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参照秘密级管理★启用前试卷类型：A2023年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（模拟卷）英语（一）本试题卷共10页，满分120分；考试时间120分钟。注意事项：1.答题前，考生务必用黑色签字笔将自己的姓名、考生号和座位号填写在答

题卡上，并认真核对条形码上的信息，核对无误后将条形码横贴在答题卡“条形码粘贴处”。因笔试不考听力，试题卷从第二部分的“阅读”开始，题目序号从“21”开始。2.作答选择题时，选出每小题答案后，须用2B铅笔把答题卡上对应题

目选项的答案信息点涂黑。如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再改涂其他答案；非选择题须用黑色签字笔作答，答案须写在答题卡各题目指定区域内相应位置上，超出答题区域书写的答案无效。如需改动，先划掉原来的答案，然后再写上新的答案；禁止使用涂改

液和修正带；不按以上要求作答的答案无效，在试题卷上作答一律无效！3.保持答题卡字迹工整，卡面清洁，不折叠、不破损。4.考试结束后，将试题卷和答题卡一并交回。第二部分阅读（共两节，满分50分）第一节（共15小题

，每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。AIntheUK,thebestracecoursesareinallcornersofthecountry,whichmeansthatitisaccessibleforal

lfansofthesporttoseethebiggeststars.So,whatarethefourbestracecoursesintheUK？CheltenhamNothingcomesclosetoexcitementlevelswhentheCheltenha

mFestivalisapproaching.ItisthehomeofNationalHuntracing,andeveryyearmillionsoffansaregluedtothehorseracingonthetrack

.Itisthefestivalforthedie-hardloversofthesport,astheracingtakesfrontandcentreoftheattentionasthebiggestprizesarehandedout.AintreeThera

cethatdrawstheviewerstothesportistheGrandNational.TheraceisanessentialpartofBritishlife,aseveryonemakesahabitofwatchingthera

ceannuallywithfriendsandfamily.Itisaperfectcourseforvisitorstoo,asitissituatedjustashortdistanceoutsideofLiverpool.Thereis

extraemphasisonfashionwhenattendingAintree.AscotForloversofflatracing,Ascotmeetingsareamust.ThebiggestoftheseasonisRoyalAscot,whichisoneofthem

ostuniqueoftheseasonasQueenElizabethattendsitherself.Thisisoneofthemostfashionableracedaysonthecalendar,asallvisitorsenteringcertainzonesmus

tbewearingatophat.However,thereisnobetterreasontogetdressedup.NewmarketNewmarketisahotbedfullofracingfans,andisamust-visitforallloversofthesport.Iti

stheheadquartersofflatracing,asthewholetownisdevotedtothesport.Therearetwocourses,theJulyCourseandtheRowleyMile.Thefinalraced

ayoftheseasontakesplaceinOctober.Regardlessofwhenyouvisitintheseason,youwillfeastyoureyes！21.Whatist

hehighlightofCheltenhamFestival？A.Itoftengrandprizes.B.Itinvitesmanycelebrities.C.Itpromotesthetourism.D.Itattractsamaximumoffans.22.W

hatdoAinireeandAscofhaveincommon？A.Theyareteam-centeredB.TheyareforflatracingC.Theyareforroyalfamily.D.Theyarefashion-featur

ed.23.WhatcanbelearnedaboutNewmarket？A.ThefinalraceisheldinJuly.B.Thecitizensarecrazyabouttherace.C.Th

evisitorsarewelcomeallyeararound.D.Theracingfansareextremelyprofessional.BYoumightthinkofmartialarts(武打)movieswhenyo

useepeopleperforminggracefulmovesdowntheriver,allstandingonabamboostrip(竹条)butactuallyitisaformofintangiblecultura

lheritage：bamboodrifting(漂流).Over2,000yearsago,thehigh-qualitywood,nanmu,inGuizhouwasingreatdemandbytheroyalcourtmorethan2,000kilomet

erstothenorth.Withnobettertransportation,peoplehadtostandononelogtodriftdowntheriver.Later,localpeoplebegantocompet

ealongthewayandthegameofwooddriftingwasborn.IntheQingDynasty,wooddriftingbecamebamboodriftingbecauseofbamboo'slowerprice.Duetotheskillsittakesf

oronetomasterthisact,bamboodriftingwasincludedinthenationalintangibleculturalheritagelistthisyear.YangLiu,a24-year-oldinheritorofbambood

rifting,learneditat7."Usually,thebamboounderyoufeetisabout9meterslong,andthebambooinyourhandsisabout5meters.Ifthelengthordiameter(直径)ofthebambooisn

otlongenough,itwillnotfloat.Keepingourfeetfirmlypositionedonthenarrowbamboopoleisthekey,soweshouldfigh

tagainstthecurrentbyconstantlychangingtheangle(角度)Ilostmybalanceandfellinthewatermanytimeswhilepracticing.OnceIfell,Igaveitanothertryuntil

