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专题八感谢信应用文＋读后续写应用文写作假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你写一封邮件，内容包括：1．表示感谢；2．回顾Alex对你的帮助；3．临别祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写

作示例】Step1：精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称(Ⅰ)为主，第二人称(you)为辅时态一般过去时，一般现在时段落布局开头点题：点明写作目的，感谢对方的帮助主体段落：具体指出曾经的帮助结尾：再次表达感谢，给

出临别祝愿Step2：字斟句酌巧妙润色1．你教我如何学英语。①一般表达：You____________________tolearnEnglish.②句式升级(强调句)：是你教我如何学英语。____________

________taughtmehowtolearnEnglish.2．你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我更多学习的自信。①一般表达：You________________________andgavememoreconfidenceinlearning.②句式升级(倒装句)：你

不但帮助我提高了英语，并且给了我更多学习的自信。________________________,butalsogavememoreconfidenceinlearning.Step3：衔接过渡斐然成篇_________________________________________

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____________________________________________读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Therewasaboywithab

ignose.Heoftentoldaliebecausethetruthonlygothimintotroublequicker.HisnamewasDanielandhadbeenequatedtobemuchlikePinocchiowhotoldli

euponlieandhiswoodennosegrewlonger.Thisboy,notrealizingthathejustgotintomoretroublethanthetruthwouldhave,casuallysaidwhathis

immaturemindtoldhimtosay.Everybodyhespoketowouldknowthethingshesaidwerenotalwaystrue,sotheylistenedwithmutedears.“Hemustg

rowupandstartrealizingthatfalsehoodsdon'tgethimanywhereinlife，”theysaid.Daniel'sfutureseemedworryingthewayitwasprogressing.Hewasverylonelyinhiswo

rld.Nofriendswouldaskhimtovisitorcomeoverandplay.“Theworldiscruel，”hewouldthink.“AndImustforcemyselfupon

itinaninterestingway.AlittlelienowandthenisokayandIwillbelovedandlikedbymany.”Thetormenthewasexperiencingdep

rivedhimofsleepmanynights,asDanielwatchedtheorangeglowofsunrise.Howwronghewastothinkhewasnotlikedjustforbeinghims

elf!Danielreallycouldn'tbecompletelyfaultedbecauselyingwasnevershowntohim.Hecamefromabrokenhome,fatherdeadandmomworkingtwel

ve­hourshiftstomakeendsmeet.Hewastobefoundonstreetcornersafterschoolwitharoughbunchofboys.Hesowantedtofitinwiththemthathepickedupthebadl

anguageandpersonalitythese“toughguys”wouldproject,thoughheknewitwasn'treallyhim.Sometimeshewouldlookupintothenightskya

ndfeelthelonelinessofmoonlightstreamingjustonhim.Deepdowninsidehim,avoicewouldyell,“Hey,thatiswrong;don'tdoit.”or“Getawayfromthisgr

oupoflosers.”Nevertheless,hislonelymindwouldswayhimtostickwiththem.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Thenonemorning,hegotupandwen

ttothebathroom.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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louder,deepinsidehim.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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________________________【词汇积累】情感类casuallyadv.不经意地；漫不经心地immatureadj.不成熟的动作类tellalie说谎equatev.使相等；视为平等；等同deprivev.剥夺；使丧失【发

散思维】1．Whatdidhethinkatthesightofhimselfinthemirror?________________________________________________________________________2．Howdidhefeel

atthesightofthewoodendoll?________________________________________________________________________3．Whatdidhethinkofhislies?___

_____________________________________________________________________4．Whatdidthevoicesaytohim?_______________________

_________________________________________________5．Whatdidhebecomeatlast?________________________________________________

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