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,请将答题卡交回。第一部分阅读(共两节,满分50分)第一节(共15小题;每小题2.5分,满分37.5分)阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。A2024InternationalYouthJournalismC
ontestThe2024InternationalYouthJournalismContest,sponsoredbyYouthJournalismInternational,promotesafreeyouthpressbyrecognizingexceptionalworkinE
nglishbystudentreporters.●CategoriesStudentJournalistOfTheYearTorecognizeexceptionalworkinjournalismbyastudentjournalist.Jou
rnalismEducatorOfTheYearTohonorateacherwhoinspiresstudentsandbringsouttheverybestinthem.CourageInJournalis
mAwardTorecognizeanindividualyouthjournalistwhoshowedparticularcourageinpursuingastorydespitedanger,officialroadblocks,orotherunu
sualobstacles.JacintaMarieBunnellAwardTohonoranindividualwhogavevoicetoanimportantissueinasingleopinionpieceoraseriesofopinionpi
ecesdevotedtothesametopic.●ImportantNoticeWerequirethatallentriesbeaccessibleonline.Youmustincludeapubliclinktoeveryentry
2024.9yousubmit,whichshouldbeaccessibletoanyonewhohasthelink.Journalistswhomeetthecriteriaofbeing19yearsoldoryounge
randnotemployedprofessionallyatthetimeofpublicationarequalifiedtoparticipatefromanycountry.●AdmissionFeeAfeeof$35isrequired
foreachcategoryyouenter.However,ifthefeepresentsafinancialhardship,youmayapplyforanexemption(免除),whichareli
mitedtotwoentriesperparticipant.21.Whatistheaimofthecontestconcerningstudentreporters?A.Tohelpexploretheirowntalents.B.Toadvocatet
heirfreeexpressions.C.Tocollecttheiroutstandingworks.D.Toincreasetheirimpactinthefield.22.Whichawardhonor
sayoungjournalistforbringingattentiontoasignificantproblem?A.StudentJournalistOfTheYear.B.JournalismE
ducatorOfTheYear.C.CourageInJournalismAward.D.JacintaMarieBunnellAward.23.Whichofthefollowingisarequirementtoenterthecompetition?
A.Beingagrown-upamateurjournalist.B.Makingyourentriesavailableonline.C.Applyingfornomorethantwoentries.D.Paying$35fory
ourcompetitiveevent.BBakingloverandherbakerywith“silent”staffersSomepeoplemayopenabakerytoturntheirpassionintoaprofession.Someopenabakerytoreal
izetheirchildhooddream.ForZhengXiaoyan,founderofSilentBreadTree,themainreasonshechosetodosoislesscommon.Theideatoo
penabakeryemergedwhenZhenglearnedfromasilentfriendinabakingcourseaboutthedifficultiestheyfaceinjobhunting.Shebegantowonderwhatshecoulddofor
them,untilshegotinspirationfromthesuccessofabakeryinChangsha,whichisrunbyaGermancouplethathiressilentpeople.“IdecidedthatIwouldalsoopenabakeryl
iketheirstohelpsomesilentpeopleinneed,”toldZheng.“Andthat’swhyInamedit‘SilentBreadTree’.Hopefullythejo
bsprovidedherecanhelpthesilentpeoplefeedthemselves,justlikebreadtreesfeedpeoplewiththeirbread-likefruit,”Zhengadded.Thebakery
has16employees,sixofwhomarehearingandspeech-impaired(有…障碍的).Theprinciplehereistotreatallstaffsinthesamewaywhereverpossible,andavoidsignsindicat
