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.考试结束后,请将答题卡交回。第一部分阅读(共两节,满分50分)第一节(共15小题;每小题2.5分,满分37.5分)阅读下列短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。A2024International
YouthJournalismContestThe2024InternationalYouthJournalismContest,sponsoredbyYouthJournalismInternational,promotesafree
youthpressbyrecognizingexceptionalworkinEnglishbystudentreporters.●CategoriesStudentJournalistOfTheYearTorecognizeexceptionalworkinjournalism
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nthem.CourageInJournalismAwardTorecognizeanindividualyouthjournalistwhoshowedparticularcourageinpursuingastorydespite
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helink.Journalistswhomeetthecriteriaofbeing19yearsoldoryoungerandnotemployedprofessionallyatthetimeofpublicatio
narequalifiedtoparticipatefromanycountry.●AdmissionFeeAfeeof$35isrequiredforeachcategoryyouenter.However,ifthefeepresentsafi
nancialhardship,youmayapplyforanexemption(免除),whicharelimitedtotwoentriesperparticipant.21.Whatistheaimofthecontestconc
erningstudentreporters?A.Tohelpexploretheirowntalents.B.Toadvocatetheirfreeexpressions.C.Tocollecttheiroutstan
dingworks.D.Toincreasetheirimpactinthefield.22.Whichawardhonorsayoungjournalistforbringingattentiontoasignificantproblem?A.StudentJournalis
tOfTheYear.B.JournalismEducatorOfTheYear.C.CourageInJournalismAward.D.JacintaMarieBunnellAward.23.Whichofthefol
lowingisarequirementtoenterthecompetition?A.Beingagrown-upamateurjournalist.B.Makingyourentriesavailableonline.C.Applyingfornomorethantwoentries.D.P
aying$35foryourcompetitiveevent.BBakingloverandherbakerywith“silent”staffersSomepeoplemayopenabakerytoturntheirpassionintoaprofession.Someopenaba
kerytorealizetheirchildhooddream.ForZhengXiaoyan,founderofSilentBreadTree,themainreasonshechosetodosoislesscommon.Theideatoopenabakeryemergedw
henZhenglearnedfromasilentfriendinabakingcourseaboutthedifficultiestheyfaceinjobhunting.Shebegantowonderwhatshecoulddoforth
em,untilshegotinspirationfromthesuccessofabakeryinChangsha,whichisrunbyaGermancouplethathiressilentpeople.“IdecidedthatIwouldalsoopenabak
eryliketheirstohelpsomesilentpeopleinneed,”toldZheng.“Andthat’swhyInamedit‘SilentBreadTree’.Hopefullythejobsprovidedherecanhelpt
hesilentpeoplefeedthemselves,justlikebreadtreesfeedpeoplewiththeirbread-likefruit,”Zhengadded.Thebak
eryhas16employees,sixofwhomarehearingandspeech-impaired(有…障碍的).Theprinciplehereistotreatallstaffsinthesamewaywhereverpossible,andavoidsign
sindicatingwhichstaffmembersaredifferent.“Whenweaskedwhethertoputthewords‘Patmeifyouneedhelp’onthebackoftheiruni
form,oursilentstaffssaid‘No’.ThatwaswhenIrealizedthattheyjustdon’twantotherstoknowthey’redifferent,”Zhengrecalled.Althoughknowingwhatshecould
doforthesilentcommunityisverylimited,Zhengsaidtheeffortsthesilentstaffshavemadetokeepthebakeryrunningkeepinspiringhertodoe
venmore.Foreveryproductsold,thebakerydonates0.01yuantohelpprovideartificialcochleaimplants(人工耳蜗)tothe
hearingandspeech-impairedchildreninruralareas.“Ifhearing-impairedchildrencouldhaveartificialcochleaeimplantsatanearly
age,theirlivescouldbecompletelytransformed.Theywouldbeabletolivelikepeoplewithnodifficultiesinhearing,”saidZheng.24.WhydidZhengopenthebaker