Iknewhowtohandlethemostdifficultpart.shesaid.ThelovefortheancientskillkeepsYanggoing.Inthepast17years,shehasdriftedallyearround,inwinte

rcoldandsummerheat.Ashanfuculturehasbeenontherise,Yangstartedwearinghanfuwhileperforming,creatingamorebeautifulfeel.In2020,Yangbegantoposthervide

osonsocialmedia."I'mextremelyproudtogetresponsesfromviewersthatbamboodriftingmakesthelinebetweenwhatispossibleandimpossibleunclear.Ifsm

ymissiontokeepitaliveandknowntomorepeople,"YangLiutoldChinaDaily.24.Whatcanbelearnedfromthefirsttwoparagraphs

?A.Themartialartsmovieisaformofculturalheritage.B.Nanmuwasdeliveredtothenorthbyland.C.BamboowascostlyinGuizhou2,000year

sago.D.Bamboodriftinginvolveslotsofskills.25.Whatisthebiggestchallengeinbamboodrifting?A.Findingtheproperbamboo.B

.Holdingthebamboofirmlyinhands.C.Maintainingafixedangle.D.Keepingbalance.26.Whatdotheviewersthinkofbamboodrifting

?A.Unbelievable.B.Impossible.C.Confusing.D.Complicated.27.Whichofthefollowingisasuitabletitleforthetext?A.TransportingBamboodowntheR

iver.B.IntangibleCulturalHeritageinGuizhou.C.BalancingwithGrace.D.YangLiu:aCreativePerformer.CJobsthatusebothtechnicalandcreativet

hinkingareamongthefastest-growingandhighest-payingones,accordingtoanewreportfromBurningGlassTechnologies,

ajobmarketanalytics(分析)companyinBoston.Itstudiedmillionsofjobpostingstobetterunderstandtheskillscompani

esrequire.Whattheydiscoveredwasthatmanywantworkerswithexperienceinsuchnewabilitiesasbig-data(数据)gatheringand

analytics,ordesignusingdigitaltechnology.BurningGlasscameupwiththeterm“hybridjobs”todescribethesekindsofpositions,whichrequireskillsnotnormallyfou

ndtogether.Forexample,thesehybridjobsmightrequirepeoplewithskillsindatascienceandadvertising,orengineeringandsales.“Thejo

bsofthefuturedon’tinvolvejustoneskill,”saysMattSiegelman,chiefmanagerofBurningGlass.Thecompanyexpectsgeneraljobgrowthofabout10%between2018and2

028,butthehybridjobsby21%.What’smore,hybridjobspaymorethanpositionsthatcallforatraditionalsetofskills.Forexample,amarketingmanagermasteringa

databaseprogramgetspaid41%morethanatraditionalone,withanaverageyearlysalaryof$100,000.Moreover,anengineerwhoimproveshersalesskills

andbecomesaconsultingengineerforasoftwarecompanycanmorethandoubleherpayfrom$180,000to$400,000.Whiledatashowsthatw

orkerswhofailtoupdatetheirskillswillbeabletofindfewerjobs,peopleinhybridjobsarelesslikelytobecomeouto

fdate,withonly12%possibilityofbeingreplacedbymachine,comparedwith42%forgeneraljobs,saysBurningGlass.Hybridjobsaremostlynotbeginner

roles,sotheymainlygotoworkerswithyearsofexperienceand,mostimportantly,moretrainingafterleavingcollege.Thatmeansworkers,bossesandeducatorswillhavet

othinkabouthowtobetterpreparepeoplefortheseroles.28.Whydidthecompanyresearchintojobadvertisements?A.Tounderstandthegr

owthofbestpaidworkers.B.Tocompareworkers’experiencewithnewabilities.C.Tofindoutcompanies’requirementsaboutskills.D.

