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专题三求助信应用文＋读后续写应用文写作假定你是李华，你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。请你给外教MissEvans写一封邮件，请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1．剧情简介；2．指导内容；3．商定时间、地点。注意：写

作词数应为80左右。【写作示例】Step1：精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称、第二人称时态一般现在时和现在完成时段落布局第1段(开门见山)说明写信目的第2段(说明求助事项)介绍短剧情节，所求助的问题尾段(巧妙收尾)约定见面地点、时间，表达感激之情Step2：字斟句酌巧妙润色1．我写信

是想就我们改编自课本的一个剧本征求您的意见。①高级词汇：______________________________adaptedfromourtextbook.②高级句式(利用定语从句升级)：______

________________________________．2．我们不确定情节是否完整，我们也想知道如何使用适当的语气来完美地说台词。①高级词汇和句式(宾语从句)：____________________.Wearealsowon

dering________________________．②高级句式(利用“notonly...butalso...”合并两句)：_______________________________．③高级句式(利用倒装句升级)：_______________

_____________________________．Step3：衔接过渡斐然成篇____________________________________________________________________________________________

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____________________________________________________________________________________读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇

完整的短文。Ididn'trealizethatatrulyprofoundmomentwasheadingmywayonehumiddayinJulywhenmycarbrokedowninStJoseph,Michig

an.Atthatminute,intheparkinglotofthemotel,Iwantedtocry.Iwantedtoscream.That'swhenIstartedtalkingtoanolderwoma

nwhosatafewchairsawayfromme.“Soyou'rehavingsomerepairsdone？”sheaskedwithconcerninhervoice.Iguessedshecouldse

ethefrustrationonmyface.“Yes，”Isaidwithasigh.“Mycarcouldn'tstart.Ihavenoideaaboutwhathappened.”ItbegannormallyasthiskindladyandIstartedtotalk.Sh

easkedmetotellheraboutwhathappenedtomycar.Idid,andthenwesettledintocomfortable,casualconversation.Wetalkedaboutmytrip,herhome,herhusbandretir

ing,myparentsretiring.“Yourcarisready,ma'am，”saidtheservicemanagertothewoman.“Oh,thankyou，”shesaid.Shestoodupand

Ismiledather.Shewishedmeluckasshegatheredherpurseandcarkeysfromtheseatnexttoher.Butthenasshewasabouttowalkaway,shehesitate

dandthenturnedbacktome.“Youknow,Ihavetotellyousomething，”shesaid,andIcouldseeaseriousexpressiononherface.“Mydaughterdieda

fewyearsago.It'ssohardevennowtodojustthesimplethings，”sheswallowedhard,exhaleddeeplyandwenton.“Butever

ynowandthenImeetsomeonewhoremindsmeofmydaughter,andtoday,youremindmesomuchofher.”Shesmiledwithtearsinhereyesandwenton,“Ibelievethatsometimes

peoplecometomylifetoremindmeofherandtoshowmethatmydaughterisstillwithmeandthatIcangetthroughthis.I'vesoenjoyedtalkingtoyoutoday.”

Agenuinesmilecoveredherface.“WhenyougethomeIwantyoutohugyourparents.Theyareveryluckytohaveyou.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。

Ifelttearsofmyownwellingupinmyeyes.________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afewhourslater,Ipulledintothedrivewa

yatmyparents'house.___________________________________________________________________________________

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________________________________________________________________________________【词汇积累】情感类concernn.担忧

；关心frustrationn.沮丧；挫败动作类screamv.尖叫remindv.提醒；使想起【发散思维】1．Howdidtheauthorfeelafterhearingthewoman'swords?_________________

_______________________________________________________2．Whatdidtheauthordotothewoman?_____________________________________________________

___________________3．Whatdidtheauthordowhenshesawherparents?____________________________________________________________

____________4．Howdidtheauthor'sparentsfeel?________________________________________________________________________5．Whatlessondidth

eauthorlearnfromtheexperience?________________________________________________________________________