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Unit2Let’stalkteens单元话题满分范文必背1．假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom因为和父母之间有一些分歧，给你写了封求助信。他的烦恼有：1.他周末想看电视，可是父母除了学习，什么都不让他做。2.父母不理解，觉得他每门功课都应该是班上最好的，还经常看他的日记。请你根据以上情况给他回信并提出

建议（至少两条）。注意：1.短文应包括所提供的所有内容，也可以适当发挥。2.词数：100词左右。DearTom,_______________________________________________________

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案】DearTom,Youtoldmethatyoufeelunhappyrecently,foryoudisagreeswithyourparentsaboutwhatyoushoulddoorwhatyoushouldn’tdo.Yo

udowellinMathsandChinese,whileyoufindsEnglishandphysicsdifficulttolearn.You’reisundergreatpressurefromstudies.However,yourp

arentsdon’tunderstandyouandinsistthatyoushouldbethebestateverysubjectinyourclass.What’smore,theyoftenreadyourdiaries.Beside

s,youfeellikewatchingTVatweekends,butyourparentsallowyoutodonothingbutstudy.Worstofall,you’resoannoyedthatyoushowsnoin

terestinyourstudyatall.Ithink,firstofall,youshouldcommunicatewithyourparents,tellingthemyourtrouble.Andyoushouldcheerupassoonaspossible,workinghardto

qualityyourselfforajobinthefuture.Additionally,you’dbetterturntoyourteachersforadviceandmakeaplanonhowtoimproveyo

urEnglishandphysics.Yours,LiHua【解析】这是一篇应用文写作。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件；假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom因为和父母之间有一些分歧，给你写了封求助信。他的烦恼有：1.他周

末想看电视，可是父母除了学习，什么都不让他做。2.父母不理解，觉得他每门功课都应该是班上最好的，还经常看他的日记。请你根据以上情况给他回信并提出建议（至少两条）。第2步：根据写作要求,确定关键词（组）,如：disagreewith（不一致）；dowellin（擅长）；undergreatpress

ure（压力很大）；insist（坚持认为）；besides（而且）；cheerup（高兴起来）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是

非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如However,yourparentsdon’tunderstandyouandinsistthatyoushouldbethebestateverysubjectinyourclass.运

用了虚拟语气；Andyoushouldcheerupassoonaspossible,workinghardtoqualityyourselfforajobinthefuture.非谓语动词的运用。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路

清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。2．假定你是李华，最近你的美国朋友Tony在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。他心情不佳，来信寻求你的帮助和建议。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.安慰朋友；2.提出改善家庭关系的建议；3.表达祝愿。注意

：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总次数。DearTony,_____________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearTony,Iamsorry

tohearaboutyourcommunicationproblemswithyourparents,butIknowhowyoufeelsinceI’vehadsimilarproblemsbefore.H

erearemysuggestionsandIhopethingscangetbettersoon.First,let’sputourselvesintheirshoes.Parentsloveusandoftentrytop

reventusfrommakingmistakesthatseemobvioustothem.Besides,whenweshareourproblemswiththem,weoftenlookforalistenin

gearandanopenheart,notasolution.So,whatyouneedtodoistellthemaboutthisdifferenceandputtrustinthem.Ihopethesesuggestionswillhelp.Loo

kingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友托尼回信，对朋友给予安慰，并就如何改善家庭关系向对方提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：

suggestions→advice明显的：obvious→apparent另外：besides→inaddition信任某人：puttrustinsb→believeinsb2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Herearemysuggestionsa

ndIhopethingscangetbettersoon.拓展句：Herearemysuggestions，whichIhopecanhelpthingsgetbettersoon.【点睛】【高分句型1】Parentsloveusandoftentrytopreventusfrom

makingmistakesthatseemobvioustothem.（运用了that引导定语从句）【高分句型2】So,whatyouneedtodoistellthemaboutthisdifferenceandputtrustint

hem.（运用了what引导主语从句）3．假如你是李华，有一个好朋友叫王刚，进入高中后，他的学习压力越来越大，常常熬夜，而白天却打不起精神听课，学习成绩每况愈下，为此他很痛苦，写信求助于你。请你写一封信给他，提出一些自我调整的建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾

已给出，不计入总词数；3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearWangGang,__________________________________________________________

