利用倒装句升级)：____________________________________________．Step3：衔接过渡斐然成篇________________

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____________________________________________读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Ididn'trealizethatatrulyprof

oundmomentwasheadingmywayonehumiddayinJulywhenmycarbrokedowninStJoseph,Michigan.Atthatminute,intheparkinglotofthemotel

,Iwantedtocry.Iwantedtoscream.That'swhenIstartedtalkingtoanolderwomanwhosatafewchairsawayfromme.“Soyou'rehavingsomerepairsdone？”sheas

kedwithconcerninhervoice.Iguessedshecouldseethefrustrationonmyface.“Yes，”Isaidwithasigh.“Mycarcouldn'tstar

t.Ihavenoideaaboutwhathappened.”ItbegannormallyasthiskindladyandIstartedtotalk.Sheaskedmetotellheraboutwhathappenedtomycar.Idid,a

ndthenwesettledintocomfortable,casualconversation.Wetalkedaboutmytrip,herhome,herhusbandretiring,myparentsretiring.“Your

carisready,ma'am，”saidtheservicemanagertothewoman.“Oh,thankyou，”shesaid.ShestoodupandIsmiledather.Shewishedmeluckasshegatheredherpurs

eandcarkeysfromtheseatnexttoher.Butthenasshewasabouttowalkaway,shehesitatedandthenturnedbacktome.“Youknow,Ihavetotellyousom

ething，”shesaid,andIcouldseeaseriousexpressiononherface.“Mydaughterdiedafewyearsago.It'ssohardevennowtodoj

ustthesimplethings，”sheswallowedhard,exhaleddeeplyandwenton.“ButeverynowandthenImeetsomeonewhoremindsmeofmydaughter,andtoday,youre

mindmesomuchofher.”Shesmiledwithtearsinhereyesandwenton,“Ibelievethatsometimespeoplecometomylifetoremindmeo

fherandtoshowmethatmydaughterisstillwithmeandthatIcangetthroughthis.I'vesoenjoyedtalkingtoyoutoday.”Agenuinesmilec

overedherface.“WhenyougethomeIwantyoutohugyourparents.Theyareveryluckytohaveyou.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作

答。Ifelttearsofmyownwellingupinmyeyes.__________________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________________Afewhourslater,Ipulledinto

thedrivewayatmyparents'house._______________________________________________________________________________

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______【词汇积累】情感类concernn.担忧；关心frustrationn.沮丧；挫败动作类screamv.尖叫remindv.提醒；使想起【发散思维】1．Howdidtheauthorfeelafterhea

ringthewoman'swords?________________________________________________________________________2．Whatdidtheaut

hordotothewoman?________________________________________________________________________3．Whatdidtheauthordowhenshesawherparents?_______

_________________________________________________________________4．Howdidtheauthor'sparentsfeel?___________________________________

_____________________________________5．Whatlessondidtheauthorlearnfromtheexperience?_____________________________________________

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