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专题18书面表达应用文备战2023高考英语考试易错题（新高考专用）（解析版）【易错题01】不一致１．主谓不一致Whenhehavemoney,heoftenbuyswhathewantto.【答案】have改为has;want改为wants【错误分析

】没有注重英语中谓语动词需要和主语保持时态，语态，人称和数的一致。单纯的按汉语意思来翻译。【写作思路】句子的核心谓语动词时刻保持人称一致，时态，语态合理运用，不可按汉语直译。2.前后指代不一致Wecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingyou

rself.【答案】we改为you;或yourself改为ourselves【错误分析】句中人称代词we和反身代词yourself指代不一致。【写作思路】保持前后指代一致。Wecanalsoknowthesocietyby

servingitourselves./Youcanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself。３．句子不完整或者多词Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newsp

aperandsoon.【答案】将for改为小写，前面句号改为逗号。【错误分析】“ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清。【写作思路】Therear

emanywaystoknowthesociety，forexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.在句子写完以后，想加些补充说明时需要考虑句子结构和成分是否完整。一易错题类型Notonlythisactivi

tyenrichyourschoollifebutalsoitcanbroadenyourhorizons.【答案】在only后面加can。【错误分析】本句属于特殊句式中的倒装句。助动词漏用，，没有倒装。【写作思路】Notonly用于句子开头时，

句子使用部分倒装句型。助动词用于主语之前。故Notonlycanthisactivityenrichyourschoollifebutalsoitcanbroadenyourhorizons.Fort

hepeoplewhotheyarediligentandkind,theyusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.【答案】去掉they【错误分析】定语从句中关系代词充当成分，重复使用句子成分。【写作思路】关系代词who充当

定语从句中的主语，定语从句中多了人称代词。故Forthepeoplewhoarediligentandkind,theyusemoneyonlytobuywhattheyneed.4．词性误用Sincere,Ihopethisactivitywillbeofgreatbenefittoyou

.【答案】在only后面加can。【错误分析】词性误用一般表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等【写作思路】遣词造句时，需要考虑词性与修饰的关系。故Sincerely,Ihopethisactivitywillbeofgreatbenefittoyou.Theoldm

anwashitbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.【答案】将across改为wascrossing【错误分析】across是介词，不能误用作动词。【写作思路】Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenhewascrossingthestreet.5．指代不清Lilyw

asfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedhertobeherbridesmaid.【答案】将her改为mysister【错误分析】本句话没有明确两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。代词与被指代的人或物关系不清或者先后所用的代词不一致。【

写作思路】写作是逻辑意思以及句子前后指代应当清晰一致。故Lilywasfriendlytomysisterbecauseshewantedmysistertobeherbridesmaid.【易错题02】低级词汇

集中1.动词类简单词汇attend，cause,help,consider,consider,happen,have,improve,master,realize,remember,should,thank,use,tend,understand,can’t,decide,liein,thi

nkof,tryone’sbest,高级词汇takepartin/beinvolvedin/participatein;leadto/resultin/contributeto/giveriseto;dosb.afavor/lends

bahelpinghand;take...intoconsideration/account;occur/comeabout;possess/improve;promote;haveagoodcommandof;beawareof;be

ar/keepinmind;besupposedto;appreciate/begratefultosb.;makeuseof/takeadvantageof;haveatendencytodosth.;makesenseof/figureout;h

avetrouble/difficultyindoingsth;determinetodosth;bedeterminedtodosth.;belocatedin/besituatedin;sthocc

urstosb.;sparenoefforttodosth.;【动词分析】选词简单，不够高级，汉语意思直白翻译。【选词思路】注重积累，短语优先选择。2.名词类简单词汇chance;choice;people;result;shortco

ming;moreandmorepeople;allkindsof高级词汇opportunity;alternative;individuals;consequence;drawback;anincreasingnumberofpeople;awiderangeof;awi

devarietyof典例剖析(2022全国高考乙卷满分作文)Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoos

ingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.【高级词汇】anincreasingnumber代替many【选词思路】注重积累，选词应当使用能够吸引阅