Totellthepossiblechangesinfuturejobmarket.29.Whichofthefollowingjobscanbehybrid?A.Dataengineer.B.Machineoperator.C.Marketingmanager.D.Med

icalconsultant.30.Howmuchisatraditionalmarketingmanagerpossiblypaideveryyear?A.$180,000.B.$71,000.C.$41,000.D.$10,0

00.31.Whichofthefollowingisthebesttitleforthispassage?A.HowtoGetTrainedforJobsB.TheSkillsfor“Hybrid”JobsC.Futu

reJobsRequiring“Hybrid”SkillsD.TipsonFindingFastest-GrowingJobsDItseemedinterestingthatontheeveofPrimeMini

sterNarendraModi’sdepartureforFrance,theIndianandFrenchgovernmentsissuedsimilarstatementsontheprospectsofanagreementonthepur

chaseoftheRafaleaircraft:thatnosingledealshouldbeallowedtoovershadowthePrimeMinister’svisit.Indeed,India-Francerelationsaremuchbiggerthananyonecon

tract;theyrepresenttheculturalaffinity(密切关系)andhistoricrelationsbetweentwovibrant(醒目的)democracies.Theite

msonthePrimeMinister’sagendareflectedtherangeofcommonalities—fromthepreservationofancientarchitecturetothedevelopmentofPuducherryandChand

igarhassmartcities;fromtheconstructionofsemihigh-speedrailwaylinestocooperationonaspacemissiontoMars;fromdiscussinganti-terrortrainingtotacklingcl

imatechangethroughrenewabletechnologiesandarobustnuclearpartnership.Theeconomicaspectoftherelationshiphasbeenignoredfortoolon

g.AlthoughmorethanathousandFrenchcompanieshaveatotalinvestmentofabout$20billioninIndia,bilateraltradeisworthjust$8bill

ion.Whileallthisdeservedattention,itwasdisappointingthatthePrimeMinisterputthespotlightbackondefencetiesbymakingasurpris

eannouncementonthepurchaseof36RafaleaircraftasthehighlightofhistalkswithPresidentFrancoisHollande.Iftheoutrightpurchasewas

acrucialmilitarynecessity,itcouldhavebeendiscussedafewweeksbeforeorafterthevisit,asapoliticalpushforthedealwassecondarytothetech

nicalspecificationsanddeliveryrequirements.Moreover,thedeal,whichinvolvespurchasingproductsofftheshelfa

broad,detractsfromMr.Modi’s“MakeinIndia”initiative(主动性).ThebreakthroughontheArevanuclearequipmentdeal,ontheo

therhand,showsthepositiveoutcomeofMr.Modi’sandMr.Hollande’spoliticalpush,combinedwitha“MakeinIndia”twist.Asinthecaseo

fIndo-U.S.nuclearnegotiations,Mr.ModiandMr.Hollandedecidedtoclearthelogjambysplittingtheproblemintodiffere

ntsilos—allowingforseparatemechanismsforthepricingissuesandforthetechnicalandlegalaspects.ThesupplementarydealinvolvingArevaandL&Tproducingh

eavyforgingmetalcasingfornuclearreactorsisanimportantstepinlocalisingsomeoftheexpensiveparts.DuringhisvisittoCanada,wherehehopestosignadealforurani

umsupplies,Mr.Modimeanstotakeforwardhisplantoincreasenuclearenergyproduction.Giventhisobjective,itmaybeusefulforhimtoroundoffthevisitbydiscussinghisn

uclearenergyplansinGermanyaswell,whichisnowwindingdownonnuclearpowerbutisatthecuttingedgeofnuclearsafetyresearchfortheEuropeanPressurisedReacto

rsthatarebeingconsideredforIndia.32.Whichofthefollowinggotthewholeattentionotherthanmanyimportantdeals?

A.CooperationonaspacemissiontoMars.B.Anti-terrortraining.C.PurchaseofRafaleFighters.D.GeneralVKSingh’sremarkonthePress.33.Whichofthefollowingoptio

nisontheagendaofthePrimeMinisterNarendraModiasstatedabove?A.Preservationofancientarchitecture.B.Deve

lopmentofPuducherryandChandigarhassmartcities.C.Constructionofsemi-high-speedrailwaylines.D.Alloftheabove.34.Choo

seanappropriateTitlefortheabovepassage?A.TheBigDealB.Modi’sSuccessC.Modi’stourtoFranceD.Rafaleandbeyond35.Whichofthefollowing

isthemeaningoftheword‘logjam’?A.AlongtrafficjamduringPrimeMinisterModi’svisit.B.Astateofmindwhereyoucannotdecidewhattodo.C.Asituationthatsee

mslikeunabletobesettled.D.AplacefromwhereTheFrenchPresidentusedtowork.第二节（共5小题，每小题2.5分，满分12.5分）阅读下面短文，从短文后提供的选

