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专题六建议信应用文+读后续写应用文写作假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【写作示例】Step1:精准审题谋篇布局类型建议信人称第二人称(you)为主时态一般现在时要点①欢迎到中国朋友家做客,愿意提供建议②到访(朋友家)时间③合适的礼物④餐桌礼仪Step2:字斟句酌巧妙润色1
.得知你要去中国朋友家做客,真是太好了。①一般表达:______________________________________________.②得知你要去中国朋友家做客,并且想了解有关访友的中国习俗,真是太好了。(增加细节)I
t'ssogreattohearyou'reinvitedtoaChinesefriend'shomeand___________________.③很荣幸可以分享我的经验并向你介绍相关的中国风俗与传统。(高级句型)___________
_______________________andintroducetherelevantChinesecustomsandtraditiontoyou.2.首先,到达时间要准时或稍微早一点。①一般表达:__
________________________________________________.②首先,比约定时间早到5至10分钟比较好,准时到达也可以。(高级句型)______________________________________butitisfineontime.3.
希望你在中国玩得愉快。Ihopeyoucan____________________________.Step3:衔接过渡斐然成篇_________________________________________________________
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_______________________________读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Atelevenyearsold,mymainconcernwasmoney.WherecouldIgetit?WhatwouldIspenditon
?HowmuchdidIneedtobuythenewmusthavethingmyclassmateseitherhadorwantedjustasbadlyasIdid?Ialreadyhada“job”asasalesrepresentativewithakidsbasedsalesc
ompany,andIsoldwrappingpaperandgreetingcardswiththebestofthem.ButthemoremoneyIgot,themoreIneeded.Ivolunteeredtohelpmygrandmotherdeliverlunche
achdaytotheelderlyandshepromisedtopayme.ThinkingofthemoneyI'dearn,Igotreallyexcited.Onthefirstday,wepickedupalargecontainerfullofhotmeals
inanearbytownandthendrovetoourfirststop:asmallwhitehouse.Mygrandmothercalledout,“MrsHershel,we'vebroughtyousomelunch.”Thereplyin
alowvoicecamefrommyleft.“Comeonin.”InearlyjumpedwhenIglancedovertoseeatinyoldwomaninthecornerlookingatme.Shesa
tinarockingchairandhadmorewrinklesthanI'deverseeninmylife.Thedustyairinthehousemademefeeldirty.Iheldmybreat
huntilwewentbackoutontotheporch.Wasthisreallyhowsomepeoplelived?Icouldn'twrapmyheadaroundit.Thenextstopwasmuchthesameandthenext.The
housesvariedinsizeandshape,somewerenicerthanothers,butthesamewrinklypeoplewaitedfortheirmeals.EachpersonsmiledatmeandthankedmeasIhu
rriedtogetoutofthere.Onthewayback,mygrandmothersaid,“Foralotofthem,whatwedeliveristheironlymealoftheday.”Myeyeswidened,an
dIturnedtoher,“Theironlymeal?”Shenodded,“Forsomeofthemtoowe'retheonlypersonstheysee.Manyofthemarealone.Ak
indwordandasmilegoalongway.”Ithoughtaboutthat.WhatifIwasallalone?Icouldn'timaginenothavingmymomorgrandmotherormyfriends.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下
格式作答。Itdidn'tseemquiteasexcitingwhenItookthemoneyfrommygrandmother.___________________________________________________________
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romthesmile,Idecidedtodosomethingspecialforthem.__________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________【词汇积累】情感类excitedadj.兴奋的aloneadj.孤独的动作类deliverv.投递;递送holdone'sbrea
th屏住呼吸【发散思维】1.Whodidtheauthorthinkofwhenhe/shedecidedtotryagain?________________________________________________
________________________2.Whatdidtheauthordothenextmorningwhenhe/shewasthereagain?_______________________
_________________________________________________3.Whatdidthegrandmotherthinktheelderlyneededmost?_____________________________
___________________________________________4.Whatdidtheauthordotohelptheelderly?_____________________________________________________
___________________5.Whatdidtheauthorknowwhenseeingthesmilesonthewrinkledfaces?_________________________________________
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