ingwhichstaffmembersaredifferent.“Whenweaskedwhethertoputthewords‘Patmeifyouneedhelp’onthebackoftheiruniform,oursilentstaffssaid‘No’.Thatwaswhe
nIrealizedthattheyjustdon’twantotherstoknowthey’redifferent,”Zhengrecalled.Althoughknowingwhatshecoulddoforthesilentcommunityisveryl
imited,Zhengsaidtheeffortsthesilentstaffshavemadetokeepthebakeryrunningkeepinspiringhertodoevenmore.Foreveryproductsold,thebakerydonates0.01yuantohel
pprovideartificialcochleaimplants(人工耳蜗)tothehearingandspeech-impairedchildreninruralareas.“Ifhearing-im
pairedchildrencouldhaveartificialcochleaeimplantsatanearlyage,theirlivescouldbecompletelytransformed.Theywouldbeabletolivelikepe
oplewithnodifficultiesinhearing,”saidZheng.24.WhydidZhengopenthebakery?A.Toofferthesilentpeoplejobs.B.Tomake
herdreamcometrue.C.Toturnherhobbyintoacareer.D.TolearnfromtheGermancouple.25.Whatisparagraph3mainlyabou
t?A.Thestoryaboutthebreadtree.B.Themeaningofthebakeryname.C.Zheng’sexpectationofthefuture.D.Zheng’ssatisfact
ionwithherstore.26.Whatcanwelearnaboutthesilentstaffsfromparagraph4?A.Theyvalueequaltreatment.B.Theyenjoygreatsocialrespect.C.Theyconsidercu
stomersdisturbing.D.Theyhavepoorcommunicationskills.27.WhichwordbestdescribesZheng?A.Confident.B.Optimistic.C.Broad-minded
.D.Kind-hearted.CFormanyyearsresearchersfocusedonwhatpeopleknowaboutscience,thinkingthat“Toknowscienceistoloveit.”Butdope
oplewhothinktheyknowscienceactuallyknowscience?AnewstudyledbyCristinaFonsecaoftheGeneticsSociety,LaurenceHurstofthe
MilnerCentreforEvolution(进化)revealsthatpeoplewithstrongattitudestendtobelievetheyunderstandscience,whileneutrals(中立者)arelesscertain.Absoluteatt
itudes,bothforandagainst,buildonhighself-confidenceinknowledgeaboutscience.Thestudyperformedasurveyofover2,000UKadults,askingthembothaboutt
heirattitudestoscienceandtheirbeliefintheirownunderstanding.Questionsfocusedongenetic(基因的)science,forexample,“Howwouldyour
ateyourunderstandingofwhatthetermDNAmeans?”Allindividualswerescoredfromzero(theyknowtheyhavenounderstanding)toone(theyarec
onfidentthattheyunderstand).Theresultssuggestthatthoseattheattitudinalextremes—bothstronglysupportiveandfirmlyop
posing—haveveryhighself-beliefintheirowncomprehension,whilethoseansweringneutrallydonot.Psychologically,th
eteamsuggests,thismakessense:toholdastrongopinionyouneedtostronglybelieveinthecorrectnessofyourinterpretationof
thebasicfacts.Resultsofpreviousstudiesalsoindicatethatthosemoreacceptingofsciencebothbelievetheyunderstanditandscorew
ellonthetextbookfact(true/false)questions.Bycontrast,peoplewithstrongnegativeattitudestosciencetendtobeoverconfidentabouttheirlevelofunder
standing.WhetheritbeclimatechangeorGMfoods,importantsciencecaninspirestrongandopposingattitudes.Understandinghowtocommunicatesciencerequiresana
warenessofwhypeoplemayholdsuchdifferentattitudestoit.Whenitwasthoughtthatwhatmatteredmostforscientificliteracywasscientifickno
