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专题十咨询信应用文+读后续写应用文写作假定你是李华,打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给TravelAmerica国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询,内容如下:1.请其推荐合适的旅游路线;2.请其告知相关的旅游费用
。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【写作示例】Step1:精准审题谋篇布局人称第一人称(Ⅰ),第二人称(you)时态一般现在时段落布局开头点题:说明写信目的主体段落:说明需要咨询的内容结尾:期待对方的回信Step2:字斟句酌巧妙润色1.我打算在美国住1
0天左右,希望能看一看那些独特的自然风景,品味一下当地的风俗。①一般表达:I______________________________,andIhopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveat
asteoflocalcustoms.②句式升级(定语从句):IintendtostayinAmericaforabout10days,______________________________Ihopetohavealookatsomeuniquenaturalsceneryandhaveat
asteoflocalcustoms.2.除此之外,我想了解包括所有旅行费用的路线的价格。①一般表达:Inaddition,I'dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,andallthetravelingex
penses.②句式升级(分词短语作定语):Inaddition,I'dliketoknowthepricesoftheroutes,______________________________.Step3:衔接过渡斐然成篇__________________
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___________________________________________读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Onesummerday,Ifoundamediumsizeddogsitt
inginthegrass.Thedogstoodupandwaggeditstailwhenitspottedme.IpetteditscoatandcheckeditforacollaroranIDtag.Ithadneither.Itoldittosit.Tomysurprise,it
satobediently(服从地).Isetoutabowlofwaterandaheartyhelpingoffood,anditstartedeating.Ileftitintheyardandwentinsidetoreadthroughth
enewspaper's“LostandFound”column.Unfortunately,nobodyhadreportedamissingbrownandwhitedog.Laterthatafter
noon,Iwentoutsideandfoundthedogstilllyingbythebackdoor.Seeingme,itjumpedtoitsfeetandstartedwaggingitstailexcitedly.Itosse
d(抛;掷)astickacrosstheyard,anditracedafterit.Icouldn'thelpplayingwithitandsoonfoundthatitknewmanytrickssuchasfetching,sitting,staying,rollingover,lyin
gdownandcatchingatennisballinmidair.Obviously,someonehadtraineditextremelywell.Whenmyparentscamehome,Ishowedthemthedogan
dallitstricks.TheyweresurprisedasmuchasIwas.Thenextday,Icalledthenewspaperandrana“Found”addescribingournewfriend.WhileIplayedwiththedogl
ater,itsuddenlydawnedonmethatthedogwastooquiet.Itolditto“speak”.Butitjuststaredatmeandremainedsilent.Thissuperdogwasbecomingmoreofamyst
eryeachday.Itcouldwalkonitsbacklegs,balanceaballontheendofitsnose,andgiveapawfora“handshake”,butitneverbarked.Threedayslater,wegot
acallfromawomansayingthatthedogsoundedlikehersandgaveusaperfectdescriptionofitsmarkings.Igaveherdirectionstoourhouse,andshesai
dshe'dcomewithinthehourtogetthedog.Noneofuswantedtoadmitthatwehadsecretlyhopedwe'dbeabletokeepit.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下
格式作答。Whenthewoman'spickuptruckpulledintothedriveway,thedogracedtogreether.________________________________________
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__________________________________________“Butwhycan'titbark?”Iasked.______________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【词汇积累】
情感类excitedlyadv.兴奋地surprisedadj.吃惊的;感到惊讶的动作类wagv.摇摆;摆动balancev.使保持平衡;立稳【发散思维】1.Whatdidthedogdotogreet
itsowner?________________________________________________________________________2.Whydidthedogknowsomanytrick
s?________________________________________________________________________3.Whydidthedogneverbark?__________________________________________
______________________________4.Howdidthewomanfeelwhenshegotthedogback?________________________________________________________________________5
.Whatwastheauthor'sreactionwhenthedoggraduallydisappearedfromhissight?______________________________
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