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专题六建议信应用文+读后续写应用文写作假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【写作示例】Step
1:精准审题谋篇布局类型建议信人称第二人称(you)为主时态一般现在时要点①欢迎到中国朋友家做客,愿意提供建议②到访(朋友家)时间③合适的礼物④餐桌礼仪Step2:字斟句酌巧妙润色1.得知你要去中国朋友家做客,真是太好了。①一
般表达:______________________________________________.②得知你要去中国朋友家做客,并且想了解有关访友的中国习俗,真是太好了。(增加细节)It'ssogreattohea
ryou'reinvitedtoaChinesefriend'shomeand______________________.③很荣幸可以分享我的经验并向你介绍相关的中国风俗与传统。(高级句型)______________________________
____andintroducetherelevantChinesecustomsandtraditiontoyou.2.首先,到达时间要准时或稍微早一点。①一般表达:________________________
__________________________.②首先,比约定时间早到5至10分钟比较好,准时到达也可以。(高级句型)______________________________________butitisfineontime.3.希望你在中国玩得愉快。Ihopey
oucan____________________________.Step3:衔接过渡斐然成篇________________________________________________________________________________
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_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开
头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Atelevenyearsold,mymainconcernwasmoney.WherecouldIgetit?WhatwouldIspenditon?HowmuchdidIneedtobuythenewmust
havethingmyclassmateseitherhadorwantedjustasbadlyasIdid?Ialreadyhada“job”asasalesrepresentativewithakidsbasedsalescompany,andIsoldwrappingpaperandg
reetingcardswiththebestofthem.ButthemoremoneyIgot,themoreIneeded.Ivolunteeredtohelpmygrandmotherdeliverluncheachdaytothe
elderlyandshepromisedtopayme.ThinkingofthemoneyI'dearn,Igotreallyexcited.Onthefirstday,wepickedupalargecontainerfullofhotmeals
inanearbytownandthendrovetoourfirststop:asmallwhitehouse.Mygrandmothercalledout,“MrsHershel,we'vebroughtyousomelunch.”Thereplyinalowvoicecamefro
mmyleft.“Comeonin.”InearlyjumpedwhenIglancedovertoseeatinyoldwomaninthecornerlookingatme.Shesatinarockingchairandhadmorewrinkle
sthanI'deverseeninmylife.Thedustyairinthehousemademefeeldirty.Iheldmybreathuntilwewentbackoutontotheporch.Wasthisreallyhowsomepeoplelived
?Icouldn'twrapmyheadaroundit.Thenextstopwasmuchthesameandthenext.Thehousesvariedinsizeandshape,somewerenicerthanothers,butthesame
wrinklypeoplewaitedfortheirmeals.EachpersonsmiledatmeandthankedmeasIhurriedtogetoutofthere.Onthewayback,mygrandmothersaid,
“Foralotofthem,whatwedeliveristheironlymealoftheday.”Myeyeswidened,andIturnedtoher,“Theironlymeal?”Shenodded,“Forsomeofthe
mtoowe'retheonlypersonstheysee.Manyofthemarealone.Akindwordandasmilegoalongway.”Ithoughtaboutthat.WhatifIwasallalone?Icouldn't
imaginenothavingmymomorgrandmotherormyfriends.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。Itdidn'tseemquiteasexcitingwhenItookthemoneyfrommygrandmother.___________
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_______________________________________________________________Apartfromthesmile,Idecidedtodosomethingspecialforthem.
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___________________________________________________【词汇积累】情感类excitedadj.兴奋的aloneadj.孤独的动作类deliverv.投递;递送holdone'sbreath屏住呼吸【发散思维】1.Whodidth
eauthorthinkofwhenhe/shedecidedtotryagain?________________________________________________________________________2.Whatdidtheauthordothene
xtmorningwhenhe/shewasthereagain?________________________________________________________________________3.Wh
atdidthegrandmotherthinktheelderlyneededmost?________________________________________________________________________4.Whatdidtheauthordotohelpthe
elderly?________________________________________________________________________5.Whatdidtheauthorknowwhenseeingthesmilesonthewrinkled
faces?________________________________________________________________________