wledge,sciencecommunicationfocusedonpassinginformationfromscientiststothepublic.However,thisapproachmaynotbe
successful,andinsomecasescanhaveadverseeffects.Workingtoaddressthegapbetweenwhatpeopleknowandwhattheybelieveth
eyknowmaybeabetterstrategy.28.Whatisthenewstudymainlyabout?A.Anassessmentofpeople’sinterestingenetic
s.B.Asurveyofvariousattitudestowardsevolution.C.Areportofpeople’sgeneralknowledgeofscience.D.Ananalysisoffactorsonpeople’sbeliefinscience.29.Whyd
oestheauthormentionpreviousstudiesinparagraph3?A.Tosupportthefindingsofthestudy.B.Toclarifytheconceptofconfidence.C.Tostresst
heimportanceofbasicfacts.D.Tocomparedifferentresearchmethods.30.Whatdoestheunderlinedword“adverse”meaninthelastparagrap
h?A.Random.B.Negative.C.Indirect.D.Favorable.31.Asforsciencecommunication,whichwouldtheauthoragreewith?A.Itshouldhelppeopleboostconfiden
ce.B.Itshouldfocusonscientificknowledge.C.Itshouldinspirepeopletoscorewellintests.D.Itshouldemphasizeobjectiveawarenessofoneself.DWhetherplayi
ngtricksorholdingfuneralsinthewild,crowshavesurprisedthepublicwiththeirunexpectedcapabilities.Buttheir“intelligence”know
snobounds.AnewstudypublishedinCurrentBiologyrevealedforthefirsttimethatcrowscanusestatisticallogictosolveprobl
ems.Crowshavealargebrainfortheirsizeandaparticularlynoticeableforebrain,associatedwithstatisticalandanalyticalreasoninginhumans.“Inourlab,crows
haveshowncomplicatednumericalcompetenceandcarefulconsiderationduringdecision-making,”saidDr.MelissaJo
hnston,afellowattheUniversityofTübingen.Inherrecentwork,Johnstonandherteampushedtheseabilitiestoanewextreme,test
ingstatisticalreasoning.Intheexperiment,twocrowswerefirsttrainedtopeck(啄)atvariousimagesontouchscreenstoearnfoodtreats;andgraduall
ytheyhadtochoosebetweentwooftheseimages,eachcorrespondingtoadifferentrewardprobability.“Crowsweretaskedwithlearningratherabstractquant
itiesandthenapplyingthatcombinationofinformationinarewardmaximizingway,”Johnstondetailed.Over10daysoftrainingand5,000trials,th
etwocrowsmanagedtopickthehigherprobabilityofreward,showingtheirabilitytousestatisticalinference.Toresearchers’muchsurpris
e,evenafteramonthwithouttraining,thecrowsstillperformwelleverytime.Statisticalreasoninginvolvesusinglimitedinformationaboutasituationtodrawc
onclusionsandmakedecisions.Peopleunknowinglyusesuchcognitiveabilityeveryday.Whenweselectcafesforsocialmeetups,ourbrainsautomaticallyweighco
llectedstatisticsfrompastobservationsandfavortheonemorecapableofmeetingneeds.Similarly,crowsrememberedandanalyzedtheconnectionsbetweentheim
agesandtherewardprobabilitiestomakethemselvesgetthemosttreatspossible.Crowsoncesymbolizedmisfortuneanddeath,causingthemdislikede
venkilledbypeople.Actually,theyareamongthefewanimalstoadapttourbanizationsuccessfullyduetounderestimatedintelligence.“Ithinkt
hesestudiesdohelpchangepublicviewsandimproveourrelationshipwiththeselovelyanimals,”Johnstonstated.32.Whatmakescrows’intelligencepossible?