y?A.Toofferthesilentpeoplejobs.B.Tomakeherdreamcometrue.C.Toturnherhobbyintoacareer.D.TolearnfromtheGermancou
ple.25.Whatisparagraph3mainlyabout?A.Thestoryaboutthebreadtree.B.Themeaningofthebakeryname.C.Zheng’sexpectationofthefuture.D.Zheng’ssatisfaction
withherstore.26.Whatcanwelearnaboutthesilentstaffsfromparagraph4?A.Theyvalueequaltreatment.B.Theyenjoy
greatsocialrespect.C.Theyconsidercustomersdisturbing.D.Theyhavepoorcommunicationskills.27.Whichwordbestdescri
besZheng?A.Confident.B.Optimistic.C.Broad-minded.D.Kind-hearted.CFormanyyearsresearchersfocusedonwhatpeopleknowabout
science,thinkingthat“Toknowscienceistoloveit.”Butdopeoplewhothinktheyknowscienceactuallyknowscience?AnewstudyledbyCrist
inaFonsecaoftheGeneticsSociety,LaurenceHurstoftheMilnerCentreforEvolution(进化)revealsthatpeoplewithstrongattitudestendtobelievet
heyunderstandscience,whileneutrals(中立者)arelesscertain.Absoluteattitudes,bothforandagainst,buildonhighself-confidenceinknowl
edgeaboutscience.Thestudyperformedasurveyofover2,000UKadults,askingthembothabouttheirattitudestoscienceandtheirbeliefinthei
rownunderstanding.Questionsfocusedongenetic(基因的)science,forexample,“HowwouldyourateyourunderstandingofwhatthetermDNAm
eans?”Allindividualswerescoredfromzero(theyknowtheyhavenounderstanding)toone(theyareconfidentthattheyunderstand).Theresultssuggesttha
tthoseattheattitudinalextremes—bothstronglysupportiveandfirmlyopposing—haveveryhighself-beliefintheirowncomprehension,whilethos
eansweringneutrallydonot.Psychologically,theteamsuggests,thismakessense:toholdastrongopinionyouneedtostronglybelieveinthecorrectnessofyourin
terpretationofthebasicfacts.Resultsofpreviousstudiesalsoindicatethatthosemoreacceptingofsciencebothbelieveth
eyunderstanditandscorewellonthetextbookfact(true/false)questions.Bycontrast,peoplewithstrongnegativeattitudestosciencetendtobeoverconfidentabo
uttheirlevelofunderstanding.WhetheritbeclimatechangeorGMfoods,importantsciencecaninspirestrongandopposingattitudes.Un
derstandinghowtocommunicatesciencerequiresanawarenessofwhypeoplemayholdsuchdifferentattitudestoit.Whenitwasthoughtthatwh
atmatteredmostforscientificliteracywasscientificknowledge,sciencecommunicationfocusedonpassinginformationfromscientiststothepub
lic.However,thisapproachmaynotbesuccessful,andinsomecasescanhaveadverseeffects.Workingtoaddressthegapb
etweenwhatpeopleknowandwhattheybelievetheyknowmaybeabetterstrategy.28.Whatisthenewstudymainlyabout?A.Anassessmentofpeople’sintere
stingenetics.B.Asurveyofvariousattitudestowardsevolution.C.Areportofpeople’sgeneralknowledgeofscience.D.Ananalysisoffactor
sonpeople’sbeliefinscience.29.Whydoestheauthormentionpreviousstudiesinparagraph3?A.Tosupportthefindingsofthestudy.B.Toclarifytheconceptofconfid
ence.C.Tostresstheimportanceofbasicfacts.D.Tocomparedifferentresearchmethods.30.Whatdoestheunderlinedword“adverse”meaninthelastparagrap
h?A.Random.B.Negative.C.Indirect.D.Favorable.31.Asforsciencecommunication,whichwouldtheauthoragreewith?A.Itshou
ldhelppeopleboostconfidence.B.Itshouldfocusonscientificknowledge.C.Itshouldinspirepeopletoscorewellintests.D
.Itshouldemphasizeobjectiveawarenessofoneself.DWhetherplayingtricksorholdingfuneralsinthewild,crowsh
avesurprisedthepublicwiththeirunexpectedcapabilities.Buttheir“intelligence”knowsnobounds.AnewstudypublishedinC