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__________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearWangGan

g,I’msorrytohearthatyouarehavingdifficultyinlearning.Herearesomepiecesofadvice,hopingtheyarehelpfultoyou.Firstly,youshouldfollowyourteachers’adv

ice,asit’sthefirsttimeforustogothroughtheCollegeEntranceExaminationwhileourteachershavesomuchexperience.Secondly,youare

advisedtohaveagoodsleepbecausealackofsleepmaymakeyouhaveahardtimecatchingupinyourstudies.Thirdly,it’snecessaryforyoutomakef

ulluseofdaytime.Inaword,relaxyourselfandbelieveinyourself,andIdobelieveyoucanbesuccessful!Yourstruly,LiHua【解析

】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友王刚写一封关于提出一些自我调整的建议的回复信。【详解】第一步：明确要求。本篇书面表达要求假如你是李华，有一个好朋友叫王刚，进入高中后，他的学习压力越来越大，常常熬夜，而白

天却打不起精神听课，学习成绩每况愈下，为此他很痛苦，写信求助于你。请你写一封信给他，提出一些自我调整的建议。第二步：列关键词。如：besorryto，havedifficultyindoing，followone’sadvice，gothrough，alackof，makefullus

eof，inaword，believein等。第三步：连词成句。根据列出的关键词造句，注意主谓一致，时态语态等语法。第四步：连句成文。注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，如：Firstly、Se

condly、Thirdly、Inaword等。书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】此范文表达流畅，语言优美，内容全面，符合题目要求。其中值得学习的句型有：非谓语动词的运用：Herearesomepiecesofadvice,hopingt

heyarehelpfultoyou.和Thirdly,it’snecessaryforyoutomakefulluseofdaytime.as引导的原因状语从句：Firstly,youshouldfollowyourteachers’adv

ice,asit’sthefirsttimeforustogothroughtheCollegeEntranceExaminationwhileourteachershavesomuchexperience.4．为了帮

助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑李华，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信

。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息。参考词汇：tempern.脾气，情绪DearWorried,I’msorrytoknowthatyou’reh

avingsuchabadtimeatthemoment._________________________________________________________________________________

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_____________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearWorried,I’msorrytoknowthatyou’reh

avingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,soyoudon'thavetoworrys

omuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.Herearethreeusefultips:First,talktosomeon

eyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriends

asphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.Andthird,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifeca

nbehelpfulinliftingyourspirits.Ihopeyou'llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasnormal.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇表达属于应用文，要求考生给有困难的学生提供帮助。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用

文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时要求：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）period;controlyourtemper;let…out;effective;getridof第三步：连词成句1.Thetruthi

severyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong2.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourt

empersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.3.Thisisagoodwayoflettingyourangeroutwithouthurtingot

hersoryourself.4.gooutdoorsandplayteamgameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词

造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlas

t2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系

：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,

so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全

面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Thetruthiseveryonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong这句话前半句运用了表语从句，

省略了关系词that，后半句运用了时间状语从句。Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtempersothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.运用了sothat引导的目的状语从句，固定搭配运用了如period;

controlyourtemper;let…out;effective;getridof等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。5．假如你是校英语报Seeking

Help栏目的编辑李华，今天收到Tina的一封求助信，信中提到她的妈妈过度担心她，整天只让她学习，不让她与朋友出去玩儿，她十分崩溃。请你给Tina写一封回信，内容主要包括：1.表示理解；2.提供建议；3.表达支持。注意:1.不要逐字翻译，可以适当增加细节

，以使行文连贯;2.词数100左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearTina,____________________________________________________________________________________________________

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________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearTina,Idoagreethats

tudiesareimportant.Butitshouldn’tbeeverything.Yourmomwantstogivethebesttoyou,butsheshouldknowthatasyougro

wup,youwillbeindependentsoonerorlater.Isuggestthatyoufirstcommunicatewithyourmomandtellherthatyouareawa

reofherconcern.Youcanalsobemoreopenwithheraboutyourschoolwork.Lastly,doreassureherthatyouarearesponsible

andcaringdaughter.Therearemanythingsinlifewhichareworthfocusingon.Keepgoing!I’malwayshereforyou.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如

你是校英语报SeekingHelp栏目的编辑李华，今天收到Tina的一封求助信，信中提到她的妈妈过度担心她，整天只让她学习，不让她与朋友出去玩儿，她十分崩溃。请你给Tina写一封回信。【详解】1.词汇积累意识到：beawareof→

realize迟早：soonerorlater→earlyorlate重要的：important→vital关注：focuson→concentrateon2.句式拓展并列句变复合句原句：Idoagreethatstudiesareimportant.Butitshouldn