A.Theirlimitlessabilitiesoftricks.B.Theirsocialleaninginthewild.C.Theirphysicalstructureofbrains.D.Theirtrainingreceivedinthela
b.33.Whichofthefollowingbestdescribestheresearchprocessinparagraph3?A.Instruct,task,andretest.B.Train,perfo
rm,andrecord.C.Assume,prove,andreflect.D.Prepare,teach,andexamine.34.Howdoestheauthorexplainstatisticalinferenceinparagraph4?A.Bysharinga
personalexperience.B.Byquotingapreviousstudy.C.Bymakingadetailedcomparison.D.Byusingacommonexample.35.Whatcanbeasuitabletitleforthetext?A.FoodPrizeC
ompetition:CrowsChoosingRewards.B.UrbanBirdSurvivalStrategies:LivingwithPeople.C.BeyondTricks:SurpriseofCrows’StatisticalReaso
ning.D.AnimalBehaviorStudy:TrainingCrowsinExperiments.第二节(共5小题;每小题2.5分,满分12.5分)阅读下面短文,从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的
最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。Thisissomethingthatallofushavenoticedcountlesstimesinourdailylives.Whetheryou’retryingtoreadthe
fineprintinacommercialortryingtomakeoutaperson’sfacefromadistance—italwayshelpstoseebetterwhenyousquint(眯起)youreyes.36There’sacommo
nassumptionthatyou’readdingmuchstresstoyoureyeballsbysqueezingthemtomakethemworkbetter.37Ifyouthinkforawhile,you’llfindsquintin
gisadifferentmatter.Ifsquintingmeantmakingyoureyesbecomestressballs,we’dallbeinalotoftrouble.38Whenlighthitsanobject,itbo
uncesoffitssurfaceandentersoureyes.Thelighttravelsthroughtheeyelens(晶状体).Thelensthenfocusesthelightrays,whichfallontheretina(视网膜)
.Achemicalpresentintheretinaturnslightintoelectricsignals,whicharethentransmittedtothebrain.Thebrainprocessesthesignalsandultimatelyallowsustos
eestuff.Theactofsquinting,quiteobviously,alterstheshapeofthespacethroughwhichlightpasses,whichhelpsusformaclearimageontheretina
.What’smore,lightfromdifferentdirectionsentersandissubsequentlyperceivedbytheeye.39However,whenyou’retryingtofocusonsomething,ifthere’slightenteringf
rommultipledirections,thelenswillbeoverloaded.Bysquinting,focusinglightraysbecomesmoreprecise.Squintingdoesnotdamageyoureyesight.40
It’sonethingtooccasionallysquintinordertomakeoutsomethingfaraway.Butifyoufindyourselfdoingitallthetime,gettingyoureyestestedshou
ldbeyourfocus.A.Actually,that’snotexactlythecase.B.Hasiteveroccurredtoyouwhythishappens?C.Squintingdoestwomajorthingstoimprov
eourvision.D.However,doingitforlongperiodsoftimecanleadtodryeyes.E.Normally,thisisagreatthing,asitfeedsyoursituati
onalawareness.F.Anumberofbiologicalcomponentsactuallyconstitutethehumaneye.G.Beforerevealingthesecretbehindit,let
’slearnabouthowweseethings.第二部分语言运用(共两节,满分30分)第一节(共15小题;每小题1分,满分15分)阅读下面短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的
最佳选项。IrememberamomentwhenIfeltlikeeverythingwasfallingapart.Atfifteenyearsold,Ifoundmyselfinahospitalbed,unable
to41.Itwasaresultofanaccidentduringafishingtripwithafriend.My42ofbecominganathletewasbrokenalongwithmybackbone.Ipushed
awaymylovedonesandstruggledto43mynewreality.Returninghome,Ifacedthechallengeofgettingaroundinawheelchair.Atfirst,Iletmy44getintheway,refusingt
oaskforhelpevenwhenit45missingoutonexperiencesIenjoyed.Ilaterrealizedthataccepting46fromotherswasnotasignofweakness
butanecessarysteptowards47myindependenceandhappiness.AturningpointcamewhenImetafriendwho48metotrywheelchairsports.I4
9intabletennisandparticipatedintheWheelchairGamesinMontreal,whereIwitnessedtheincredible50oftheathletes.Oneincidentthathighligh
tedthedailyobstaclesfacedbydisabledpeopleoccurredwhenIencounteredagirlstrugglingtojogupahill.Ididn’tletherstrugglesdisc
ourageme.52,Iusedhumortoovercomethesituationandchallengenegativeattitude.Lookingback,Irealizethatthe54wasnottheendofmylifebutthebeginningofa
nincredibleone.Iam55forthesupportthathavecomemyway.AsIcontinuetoworktowardsmakingadifference,Ibelievethatmybestdayisyettoc
ome.260w41.A.breatheB.liveC.thinkD.move42.A.memoryB.dreamC.promiseD.mission43.A.relyonB.turndownC.adjusttoD.figureout44.