urrentBiologyrevealedforthefirsttimethatcrowscanusestatisticallogictosolveproblems.Crowshavealargebrainfortheirsizeandaparticularlynoticeableforebra
in,associatedwithstatisticalandanalyticalreasoninginhumans.“Inourlab,crowshaveshowncomplicatednumericalcompetenceandcarefulconsiderationduringdecis
ion-making,”saidDr.MelissaJohnston,afellowattheUniversityofTübingen.Inherrecentwork,Johnstonandherteampushedtheseabilitiestoanewextreme,test
ingstatisticalreasoning.Intheexperiment,twocrowswerefirsttrainedtopeck(啄)atvariousimagesontouchscreenstoearnf
oodtreats;andgraduallytheyhadtochoosebetweentwooftheseimages,eachcorrespondingtoadifferentrewardprobability.“Crowsweretaskedwithlearningrathera
bstractquantitiesandthenapplyingthatcombinationofinformationinarewardmaximizingway,”Johnstondetailed.Over
10daysoftrainingand5,000trials,thetwocrowsmanagedtopickthehigherprobabilityofreward,showingtheirabilitytousestat
isticalinference.Toresearchers’muchsurprise,evenafteramonthwithouttraining,thecrowsstillperformwelleverytime.Statisticalr
easoninginvolvesusinglimitedinformationaboutasituationtodrawconclusionsandmakedecisions.Peopleunknowinglyusesuchcogn
itiveabilityeveryday.Whenweselectcafesforsocialmeetups,ourbrainsautomaticallyweighcollectedstatisticsfrompastob
servationsandfavortheonemorecapableofmeetingneeds.Similarly,crowsrememberedandanalyzedtheconnectionsbetweentheimagesandtherewardprobabilitiestomaketh
emselvesgetthemosttreatspossible.Crowsoncesymbolizedmisfortuneanddeath,causingthemdislikedevenkilledbypeople.Actually,theyaream
ongthefewanimalstoadapttourbanizationsuccessfullyduetounderestimatedintelligence.“Ithinkthesestudiesdohelpchangepublicviewsandimproveo
urrelationshipwiththeselovelyanimals,”Johnstonstated.32.Whatmakescrows’intelligencepossible?A.Theirlimitlessabilities
oftricks.B.Theirsocialleaninginthewild.C.Theirphysicalstructureofbrains.D.Theirtrainingreceivedinthelab.33.Whichofth
efollowingbestdescribestheresearchprocessinparagraph3?A.Instruct,task,andretest.B.Train,perform,andrecord.C.Assume,prove,andreflect.D.P
repare,teach,andexamine.34.Howdoestheauthorexplainstatisticalinferenceinparagraph4?A.Bysharingapersonalexperience.B.Byq
uotingapreviousstudy.C.Bymakingadetailedcomparison.D.Byusingacommonexample.35.Whatcanbeasuitabletitlefor
thetext?A.FoodPrizeCompetition:CrowsChoosingRewards.B.UrbanBirdSurvivalStrategies:LivingwithPeople.C.BeyondTricks:Su
rpriseofCrows’StatisticalReasoning.D.AnimalBehaviorStudy:TrainingCrowsinExperiments.第二节(共5小题;每小题2.5分,满分12.5分
)阅读下面短文,从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。Thisissomethingthatallofushavenoticedcountlesstimesinourdailylives.Whetheryou’retryingtoread
thefineprintinacommercialortryingtomakeoutaperson’sfacefromadistance—italwayshelpstoseebetterwhenyousquint(眯起)
youreyes.36There’sacommonassumptionthatyou’readdingmuchstresstoyoureyeballsbysqueezingthemtomakethemworkbetter.37Ifyouthinkforawhile
,you’llfindsquintingisadifferentmatter.Ifsquintingmeantmakingyoureyesbecomestressballs,we’dallbeinal
otoftrouble.38Whenlighthitsanobject,itbouncesoffitssurfaceandentersoureyes.Thelighttravelsthroughtheeyelens(晶状体).Thelensthenfocusesthelightrays,whic
hfallontheretina(视网膜).Achemicalpresentintheretinaturnslightintoelectricsignals,whicharethentransmittedtothebrain.