项中选出填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。75yearsafterhumanssuccessfullyputtheirfirstobjectintospace,It'smucheasiertolaunchasatellite,butalotmessieroncew

e'reupthere.36Therearearound5000satellitesinorbitwithfewerthanhalfactuallyworking.Whenasatellitestopsfunctioning,itkeepsorbitingatveryhigh

speeds,makingagreatthreatfortheusefulones.Sospacesustainabilityhasbecomeabigconcern.37Onesuggestedsolutionistorefuelthedeadsatel

litesandbringthembacktolife.Anotherconceptistousearobotwithfourarmstocatchadeadsatellitebeforepullingitintotheatmospheretoburnitup.38Operating

arobotfromhundredsofmilesawayistough.Andtheworldhasn'tyetreachedaconsensus(共识)onwhyweshouldclearthespacejunkandtherearenorealrulesthatgovernhoww

eworkoutthere.Firstwhyshouldwekeepthingscleaninorbit?Weusesatellitestochecktheweather,findourwayaround,andforfinancialpurpo

ses.Spacedatagivesusnotjustbeautifulpicturesoftheearth,butalsoinformationaboutclimatechange,naturaldisastersandotherthingsthatcanhelphumanswi

thearthboundchallenges.39Thenhowcanwehumansthinkasonebigcommunity?Governmentsshouldmakepowerfulregulations

.Companiesoughttoengageinsharedpracticesandscientistsareexpectedtothinkuppracticalmethods.40Onlyinthiswaycanwekee

pthoseorbitalhighwaysopenforthenextgenerationandbeyondbeforetheyaredeadlyblockedbyspacejunk.A.Theyprovideservicescloselyrelatedtoourlife.B.Th

isishardbothtechnicallyandpolitically,though.C.Anyway,weshouldquickenthepaceofclearingup.D.Spaceisgetting

increasinglycrowdedanddangerous.E.Sowedependlargelyonspaceanditneedstobetidiedup.F.Scientistsarestrugglingforstrategiestotackletheproblem

.G.Allofthesehavebeenintegratedintothesolutionswereallyneed.第三部分语言运用（共两节，满分30分）第一节（共15小题，每小题1分，满分15分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可

以填入空白处的最佳选项。ZainabAmjad,a24-year-oldgirl,isworkingonanoilrig(钻井架)asanengineerinIraq,wherecompanies41

deepintothegroundtolookforoil.Mostofherwomencolleaguesworkinanoffice.42,Amjadchosetoworkintheoilfields.Itisnota43jobforwomen

fromconservativecommunities.Petrochemicalprogramsinthecountry'sengineeringschoolsareforstudentswithth

ebest44.Amjadwasinthetop5percentofhergraduatingclassatBasraUniversityin2018.SheispartofanewgenerationofIraqiwomenwhoaregoingagain

sttribal45.“Manytimesmanylocals46,'Sure,we'llseeyououtthere,'tellingmeIwouldn'tbeabletomakeit,”saidAmjad,"Butthisonly47meharder.”Amj

adhopestohelp48alaborrightsgroupforIraqi49engineersinthefuture.Inthiswar-torncountry,womenaremorethanlikely

tobe50,under-educated,employedinlow-wageorunpaidwork,andsubjectto51forgettingmarriedorhavingchildren.NotonlydoesAmjadfac

e52withintheindustry,shealsofacesongoingprotestsbylocaltribes(部落)andviolencetowardoilworkers.Butthewomaniswillingto53diff

iculties,suchaspoorservicesandhighunemployment.Amjadsaidshehaslittle54toevenconsiderthesedifficulties,forevenatnightsheisoftenworking.“Th

edrillingnever55.”shesaid.41.A.diveB.drillC.dragD.draw42.A.SimilarlyB.ConsequentlyC.InsteadD.Otherwise43

.A.usualB.legalC.well-paidD.complex44.A.gradesB.habitC.actionsD.character45.A.conflictsB.arrangementsC.traditionsD.responsibilitie

s46.A.laughedB.remindedC.warnedD.complained47.A.punishedB.pushedC.depressedD.denied48.A.estimateB.enquireC.

entitleD.establish49.A.femaleB.maleC.excellentD.hopeless50.A.cautiousB.luckyC.poorD.respectable51.A.abuseB.dismissalC.fineD.charge52.A.prio

rityB.prospectC.investigationD.inequality53.A.comeacrossB.runintoC.findoutD.takeon54.A.abilityB.courageC.

