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专题九告知信应用文＋读后续写应用文写作假定你是晨光中学高三学生李华，你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris写一封信，介绍相关情况，内容包括：1．成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、

观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)；2．对活动的感受；3．对自己未来的展望。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇：成人礼thecoming­of­ageceremony【写作示例】Step1：精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称为主，第二人称为辅时态一般现在时，一般过去时段

落布局开头点题：写信目的是介绍成人礼活动主体段落：成人礼活动内容及感受结尾：期待Chris回信Step2：字斟句酌巧妙润色1．这次的成人礼仪式深深地打动了我们，并且我们从中意识到了责任感始终伴随着我们

的成长过程。①一般表达：Wearealldeeplymovedbytheceremonyandwerealizethatthesenseofresponsibilityalwaysaccompaniestheprocessofourgrowthfromit.②句式升级(定语

从句)：Wearealldeeplymovedbytheceremony,____________________________________．2．我明白了成长的意义。①一般表达：____________________________________．②句式升级(倒装

句)：这就是我对成长的理解。____________________________________．Step3：衔接过渡斐然成篇_______________________________________________________________________________

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___读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“There'sourguide，”Isaidtothebusdriver,pointingatawomanI'dneverseenbefore.Theguideswereeasytospot

.TheystoodneartheentrancegateofArlingtonNationalCemetery,waitingandwatchingforthearrivalofourbigredtourbuses.Thedriverstoppedandopenedthedoorformetos

tepoff.“YoumustbeBecky，”shesaid.“MynameisAnne.”Asthetourdirectorforagroupofforty­three,IquicklyconfirmedwithAnnethesiteswewoul

dliketoseeduringthenextfourhours:theKennedygraves,LincolnMemorial,KoreanWarMemorial,VietnamVeteransMemorial,USCapitol,andWhiteHous

e.Mostimportantly,wediscussedwhenandwheretoprovidearestroombreak,notasimpleundertakingwithsomanypeople.Thenweclimbedaboardtobeginourtouro

fWashington,DC.AfterintroducingAnnetothebusloadofwaitingtourists,Ihandedthemicrophonetoherandmademywaytowardthelastseat.Onthatd

ay,wemanagedabriefchatintheshadeofanelmtreealongtheNationalMall.“Whereareyoufrom？”Anneasked.“Alabama.AreyoufromDC？”“Well,I'velivedinCaliforniaandEuro

pe,butIliveherenow，”shesaid.“IwasborninOhio,though.”“IwasborninOhio,too.”“Where？”sheasked.“Middletown，”Ianswered.“Me,too！”“IwasaSelby，”Is

aid.“IknewsomeSelbys.IwasaKiefhaber.”“Mydoctor'snamewasKiefhaber，”Isaid.“That'smydad！”Anneexclaimed.Iwasbornwithoutalefta

rm,andmyleftlegturnedinward.Rightaway,adoctorplacedacastfrommyhiptomytinytoes.Hemonitoredmyprogresscloselyandwasabletoexchangethemassivecastsixwee

kslaterforashorter,below­the­kneeone.MomsaidIenjoyedthefreedomofthelightercastandworeoutthefootofitwhilebouncinginababyswingonth

efrontporch.Thatnewcastalsobecameahelpfultoolforrollingfrommybacktomystomach.I'dflingitacrossmyrightleg,andtheweightwouldflipme

over.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Thankfully,mylegstraightenedoutandgrewstrong.____________________________________________

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ndnesstomyfamilywasAnne'sdad.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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________________________________________________________________【词汇积累】情感类closelyadv.紧密地；接近地massiveadj.大而重的；宏伟的；宽大的动作类confirmv.确定；批准exclai

mv.惊叫；呼喊monitorv.监控；监测【发散思维】1．Howwastheauthorafterthegoodcarefromthedoctor?____________________________

____________________________________________2．Whatworriedtheauthor'sparents?_________________________

_______________________________________________3．Howmuchdidtheauthor'sparentspayforhertreatment?_________________________

_______________________________________________4．WhatdidtheauthorthinkaboutthechancesforAnneandhertomeet?___

_____________________________________________________________________5．WhatconnectedtheauthorandAnne?________________________________________

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