Thebrainprocessesthesignalsandultimatelyallowsustoseestuff.Theactofsquinting,quiteobviously,alterstheshapeofthespacethroughwhichlightp
asses,whichhelpsusformaclearimageontheretina.What’smore,lightfromdifferentdirectionsentersandissubsequentlyperceivedbytheeye.39However,w
henyou’retryingtofocusonsomething,ifthere’slightenteringfrommultipledirections,thelenswillbeoverloaded.Bysq
uinting,focusinglightraysbecomesmoreprecise.Squintingdoesnotdamageyoureyesight.40It’sonethingtooccasionallysquintinordertomakeo
utsomethingfaraway.Butifyoufindyourselfdoingitallthetime,gettingyoureyestestedshouldbeyourfocus.A.Actually,that’snotexactlythecase.B.H
asiteveroccurredtoyouwhythishappens?C.Squintingdoestwomajorthingstoimproveourvision.D.However,doingitforlongperiodsoftimecanleadtodryeyes
.E.Normally,thisisagreatthing,asitfeedsyoursituationalawareness.F.Anumberofbiologicalcomponentsactuallyconstitutethehuman
eye.G.Beforerevealingthesecretbehindit,let’slearnabouthowweseethings.第二部分语言运用(共两节,满分30分)第一节(共15小题;每小题1分,满分15分)阅读下面短文,从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的
最佳选项。IrememberamomentwhenIfeltlikeeverythingwasfallingapart.Atfifteenyearsold,Ifoundmyselfinahospitalbed,unableto41.Itwa
saresultofanaccidentduringafishingtripwithafriend.My42ofbecominganathletewasbrokenalongwithmybackbone.Ipushedawaymylovedone
sandstruggledto43mynewreality.Returninghome,Ifacedthechallengeofgettingaroundinawheelchair.Atfirst,Iletmy44getintheway,refusi
ngtoaskforhelpevenwhenit45missingoutonexperiencesIenjoyed.Ilaterrealizedthataccepting46fromotherswasnotasignofweaknessbutanecessarysteptowards47my
independenceandhappiness.AturningpointcamewhenImetafriendwho48metotrywheelchairsports.I49intabletennisandparticipatedintheWheelchairGa
mesinMontreal,whereIwitnessedtheincredible50oftheathletes.OneincidentthathighlightedthedailyobstaclesfacedbydisabledpeopleoccurredwhenIencountereda
girlstrugglingtojogupahill.Ididn’tletherstrugglesdiscourageme.52,Iusedhumortoovercomethesituationandchallengenegativeattitude.Lookingback,I
realizethatthe54wasnottheendofmylifebutthebeginningofanincredibleone.Iam55forthesupportthathavecomemyway.AsIcontinuetoworktow
ardsmakingadifference,Ibelievethatmybestdayisyettocome.260w41.A.breatheB.liveC.thinkD.move42.A.memoryB.d
reamC.promiseD.mission43.A.relyonB.turndownC.adjusttoD.figureout44.A.regretB.prideC.desireD.envy45.A.meantB.requiredC.allowedD.deser
ved46.A.sympathyB.instructionC.praiseD.assistance47.A.transformingB.rewardingC.regainingD.sacrificing48.A.motivatedB.offered
C.expectedD.requested49.A.volunteeredB.excelledC.improvedD.struggled50.A.patienceB.integrityC.courageD.endurance51.A.superB.normalC.