A.regretB.prideC.desireD.envy45.A.meantB.requiredC.allowedD.deserved46.A.sympathyB.instructionC.praiseD
.assistance47.A.transformingB.rewardingC.regainingD.sacrificing48.A.motivatedB.offeredC.expectedD.requested49.A.volunteeredB.excell
edC.improvedD.struggled50.A.patienceB.integrityC.courageD.endurance51.A.superB.normalC.disabledD.talented52.A.RatherB.MoreoverC.Therefore
D.However53.A.actionsB.attitudesC.outcomesD.approaches54.A.adventureB.conflictC.accidentD.obstacle55.
A.honoredB.admiredC.hopefulD.grateful第二节(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。OpenAIrelease
ditsfirstlarge-scaletext-to-videomodelSoraonFriday,February16.Itcangenerateone-minute-longhigh-definitionvideosbasedonuser
inputinspires.56itsfunctionsarenotnewtoartificialintelligencemodels,Sorahasmadeamajorstepforward.OpenAIclaimedin57n
ewsreleasethatSorawillbecomeanimportantmilestoneinachievingArtificialGeneralIntelligence.YethoweverrealisticSoravideosmayappear,theyarestilldigitalsi
mulationsandnotreal58(film)reality.ThedevelopmentofAI-createdvideosleadtoaphenomenoncalled“Post-truth”,59(refe
r)toaculturalclimateinwhichobjectivefactsarelessinfluentialinshapingpublicopinionthanappealstoemotionandpersonalbelief.ThebirthofSoravide
osmightmakethesituation60(bad).BeforepopularizingsuchnewtechnologyasSora,thechallengesshouldbeassesseda
ndpreparedforinadvance.Forinstance,thegovernmentcouldmakeitcompulsoryforinformationproviders61(identify)theirprovidedinformation.6
2(addition),theemergenceofSoramayleadtosignificantjoblossesinrelatedindustriessuchasfilmandtelevision,63isasignificantsocialriskthatc
annotbeignored.Therehavealreadybeennumerousin-depthstudiesonthepotentialjoblossescausedbythelarge-scaleapplicationofAI
,andmanyasolution64(propose),includingslowingdownthepaceofAItechnologyapplication,assistinginreemployment,andimposingAI65(tax).Now,theovernight
popularityofSoraremindspeoplethatitistimetoaccelerate,refineandimplementthesemeasures.第三部分写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节应用文写作(满分15分)校英文报“学习科学家精神”
栏目征稿。请你就你最欣赏的名言“IfIhaveseenfurther,itisbystandingontheshouldersofgiants.”ByIsaacNewton写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.你欣赏
的原因;2.你从中学到什么?注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。AquoteIadmirefromthefamousscientistIsaacNewton第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文
。Jack’sgrandfatherlivedinthecountryside.Onesummerholiday,hewenttovisithisgrandfather,withwhomheplayedallth
etime.Onedayhesuddenlysaidtohisgrandfather,“WhenIgrowup,Iwanttobecomeasuccessfulman.Canyoutellmesomewayst
obesuccessful?”SeeingJack’sinnocenteyes,thegrandfathernodded.However,withoutsayinganything,hetookJacktoanearbynursery.Fromthenursery,his
grandpaboughttwosmallplantsandcamebackhome.Thenheplantedoneplantinapotandkeptitinsidethehouseandplantedtheotheroutsidethehouse.Afterf
inishingplanting,heaskedJack,“Whichofthesetwoplantsdoyouthinkwillgrowbetterinthefuture?”Jackkeptthinkingforsometimeandthensaid,“Thatplantinsi
dethehousewillgrowbetterbecauseitissafefromeverydangerwhiletheplantoutsideisatriskofmanythingslikestr
ongsunlight,storms,animalsandsoon.”Thegrandfathersmiledandsaid,“Let’sseewhatwillhappeninthefuture.”AfterthatJackleftwithhisparents.Fouryearslater,Jac
