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专题八感谢信应用文＋读后续写应用文写作假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请你写一封邮件，内容包括：1．表示感谢；2．回顾Alex对你的帮助；3．临别祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2．可适

当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作示例】Step1：精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称(Ⅰ)为主，第二人称(you)为辅时态一般过去时，一般现在时段落布局开头点题：点明写作目的，感谢对方的帮助主体段落：具体指出曾经的帮助结尾：再次表达感谢，给出临别祝愿Step2：字斟句酌巧妙润色1．你

教我如何学英语。①一般表达：You____________________tolearnEnglish.②句式升级(强调句)：是你教我如何学英语。____________________taughtmehowtolearnEnglish.2．你帮助我提高了英语并且给了我

更多学习的自信。①一般表达：You________________________andgavememoreconfidenceinlearning.②句式升级(倒装句)：你不但帮助我提高了英语，并且给了我更多学习的自信。________________________,bu

talsogavememoreconfidenceinlearning.Step3：衔接过渡斐然成篇_____________________________________________________________________

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________________________________________________________________________________________读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，

使之构成一篇完整的短文。Therewasaboywithabignose.Heoftentoldaliebecausethetruthonlygothimintotroublequicker.HisnamewasDanielandhadbeenequatedtobemuchlikePinoc

chiowhotoldlieuponlieandhiswoodennosegrewlonger.Thisboy,notrealizingthathejustgotintomoretroublethanthetruthwo

uldhave,casuallysaidwhathisimmaturemindtoldhimtosay.Everybodyhespoketowouldknowthethingshesaidwerenotalwaystrue,sotheylistenedwith

mutedears.“Hemustgrowupandstartrealizingthatfalsehoodsdon'tgethimanywhereinlife，”theysaid.Daniel'sfut

ureseemedworryingthewayitwasprogressing.Hewasverylonelyinhisworld.Nofriendswouldaskhimtovisitorcomeoverandplay.“Thew

orldiscruel，”hewouldthink.“AndImustforcemyselfuponitinaninterestingway.AlittlelienowandthenisokayandIwillbelovedandlikedbymany.”

Thetormenthewasexperiencingdeprivedhimofsleepmanynights,asDanielwatchedtheorangeglowofsunrise.Howwronghewastothinkhewasnotlikedjustforbeinghimself!D

anielreallycouldn'tbecompletelyfaultedbecauselyingwasnevershowntohim.Hecamefromabrokenhome,fatherdeadandmomworkingtwelve­hourshiftstomakeendsmeet.He

wastobefoundonstreetcornersafterschoolwitharoughbunchofboys.Hesowantedtofitinwiththemthathepickedupthebadlanguageandpersonalitythese“toughg

uys”wouldproject,thoughheknewitwasn'treallyhim.Sometimeshewouldlookupintothenightskyandfeelthelonelinessofmoonlightst

reamingjustonhim.Deepdowninsidehim,avoicewouldyell,“Hey,thatiswrong;don'tdoit.”or“Getawayfromthisgroupoflosers.”Nevertheless,hislonel

ymindwouldswayhimtostickwiththem.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。Thenonemorning,hegotupandwenttothebathroom.______

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_________________________________________________________________________________________________Thevoicegrewlouder,deepinsidehi

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________________【词汇积累】情感类casuallyadv.不经意地；漫不经心地immatureadj.不成熟的动作类tellalie说谎equatev.使相等；视为平等；等同deprivev.剥夺；使丧失【发散思维】1．Whatdidhethinkatthe

sightofhimselfinthemirror?________________________________________________________________________2．Howdidhefeelatth

esightofthewoodendoll?________________________________________________________________________3．Whatdidhethinkofhislies?_______________

_________________________________________________________4．Whatdidthevoicesaytohim?_________________________________________________________

_______________5．Whatdidhebecomeatlast?________________________________________________________________________