disabledD.talented52.A.RatherB.MoreoverC.ThereforeD.However53.A.actionsB.attitudesC.outcomesD.approaches54.A.adventureB.conflictC
.accidentD.obstacle55.A.honoredB.admiredC.hopefulD.grateful第二节(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内
单词的正确形式。OpenAIreleaseditsfirstlarge-scaletext-to-videomodelSoraonFriday,February16.Itcangenerateone-minute-longhigh-definitionvideosbasedonuseri
nputinspires.56itsfunctionsarenotnewtoartificialintelligencemodels,Sorahasmadeamajorstepforward.OpenAIclaimedin57newsreleasethatSorawillbec
omeanimportantmilestoneinachievingArtificialGeneralIntelligence.YethoweverrealisticSoravideosmayappear,theyarestilldigita
lsimulationsandnotreal58(film)reality.ThedevelopmentofAI-createdvideosleadtoaphenomenoncalled“Post-truth”,59(refer)toacultu
ralclimateinwhichobjectivefactsarelessinfluentialinshapingpublicopinionthanappealstoemotionandpersonalbelief.ThebirthofSoravideosmightma
kethesituation60(bad).BeforepopularizingsuchnewtechnologyasSora,thechallengesshouldbeassessedandpreparedforinadvance.Forinstance,thegovernm
entcouldmakeitcompulsoryforinformationproviders61(identify)theirprovidedinformation.62(addition),theemergenceofSor
amayleadtosignificantjoblossesinrelatedindustriessuchasfilmandtelevision,63isasignificantsocialriskthatcannotbeignored.Therehavealreadybeenn
umerousin-depthstudiesonthepotentialjoblossescausedbythelarge-scaleapplicationofAI,andmanyasolution64(propose),includingslowingdownthepaceofAIt
echnologyapplication,assistinginreemployment,andimposingAI65(tax).Now,theovernightpopularityofSoraremindspeoplethatitistime
toaccelerate,refineandimplementthesemeasures.第三部分写作(共两节,满分40分)第一节应用文写作(满分15分)校英文报“学习科学家精神”栏目征稿。请你就你最欣赏的名言“IfIhaveseenfurther,it
isbystandingontheshouldersofgiants.”ByIsaacNewton写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.你欣赏的原因;2.你从中学到什么?注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。AquoteIadmirefromthefamousscient
istIsaacNewton第二节(满分25分)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Jack’sgrandfatherlivedinthecountryside.Onesummerholiday,hewenttovisi
thisgrandfather,withwhomheplayedallthetime.Onedayhesuddenlysaidtohisgrandfather,“WhenIgrowup,Iwanttob
ecomeasuccessfulman.Canyoutellmesomewaystobesuccessful?”SeeingJack’sinnocenteyes,thegrandfathernodded.However,withoutsayinganything,hetookJ
acktoanearbynursery.Fromthenursery,hisgrandpaboughttwosmallplantsandcamebackhome.Thenheplantedoneplantinapotandkeptitinsidethehouseandplant
edtheotheroutsidethehouse.Afterfinishingplanting,heaskedJack,“Whichofthesetwoplantsdoyouthinkwillgrowbetterinthefuture?
”Jackkeptthinkingforsometimeandthensaid,“Thatplantinsidethehousewillgrowbetterbecauseitissafefromeverydan
gerwhiletheplantoutsideisatriskofmanythingslikestrongsunlight,storms,animalsandsoon.”Thegrandfathersmiledand
said,“Let’sseewhatwillhappeninthefuture.”AfterthatJackleftwithhisparents.Fouryearslater,Jackcamebacktovisithisgrandfatheragai
n.Uponseeinghisgrandfather,Jacksaid,“Grandpa,lasttimeIaskedyousomewaystobesuccessful,butyoudidnottellmeanything.Thistim
eyouhavetotellme.”Thegrandfathersmiledandsaid,“Sure,butfirst,let’stakealookattheplantsthatweboughtafewyearsago.”