kcamebacktovisithisgrandfatheragain.Uponseeinghisgrandfather,Jacksaid,“Grandpa,lasttimeIaskedyousomewaystobesuccessful,butyoudidn
ottellmeanything.Thistimeyouhavetotellme.”Thegrandfathersmiledandsaid,“Sure,butfirst,let’stakealookattheplant
sthatweboughtafewyearsago.”Sayingthis,hetookJacktotheplacewherehehadplantedthesmallplantinapot.Jackfoundtheplanthadturnedintoatree.Thenthegr
andfathertookJacktolookattheplantwhichtheyhadplantedoutside.Therestoodahugetree.Itsbranchesspreadfar
andwide,providingshadetopassers-by.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。ThegrandfatherlookedatJackandasked,“Tellme
whichplantgrewbetter?”Jacknodded,thegrandfathercontinuedhiswords.2025届罗湖区高三第一次模拟考试答案英语2024.9.621-23BDB24-27ABAD28-31DABD32-35CADC36-40BAGED41-4
5DBCBA46-50DCABD51-55CAorDBCD56.While/Although/Though57.a58.filmed59.referring60.worse61.toidentify62.Additionally
63.which64.hasbeenproposed65.taxesOnepossibleversionAquoteIadmirefromthefamousscientistIsaacNewtonMyfavoritequotefromIsaacNew
ton,“IfIhaveseenfurther,itisbystandingontheshouldersofgiants,”captivatesmedeeply.Iadmireitbecauseitteachesushumility.Newtonrecognizest
hateverygreatleapforwardofhisownisbuiltuponthefoundationslaidbythosewhocamebefore,thegiantsofthepast.Thishumilityinspiresme
toseekknowledgewithanopenmindandgratitude.Fromthisquote,I'velearnedtheimportanceofbuildingupontheachieveme
ntsofothers.Inmystudies,Istrivetointegratethewisdomofmyteachers,peers,andthescientificcommunity.Bystandingont
hese“shoulders,”Ihopetocontributemyowninsightsandfurtherthequestforknowledge.应用文写作评分标准一、评分原则1.本题总分为15分,按5个档次进行评分。2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言的整体情况初步确定其所属档次,然后
以该档次的要求来综合衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.评分时,应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑,具体为:(1)对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。(2)应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性、准确性和恰
当性。(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。4.评分时还应注意:(1)词数少于60的,酌情扣分。(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。(3)如书写较差,以至影响交际,酌情扣分。二、
各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(13~15分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。—覆盖了所有内容要点,表述清楚、合理。—使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有个别小错,但完全不影响理解。—有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构清晰,意义连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四
档(10~12分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。—覆盖了所有内容要点,表述比较清楚、合理。—使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有些许错误,但不影响理解。—比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构比较清晰,意义比较连贯。达到了预期
的写作目的。第三档(7~9分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。—覆盖了大部分内容要点,有个别地方表述不够清楚、合理。—使用了简单的词汇和语法结构,有一些错误或不恰当之处,但基本不影响理解。—基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构基本清晰,意义基本连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期
的写作目的。第二档(4~6分)未适当完成试题规定的任务。—遗漏或未清楚表述一些内容要点,或一些内容与写作目的不相关。—所使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多,影响理解。—几乎不能有效地使用语句间衔接
手段,全文结构不够清晰,意义不够连贯。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(1~3分)未完成试题规定的任务。—遗漏或未清楚表述大部分内容要点,或大部分内容与写作目的不相关。—所使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多,严重影响理解。—几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段