’tbeeverything.拓展句：AlthoughIdoagreethatstudiesareimportant,itshouldn’tbeeverything.【点睛】[高分句型1]Idoagreethatstudiesare

important.(运用了that引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]Therearemanythingsinlifewhichareworthfocusingon.(运用了which引导定语从句)6．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友T

om写信告诉你由于他最近迷上电脑游戏而熬夜，忽视学业，并受父母责骂，和父母发生了争吵，心里很烦恼。你回信劝说他正确解决这个问题。内容包括：1.表示理解；2.指出玩手机游戏的危害（至少两点）；3.建议向父母道歉。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以

使行文连贯。DearTom,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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iHua【答案】DearTom,I’veheardthatrecentlyyouareobsessedwithcomputergamesandyourparentsarenothappywiththatbecauseyoustayupatnightt

oplaycomputergamesandpaylessattentiontostudy.Tobehonest,whatyoudidisnotrightthing.Iunderstandyouandalsothinkcomputergamesareint

eresting.However,wearestudents.Studyisourmaintask.Wehavetostudyhardsothatwecangototopuniversityandfindadecentjobinthefuture.Ple

asedon'targuewithyourparents,sincetheyarejustconcernedaboutyourhealthandstudy.Ithinkyoushouldapologizetothem

sincerely.Youaresupposedtofocusonyourstudyinsteadofmobilephonegames,whichhavenegativeeffectsonyourhealth.Isuggestth

atyoufinishyourhomeworkfirstandfindabalancebetweenstudyandentertainment.Ihopethatmysuggestioncanhelpyou.Expectingyourgoodnews.Yours,LiHua【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定考生是李华，你的美国笔友Tom写信告诉你由于他最近迷上电脑游戏而熬夜，忽视学业，并受父母责骂，和父母发生了争吵，心里很烦恼。你回信劝说他正确解决这个问题。【详解】1.词汇积累沉迷于：beaddictedto→beobsessedwith对……满

意：besatisfiedwith→behappywith关心：beworriedabout→beconcernedabout建议：advise→suggest2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Iunderstandyouandalsothinkcompute

rgamesareinteresting.However,wearestudents.拓展句：AlthoughIunderstandyouandalsothinkcomputergamesareinteresting,wearestud

ents.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’veheardthatrecentlyyouareobsessedwithcomputergamesandyourparentsarenothappywiththatbecauseyou

stayupatnighttoplaycomputergamesandpaylessattentiontostudy.(运用了because引导原因状语从句)[高分句型2]Tobehonest,whatyoudidisnotrightthing.(运用了what引导主语从

句)7．某英语杂志社正在举办以“Howtogetalongwellwithourparents”为主题的面向高中生的征文比赛。假设你是高中生李华，请你根据以下要点写一篇征文稿：1.高中生的特点：有自己的想法

，向往独立的生活，渐渐跟父母产生分歧等；2.处理方式：多跟父母沟通；多听父母的意见；多花时间陪伴父母等。注意：1.词数100左右；2.文章需包含所给的全部要点，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇：独立的independentHowtogetalongwe

llwithourparents____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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___________________________【答案】HowtogetalongwellwithourparentsAsseniorhighschoolstudents,wemaywantamoreindependentlifeandhop

etomakeourdecisionsonourown.However,ourparentsmaydisagreewithusonsomeissues.Ourrelationshipwithourparentsmaybeintroublerightn

ow.Ihopethefollowingtipscanhelpusgetalongwellwithourparents.First,talkwithourparents.Inordertounderstandourparentsbetter,wehavetospendtimetalkingwit

hthem.Second,trytoremaincalmwhenourparentshavedifferentopinionswithus.We’dbetterlistenopenlytowhatthey

sayandacceptthattheymayhavereasonablepoints.Lastbutnotleast,maketimewithourparents.Thisdoesn’tmeanjustsittinginfrontoftheTVtogether.Instead,findsom

emoremeaningfulactivitiestodotogether,suchastravelling,cooking,doingsportsandsoon.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇征文稿，参加某英语杂志社正在举办的以“Howtog

etalongwellwithourparents”为主题的面向高中生的征文比赛。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：tip→advice保持：remain→stay观点：opinion→view相反：instead→ont

hecontrary2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inordertounderstandourparentsbetter,wehavetospendtimetalkingwiththem.拓展句：Wehavetospendtimetalkingwiththemsothatwec

anunderstandthembetter.【点睛】【高分句型1】Second,trytoremaincalmwhenourparentshavedifferentopinionswithus.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）【高分句型2】We’dbette

rlistenopenlytowhattheysayandacceptthattheymayhavereasonablepoints.（运用了what和that引导的宾语从句）8．假定你是“微胖”李华，最近在节食减肥方面跟父母产生了矛盾，导致家庭关系紧张，为此很苦