Sayingthis,hetookJacktotheplacewherehehadplantedthesmallplantinapot.Jackfoundtheplanthadturnedintoatree.Th
enthegrandfathertookJacktolookattheplantwhichtheyhadplantedoutside.Therestoodahugetree.Itsbranchesspreadfarandwide,pr
ovidingshadetopassers-by.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。ThegrandfatherlookedatJackandasked,“Tellmewhichplantgrewbetter?”Jackno
dded,thegrandfathercontinuedhiswords.2025届罗湖区高三第一次模拟考试答案英语2024.9.621-23BDB24-27ABAD28-31DABD32-35CADC36-40BAGED41-45DBCB
A46-50DCABD51-55CAorDBCD56.While/Although/Though57.a58.filmed59.referring60.worse61.toidentify62.Additionally63.which64.hasbeen
proposed65.taxesOnepossibleversionAquoteIadmirefromthefamousscientistIsaacNewtonMyfavoritequotefromIsaacNewton,“IfIhaveseenfurther,itisbystandingont
heshouldersofgiants,”captivatesmedeeply.Iadmireitbecauseitteachesushumility.Newtonrecognizesthateverygreatleapforwardofhiso
wnisbuiltuponthefoundationslaidbythosewhocamebefore,thegiantsofthepast.Thishumilityinspiresmetoseekknowledgewithanopenmind
andgratitude.Fromthisquote,I'velearnedtheimportanceofbuildingupontheachievementsofothers.Inmystudies,Istrivetointegratethewisdomo
fmyteachers,peers,andthescientificcommunity.Bystandingonthese“shoulders,”Ihopetocontributemyowninsightsandfurtherthequestforknowledge.应用文写作
评分标准一、评分原则1.本题总分为15分,按5个档次进行评分。2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言的整体情况初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.评分时,应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑,具体为:(1)对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表
述的清楚程度和合理性。(2)应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性、准确性和恰当性。(3)上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。4.评分时还应注意:(1)词数少于60的,酌情扣分。(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际
的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。(3)如书写较差,以至影响交际,酌情扣分。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(13~15分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。—覆盖了所有内容要点,表述清楚、合理。—使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有个别小错,但完全不影响理解
。—有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构清晰,意义连贯。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档(10~12分)完全完成了试题规定的任务。—覆盖了所有内容要点,表述比较清楚、合理。—使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有些许错误
,但不影响理解。—比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构比较清晰,意义比较连贯。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(7~9分)基本完成了试题规定的任务。—覆盖了大部分内容要点,有个别地方表述不够清楚、合理。—使用了简单的词汇和语法结构,有一些错误或不恰当之
处,但基本不影响理解。—基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构基本清晰,意义基本连贯。整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(4~6分)未适当完成试题规定的任务。—遗漏或未清楚表述一些内容要点,或一些内容与写作目的不相关。—所
使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多,影响理解。—几乎不能有效地使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不够清晰,意义不够连贯。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(1~3分)未完成试题规定的任务。—遗漏或未清楚表述大部分内容要
点,或大部分内容与写作目的不相关。—所使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多,严重影响理解。—几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不清晰,意义不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。零分未作答;未能传达给读者任何信息;内容太少,无法评判;写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看