,全文结构不清晰,意义不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。零分未作答;未能传达给读者任何信息;内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。OnepossibleversionThegrandfatherlookedatJackandasked,“
Tellmewhichplantgrewbetter?”Jackpointedatthehugetreestandingoutsidewithaconfusedlook.Seeingtheboy’sinnocenteyesandsensinghisuncertainty,thegrandfat
herexplainedthatwhiletheplantoutsidehadtofacemanychallenges,overcomingthesedifficultiesultimatelymadeitstronger.Withasmile,headded,“Ino
rdertofightagainstrainstorms,itneededtostandfirm;tosurvivedroughts,itshouldforceitselftorootindepth.Asaresult,itgrewstrongandresilient,capa
bleofenduringanything.Isn’titimpressive?”(83words)Jacknodded,thegrandfathercontinuedhiswords.“Fouryear
sago,youaskedmeaboutwaystobesuccessful.Now,thetreeistheanswer,”thegrandfathersaid.AsJackgazedatthehugetreewithitsbranch
esspreadingfarandwideandprovidingshadetopassers-by,hisgrandfatherelaboratedthatbeingreadytofacethisworlddespiteallthe
dangersmeantnogoalwasimpossibletoachieve.HethenpattedJackontheshoulder,offeringthiswisdom,“Neverthinkofp
roblemsastroubles;instead,viewthemasstepstowardspersonalgrowth.”Withthisnewfoundinsight,Jackunderstoodthetruemeaningofsuccess.(95
words)读后续写评分标准:一、评分标准和原则读后续写综合考查学生的阅读能力、书面表达能力以及思维和学习能力。评价学生作文时,应遵循以下评分标准:1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次进行评分。2.评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言的整体情况初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量
,确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.评分时,应根据内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个维度,考虑以下四个方面:(1)续写内容的完整性以及与所给短文的融洽度;(2)各段内容与所给段落开头语的衔接程度;(3)应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性、准确性和恰当性
;(4)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。4.评分时还应注意:(1)词数少于120的,酌情扣分。(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。(3)书写较差以致影响交际的,酌情扣分。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(21
~25分)—创造了丰富、合理的内容,富有逻辑性,续写完整,与原文情境融洽度高。—使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有个别小错,但完全不影响理解。—有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构清晰,意义连贯。第四档(16~20分)—创造了比较丰富、合理
的内容,比较有逻辑性,续写比较完整,与原文情境融洽度较高。—使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有些许错误,但不影响理解。—比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构比较清晰,意义比较连贯。第三档(11~15分)—创造了基本合理的内容,有一定的逻辑性,续写基本完整,与原文情境相关
。—使用了简单的词汇和语法结构,有一些错误或不恰当之处,但基本不影响理解。—基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构基本清晰,意义基本连贯。第二档(6~10分)—内容或逻辑上有一些重大问题,续写不够完整,与原文情境
有一定程度脱节。—所使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多,影响理解。—未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不够清晰,意义不够连贯。第一档(1~5分)—内容或逻辑上有较多重大问题,或有部分内容抄自原文,续写不完整,与原文情境基本脱节。—所使用的词汇有限,
语法结构单调,错误很多,严重影响理解。—几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不清晰,意义不连贯。零分未作答;所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判;所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。部分解析【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文,主题语境是人与自我。文章讲述了作者在年轻时发生了一场意外
事故导致瘫痪,但在面对困境时,作者逐渐接受了他人的帮助,通过参加残疾人运动并克服困难,找到了新的生活方向和幸福。故事体现了面对逆境勇敢坚持的主题。【试题分析】41.答案D。解析:结合后文“Mydreamsofbecominga(n)...wasbrokenalongwithmybackbone”及