timeD.determination55.A.appearsB.stopsC.operatesD.loses第二节（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）阅读下面材料,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。Ifyouhappentobeaheav

ysleeper,maybeyoualwayswakeuplateforlectureseveryday.56(fortunate),thereisSLEEPIFYOUCAN,also57(call)Alamy,foryou.Itis58alarmappforstu

dents.Usersneedtocompletesometaskstoturnthealarmoff.Forexample,youneedtotake59(photo)ofsomethingspeci

aloryouneedtoshakethephoneseveraltimes.Inaddition,SLEEPIFYOUCANwillalsogiveyouthelatestweatherconditionssothatyoucandecidewhethertotakeanumbrella60y

oubeforeleavinghome.However,onlythisfunctioncan'tmeetallyourdemands.Inordernottobewokenupatawrongtime,

youcantrySLEEPCYCLE.Itisanappthataims61(correct)itsusers'sleepingpatternbywaking62(they)upnotduringthesoundsleeptim

ebutatmuchthe63(light)sleepperiod.Theappdoesthisbymonitoringtheirtime64theusersgotosleep,which65(mea

n)thatyouwillfeellesssleepywhenyouwakeupeverymorning.Andthat'swhythisappisquitepopularwithpeoplenowadays.第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）假定你是李华

，你发现当前“饭圈”文化积弊已深，网上互撕谩骂、应援打榜、造谣攻击等问题屡见不鲜，严重破坏网络生态，对未成年人身心健康造成不利影响。而国家网信办组织的“清朗行动”旨在纠正此行业乱象。针对以上内容，请给你校英语周刊写篇短

文进行投稿，谈谈你的看法。内容包括：1.描述此现象；2.给出合理建议（至少两点）。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考词汇：理性地追星worshipstarsrationallyW

orshipStarsRationally“清朗”行动nationwidecampaigntopurifytheonlineenvironmentWorshipStarsRationally第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenS

usantoldher12yearsoldsonAndytheirfamilywerevisitingNewDelhi,adreamlikeplaceforteenagers,hislittlefacewasshiningwithindescribablywildjoy.

Hehadlongexpectedtoexploretheimaginativekingdom,especiallytheStoneForest,twomileseastofthetown,wherelayvariousstonesindifferent

colorsandsizes.Thetwo-daytripwasverytight-firstmettheiroldfriends,theMillersandthenmetAndy'sexpectation.Whentheyreachedtheirhouseitwasalready3p.m.Mil

lerandhiswifewerehappytomeetthemafteralongtime.Theysatinthedrawingroomandchattedaboutoldtimes.Theirsonsoonboredwithadultconversatio

n,wentouttoplaywiththehost'schildren-EricandDaisy-bothofwhomwerearoundAndy'sage.ButAndy'sappetiteseemed

nevertobesatisfied.AshisnameAndyconveyed,hewascourageousandadventurous.AndywasimpatienttoinspecttheroutetotheStoneFor

estaheadsoastobeatourguideforhisparentsthenextday!HeforgotthegranddinnertheMillerspreparedtheevening.DinnertimeEricandDaisycamerunningback,bothe

xcitedaboutthespecialdinner,butAndywasn'twiththem.Alarmed,MilleraskedthemaboutAndy,butbetweenourpanickedquestionsandkey

ed-upvoicestheybecamenervous,unabletoconveyanything.Fromthelittletheywereabletoexplain,theyguessedthatthechildrenwereridingtheirbikesintheneig

hbourhoodlanes(小巷),whileAndyranafterthem.Atsomepoint,Andymusthavefallenbehind,unabletokeeppace,takenawrongturnandlosthisway.Panic-strickent

heyallranoutinsearchofAndy.Atthesametime,Susan'smindracedwithallsoofhorriblesituations-apartoftheroadwasdugupforsomeconstructionwork;w

hatifAndyhadfallenin?Howfarhadhewandered?Howaloneandscaredhemustbeinastrangetown注意：1.续写词数应为150左右，续写分两段，每段开头已为你写好。

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.Actually,AndynowwasenjoyinghimselfintheStoneForest.Onthehalfwayback,Andyheardhismum'scallin

g.2023年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（模拟卷）英语（一）参考答案及评分标准第二部分阅读（共两节，满分50分）第一节（共15小题，每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）21-23:ADB24-27:DDAC28-31:CABC32-35：CDCC第二节（共5小题，每小题2.5分，满分