清。OnepossibleversionThegrandfatherlookedatJackandasked,“Tellmewhichplantgrewbetter?”Jackpointedattheh
ugetreestandingoutsidewithaconfusedlook.Seeingtheboy’sinnocenteyesandsensinghisuncertainty,thegrandfatherexplainedthatwhiletheplantout
sidehadtofacemanychallenges,overcomingthesedifficultiesultimatelymadeitstronger.Withasmile,headded,“Inordertofightagainstra
instorms,itneededtostandfirm;tosurvivedroughts,itshouldforceitselftorootindepth.Asaresult,itgrewstrongandresilient,capab
leofenduringanything.Isn’titimpressive?”(83words)Jacknodded,thegrandfathercontinuedhiswords.“Fouryearsago,youaskedmeaboutwaystobe
successful.Now,thetreeistheanswer,”thegrandfathersaid.AsJackgazedatthehugetreewithitsbranchesspreadingfarandwideandprovidingshadetopass
ers-by,hisgrandfatherelaboratedthatbeingreadytofacethisworlddespiteallthedangersmeantnogoalwasimpossi
bletoachieve.HethenpattedJackontheshoulder,offeringthiswisdom,“Neverthinkofproblemsastroubles;instead,viewthemass
tepstowardspersonalgrowth.”Withthisnewfoundinsight,Jackunderstoodthetruemeaningofsuccess.(95words)读后续写评分标准:一、评分
标准和原则读后续写综合考查学生的阅读能力、书面表达能力以及思维和学习能力。评价学生作文时,应遵循以下评分标准:1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次进行评分。2.评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言的整体情况初步确定其所属档
次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。3.评分时,应根据内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个维度,考虑以下四个方面:(1)续写内容的完整性以及与所给短文的融洽度;(2)各段内容与所给段落开头语的衔接程度;(3)应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性、准确性和恰当性;(4)上下文的衔接
和全文的连贯性。4.评分时还应注意:(1)词数少于120的,酌情扣分。(2)单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。(3)书写较差以致影响交际的,酌情扣分。二、各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(21~25
分)—创造了丰富、合理的内容,富有逻辑性,续写完整,与原文情境融洽度高。—使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有个别小错,但完全不影响理解。—有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构清晰,意义连贯。第四档(16~20分)—创造了比较丰富、合理的内容,比较有逻辑性,续写比较完整
,与原文情境融洽度较高。—使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有些许错误,但不影响理解。—比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构比较清晰,意义比较连贯。第三档(11~15分)—创造了基本合理的内容,有一定的逻辑性,续写基本完整,与原文情境相关
。—使用了简单的词汇和语法结构,有一些错误或不恰当之处,但基本不影响理解。—基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构基本清晰,意义基本连贯。第二档(6~10分)—内容或逻辑上有一些重大问题,续写不够完整,与原文情境有一定程度脱节。—所使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多,影响理解。—未能有效
地使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不够清晰,意义不够连贯。第一档(1~5分)—内容或逻辑上有较多重大问题,或有部分内容抄自原文,续写不完整,与原文情境基本脱节。—所使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误很多,严重影响理解。—几乎没
有使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不清晰,意义不连贯。零分未作答;所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判;所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。部分解析【语篇解读】本文是一篇记叙文,主题语境是人与自我。文章讲述了作者在年轻时发生了一
场意外事故导致瘫痪,但在面对困境时,作者逐渐接受了他人的帮助,通过参加残疾人运动并克服困难,找到了新的生活方向和幸福。故事体现了面对逆境勇敢坚持的主题。【试题分析】41.答案D。解析:结合后文“Myd
reamsofbecominga(n)...wasbrokenalongwithmybackbone”及下一段“Ifacedthechallengeofgettingaroundinawheelchair”,可推知作者在医院床上无法动弹。move意为“移动”,符合文意,breathe意