下一段“Ifacedthechallengeofgettingaroundinawheelchair”,可推知作者在医院床上无法动弹。move意为“移动”,符合文意,breathe意为“呼吸”,live意为“生活”,think意为“思考”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为D。42.答案B。解析
:结合后文“...becominganathletewasbrokenalongwithmybackbone”,可推知作者起初想成为一名运动员的梦想被摧毁了。dream意为“梦想”,memory意为“记忆”,promise意为“承诺”,mis
sion意为“使命”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为B。43.答案C。解析:结合本句“pushedawaymylovedones”,可推知作者在经历挫折后推开自己所爱的人,并努力适应新的现实。adjustto意为“适应”,符合文意,relyon意为“依靠”,turndown意为“拒绝
”,figureout意为“弄清楚”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为C。44.答案B。解析:结合句意“Atfirst,Iletmy...getintheway,refusingtoaskforhelp”可推知作者一开始让自己的骄傲成为障碍,拒绝寻求帮助。pride意为“骄傲”,符合文
意,regret意为“后悔”,desire意为“渴望”,envy意为“嫉妒”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为B。45.答案A。解析:结合句意“refusingtoaskforhelpevenwhenit...missingoutonexperiencesIe
njoyed”,可推知作者拒绝寻求帮助即使这意味着错过了自己喜欢的经历。meant意为“意味着”,符合文意,required意为“需要”,allowed意为“允许”,deserved意为“应得”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为A。46.答案D。解析:
结合句意“realizedthataccepting...fromotherswasnotasignofweakness”,可推知作者后来意识到接受别人的帮助不是软弱的表现。assistance意为“帮助”,符合文
意,sympathy意为“同情”,instruction意为“指导”,praise意为“赞美”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为D。47.答案C。解析:结合句意“anecessarysteptowards...myindependenceandhappiness”,可推知接受帮助是重新获得自立和幸
福的必要一步。regaining意为“重新获得”,符合文意,transforming意为“转变”,rewarding意为“奖励”,sacrificing意为“牺牲”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为C。48.答案A。解析:结合句意“At
urningpointcamewhenImetafriendwho...metotrywheelchairsports”,可推知作者遇到了一个朋友鼓励他尝试轮椅运动。motivated意为“激励”,符合文意,offered意为“主动提议”,expected意为“期望”,re
quested意为“请求”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为A。49.答案B。解析:结合句意“I...intabletennisandparticipatedintheWheelchairGamesinMontreal”,可推知作者在乒乓球项目上取
得了成功。excelled意为“取得成功”,符合文意,volunteered意为“自愿做”,improved意为“改进”,struggled意为“挣扎”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为B。50.订单D。解析:结合句意“whereIwitnessedtheincre
dible...oftheathletes”,可推知作者在蒙特利尔轮椅比赛上目睹了运动员们的不屈不挠。endurance意为“忍耐力”,符合文意,patience意为“耐心”,integrity意为“正直”,humor意为“幽默”,
均不符合文意。故正确答案为D。51.答案C。解析:结合全文及本句“...thedailyobstaclesfacedby...people...whenIencounteredagirlstrugglingtojogupahill”,可推知作者遇到一个女孩在爬坡时的挣扎
,意识到残障人士每天面临的困难。disabled意为“残疾的”,符合文意,weak意为“虚弱的”,normal意为“正常的”,talented意为“有天赋的”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为C。52..答案AorD。解析:结合句意“Ididn’tletherstru
gglesdiscourageme....Iusedhumor”,可推知作者没有因为她的挣扎而感到气馁,相反,作者用幽默克服了困境。rather意为“相反的是”,符合文意,however意为“然而”,也符合文意,可以接受,故也为答案,moreover意为“而且”,theref
ore意为“因此”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为A和D。53.答案B。解析:结合句意“Iusedhumortoovercomethesituationandchallengenegative...”,可
推知作者用幽默克服了负面态度。attitudes意为“态度”,符合文意,actions意为“行动”,outcomes意为“结果”,approaches意为“方法”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为B。54.答案C。解析:结合句意“Lookingback,Ir
ealizethatthe...wasnottheendofmylife”,可推知作者回顾过去认识到那个事故并不是生活的终结。accident意为“事故”,符合文意,conflict意为“冲突”,adventure意为“冒
险”,mistake意为“错误”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为C。55.答案D。解析:结合句意“Iam...forthesupportthathavecomemyway”,可推知作者对得到的支持心存感激。grateful意为“感激的”,符合文意,honored意为“荣幸的”,admired
意为“受人敬佩的”,hopeful意为“充满希望的”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为D。