恼。请给“TeenagersNow”专栏作家MsJenkins写封信，寻求帮助，要点如下：1.高中生是否应该在意体重问题；2.平时父母对你要求太高，不知怎样和他们相处；3.表示感谢。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMsJenkins,__

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ua【答案】DearMsJenkins,I’mLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudent,whoisabitover-weight.NowI’mencounteringsomeproblems.Therefore,Iamwritingtoaskforyourhel

p.RecentlymyparentsandIhadabigargumentaboutmydietingtoloseweight,whichcausedfamilytensions.Doyouthinkseniorhighschoolstudentsshouldpaymuchattention

toourweight?Besides,withhighexpectation,theyareverystrictwithme.I’mundergreatpressureanddon’tknowhowtogetalongwiththem.Iwouldmuchap

preciateitifyoucoulddomeafavor.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给“TeenagersNow”专栏作家MsJenkin

s写封信，就你最近因为在节食减肥而与父母产生矛盾的事情寻求帮助，要点如下：高中生是否应该在意体重问题；平时父母对你要求太高，不知怎样和他们相处；表示感谢。【详解】1.词汇积累争论：argument→dispute引起：cause→

induce此外：besides→inaddition和某人相处：getalongwith→getonwith2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：NowI’mencounteringsomeproblems.拓展句：NowI’menc

ounteringsomeproblemswhichbotherme.【点睛】[高分句型1]I’mLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudent,whoisabitover-weight.(运用了who

引导的非限定性定语从句)[高分句型2]RecentlymyparentsandIhadabigargumentaboutmydietingtoloseweight,whichcausedfamilytensions.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)9

．假如你是高中学生李华。近来，就英文报纸“Teens”所提出的话题：“孩子们的压岁钱应该由谁来保管？”，读者们开展了热烈的讨论。请你写一封投稿信，谈谈你的看法。要点包括：1.你的看法；2.原因（2点）

；3.恰当的结尾。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.100词左右；信件的开头已提供，不计入总字数。3.参考词汇：压岁钱luckymoneyDearEditor,I’mwritingtosharemy

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_______________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearEditor,I’mwritingtosharemyopinionabout“Whoshouldbeinchargeofchildren’sluckymoney”,whichhascausedaheateddi

scussionamongthereaders.Asaseniorhighstudent,Ibelieveitisthechildrenthatshouldtakecontroloftheirownmoneyforthefollowingtworeasons.First,luck

ymoneycontainsgoodwishesfromtheoldergeneration.Bykeepingthemoneybythemselves,childrenwillberemindedoftheirloveandcare.B

esides,giventherighttodealwiththeirownmoney,childrenwillhaveagreatopportunitytoestablishaclearideaoff

inancialmanagement.Ihopeourparentstrustusandgiveusachancetoproveourselves.Thanksforyourreading.(109words)【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一

封投稿信，就英文报纸“Teens”所提出的话题：“孩子们的压岁钱应该由谁来保管？”谈谈自己的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累观点：opinion→view管理：beinchargeof→takechargeof此外：besides→what’smore包含：contain→include2.

句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Besides,giventherighttodealwiththeirownmoney,childrenwillhaveagreatopportunitytoestablishaclearideaoffinancialmanagement.拓展句：Besides,

ifchildrenaregiventherighttodealwiththeirownmoney,theywillhaveagreatopportunitytoestablishaclearideaoffinancialmanagement.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’mwriting

tosharemyopinionabout“Whoshouldbeinchargeofchildren’sluckymoney”,whichhascausedaheateddiscussionamongthereaders.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从

句）【高分句型2】Asaseniorhighstudent,Ibelieveitisthechildrenthatshouldtakecontroloftheirownmoneyforthefollowingtworeasons.

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