为“呼吸”,live意为“生活”,think意为“思考”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为D。42.答案B。解析:结合后文“...becominganathletewasbrokenalongwithmybackbone”,可推知作者起初想成为一名运动员的梦想被摧毁了。dream意为“梦想”,m
emory意为“记忆”,promise意为“承诺”,mission意为“使命”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为B。43.答案C。解析:结合本句“pushedawaymylovedones”,可推知作者在经历挫折后推开自己所爱的人,并努力适应新的现实。adjustto意为
“适应”,符合文意,relyon意为“依靠”,turndown意为“拒绝”,figureout意为“弄清楚”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为C。44.答案B。解析:结合句意“Atfirst,Iletmy...getintheway,refusingto
askforhelp”可推知作者一开始让自己的骄傲成为障碍,拒绝寻求帮助。pride意为“骄傲”,符合文意,regret意为“后悔”,desire意为“渴望”,envy意为“嫉妒”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为B。45.答案A。解
析:结合句意“refusingtoaskforhelpevenwhenit...missingoutonexperiencesIenjoyed”,可推知作者拒绝寻求帮助即使这意味着错过了自己喜欢的经历。mea
nt意为“意味着”,符合文意,required意为“需要”,allowed意为“允许”,deserved意为“应得”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为A。46.答案D。解析:结合句意“realizedthataccepting...fromotherswasnotasignofweakness”,可
推知作者后来意识到接受别人的帮助不是软弱的表现。assistance意为“帮助”,符合文意,sympathy意为“同情”,instruction意为“指导”,praise意为“赞美”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为D。47.答案C。解析:结合句意“anecessarystep
towards...myindependenceandhappiness”,可推知接受帮助是重新获得自立和幸福的必要一步。regaining意为“重新获得”,符合文意,transforming意为“转变
”,rewarding意为“奖励”,sacrificing意为“牺牲”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为C。48.答案A。解析:结合句意“AturningpointcamewhenImetafriendwho...metotrywheelchai
rsports”,可推知作者遇到了一个朋友鼓励他尝试轮椅运动。motivated意为“激励”,符合文意,offered意为“主动提议”,expected意为“期望”,requested意为“请求”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为A。49.答案B。解析:结合句意“I...intableten
nisandparticipatedintheWheelchairGamesinMontreal”,可推知作者在乒乓球项目上取得了成功。excelled意为“取得成功”,符合文意,volunteered意为“自愿做”,improved意为“改进”,str
uggled意为“挣扎”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为B。50.订单D。解析:结合句意“whereIwitnessedtheincredible...oftheathletes”,可推知作者在蒙特利尔轮椅比赛上目睹了运动员们的
不屈不挠。endurance意为“忍耐力”,符合文意,patience意为“耐心”,integrity意为“正直”,humor意为“幽默”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为D。51.答案C。解析:结合全文及本句“...thedailyobstaclesfacedby...people...w
henIencounteredagirlstrugglingtojogupahill”,可推知作者遇到一个女孩在爬坡时的挣扎,意识到残障人士每天面临的困难。disabled意为“残疾的”,符合文意,weak意为“虚弱的”,normal意为“正
常的”,talented意为“有天赋的”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为C。52..答案AorD。解析:结合句意“Ididn’tletherstrugglesdiscourageme....Iusedhumo
r”,可推知作者没有因为她的挣扎而感到气馁,相反,作者用幽默克服了困境。rather意为“相反的是”,符合文意,however意为“然而”,也符合文意,可以接受,故也为答案,moreover意为“而且”,therefore意为“因此”,均不符合文意。故正确答
案为A和D。53.答案B。解析:结合句意“Iusedhumortoovercomethesituationandchallengenegative...”,可推知作者用幽默克服了负面态度。attitudes意为“态度”,符合文意,actions意为“行动”,outcomes意为“结
果”,approaches意为“方法”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为B。54.答案C。解析:结合句意“Lookingback,Irealizethatthe...wasnottheendofmylife”,可推知作者回顾过去认识到那个事故并不是生活的终结。
accident意为“事故”,符合文意,conflict意为“冲突”,adventure意为“冒险”,mistake意为“错误”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为C。55.答案D。解析:结合句意“Iam...forthesupportthathavecomemyway”,可推知作者对得到
的支持心存感激。grateful意为“感激的”,符合文意,honored意为“荣幸的”,admired意为“受人敬佩的”,hopeful意为“充满希望的”,均不符合文意。故正确答案为D。