12.5分）36-40：DFBEC第三部分语言运用（共两节，满分30分）第一节（共15小题，每小题1分，满分15分）41-45:BCAAC46-50:ABDAC51-55:BDDCB第二节（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）56.Fortunat

ely57.called58.an59.photos60.with61.tocorrect62.them63.lightest64.when65.means第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）Onepossibleversion：WorshipStarsRation

allyNowadays,the"fandomculture"culturehasaccumulatedprofounddrawbacks.Problemssuchasnetworkmutualabuse,mutualhelpandslanderattacksar

ecommon,whichhaveseriouslydamagedthenetworkecosystemandadverselyaffectedthephysicalandmentalhealthofminors.The

NationalCyberspaceOfficehaslaunchedthe"nationwidecampaigntopurifytheonlineenvironment".Herearesomesuggestionsforthefa

ns.Firstly,pleaseworshipstarsrationally.Neverdosomestupidorevencrazythingsforthestars.Next,beawareof

ourmostimportanttasknow.Asstudents,weshouldstudyhardatpresent.Lastbutnotleast,whynotworshipthestarsaroundu

s?Therearesomesuperstarsarounduswhomwecancommunicatewith,suchasourparentsandthemedicalworkers.Allinall,pleaseworshipstarsratio

nally！第二节（满分25分）Onepossibleversion：Actually,AndynowwasenjoyinghimselfintheStoneForest.Hewasoverjoyedtocometothelong-anticipatedplace!Everythinginth

ekingdomwassomagicthathecouldnottakehiseyesoff.Thestonesherewerereallyunique,oneofwhichlookedlikeatiger,wit

htwofierceeyesandsharpteeth.Andystaredcuriouslyatit,lostinthought.Hewonderedhowitcameintobeing.Maybe...Sudden

ly,herealizeditwaslateandhehadtosaygoodbyetotheStoneForest.Onthehalfwayback,Andyheardhismum'scalling.ThenAndyquickenedhisstepsresponding

withgreetings.ThemomentSusancaughtsightofherson,shefeltrelievedwithsparkshereyes.AndythrewhimselfintoMum'sarms,sayinginathought

fulvoice,"I'msorry,MumIshouldhavetoldyoumyplanearlier.WhenAndytoldhismotherhewasabraveboy,SusanrealizedAndyhadgrownup,awarmf

lowspreadinginside.Alltheway,AndyshapedwhathediscoveredintheStoneForestandvolunteeredtobetheguidethenextday!写作第

一节评分标准一、评分原则1.本题总分为15分，按五个档次进行评分。2.评分时，应从内容、词汇、语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：（1）对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性。（2）使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。

3.评分时，先根据作答的整体情况初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡置，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4.评分时还应注意：（1）词数少于60或多于100的，从总分中减去2分。（2）单词拼号和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑；英、美拼写

及词汇用法均可接受。（3）因书写较差以致影响交际的，将分数降低一个档次。二、内容要点1.描述此现象；2.给出合理建议（至少两点）。三、各档次的给分范围及要求第五档：（13-15分）能写明全部要点；语言基本无误：行文

连贯，表达清楚。第四档：（10-12分）能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文不够连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档：（7-9分）能写明基本要点：语言虽有较多错误，但能基本达意。第二档：（4-6分）能写出部分要点；语言错误多，影响意思表达。第一档：（1-3分）只能

写出一两个要点；语言错误很多，只有个别句子正确。写作第二节评分标准一、评分原则1.本题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。2.评分时，应从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：（1）续写内容的质量、完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。（2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。（3）上下文

的衔接和全文的连贯性。3.评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后按照档次的具体要求去动态衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4.评分时还应注意：（1）词数少于120的，酌情扣分。（2）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。

（3）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。二、各档次的给分范围及要求第七档：（22-25分）创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情景融洽度

高使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解；自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。第六档：（18-21分）创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原

文情境融洽度较高；使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但不影响理解；比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第五档：（15-17分）创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性

，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关；使用了比较恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错误，但基本不影响理解；使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。第四档：（11-14分）创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关；使用了简单

的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解；尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。第三档：（6-10分）内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节；所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多

且比较低级，影响理解；未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。第六档：（1-5分）内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节；所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解；几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰

，意义不连贯。第一档：（0分）未作答；所写内容太少，或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容全部抄自试题内容或与题目要求完全毫不相关。