卷老师目光的高级词汇和短语，使句子出类拔萃。3.形容词类简单词汇good;difficult;enough;free;important;lucky;popular;proper;rich;tired;beangrywith;bebusyw

ith;beboredwith;beveryhappy;beinterestedin高级词汇outstanding/distinguished/brilliant;challenging;adequate;available;

essential/vital/significant;fortunate;enjoygreatpopularity;appropriate;abundant;exhausted/wornout;beannoyedwith;beoccupiedwith/buryoneselfin;

befedupwith;bewildwithjoy;haveagreatpassionfor;becrazyabout;sthappealtosb;befascinatedby4.副词类简单词汇finally;hardly;immediately;nowadays;so;suddenly;v

ery高级词汇eventually/ultimately;barely;withouthesitation/delay;currently;consequently/therefore;allofasud

den;extremely5.介词类简单词汇considering;during;infact;inaword高级词汇inviewof;inthecourseof;asamatteroffact;tosummarize/inc

onclusion/tosumup【易错题02】句子呆板不生动1.运用介词（短语）Becausehehelpedme,Ifinishedthetaskontime.→Thanktohishelp,Iaccomplis

hedthetaskontime.【原句分析】句型呆板，缺乏灵动性。【写作思路】注重积累，短语优先选择。可以运用介词短语对句子进行转化，可以使句子简洁有新意。【知识拓展】常用介词短语有becauseof,

aswellas,bydoing;through,butfor,despite,inspiteof,on/uponthanksto等。典例剖析(2022年全国高考新高考I卷应用文写作)Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”is

intendedtoarousestudents’interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine.【选词思路】介词with短语作后

置定语，增加句子的变化性，彰显出灵活的句子结构运用能力。2.运用定语从句和名词性从句Hehastwosonsandbothofthemaredoctors.→Hehastwosons,bothofwhomaredoctors.Weallknowthatheisa

warm-heartedman.→Whatisknowntousallisthatheisawarmheartedman.【原句分析】句型较为简单，只运用了比较容易的并列句和宾语从句。【写作思路】不改变句意，运用定语从句和名词性从句可以对并列句进行升华，可以

使句子脱颖而出。3.运用非谓语短语对祈使句和从句进行转化Hewastoldmanytimes,buthedidn’tmemorizetherule.→Toldmanytimes,hedidn’tmemorizetherule.Theyenteredthefores

tinsearchofthemissingboy.→Theyenteredtheforesttosearchforthemissingboy.AsIwaslyingonthegrass,Ithoughtofmybro

therwhowasstudyingabroad.→Lyingonthegrass,Ithoughtofmybrotherstudyingabroad.【原句分析】句型运用了比较容易的并列句和介词短语，比较单一。【写作思路】一篇高分文章应当多种句型运用丰富，非谓语的熟练运用是能体现高水

准的表达方式之一，可以转化祈使句，并列句和从句。1.（2022年全国乙卷书面表达）......Itturnsoutthatstudentsattachgreaterimportancetointerestandentertainmentinsteadoftraditiona

lapproachessuchasreadingbookswhenlearningEnglish.However,frommypointofview,whatbenefitsstudentsmostisr

eadingEnglishbooks,foritisoneofthebestwaystoincreasevocabularyandtostrengthentheunderstandingofgrammar.【佳句赏析】句意：事实证明，学生在学习英语时更重视兴趣和娱乐，而不是像阅读书籍等传

统方法。然而，在我看来，对学生最有利的是阅读英语书籍，因为这是增加词汇量和加强对语法理解的最好方法之一。句型运用Itturnsoutthat灵活生动。动词短语attachgreaterimportanceto代替payattentionto高级不单调，实为背诵佳句。下段运用介词短语f

rommypointofview于主语之前，句子显得很有新意。使用名词性从句作主语，写作中实为加分项。2.(2022年全国高考新高考I卷读后续写)...Iquietlysaid,“David,ifyou’renotrunningbecauseyou’reafraidsomeoneisgoi

ngtolaugh,that’snotagoodenoughreason.二举一反三【选词思路】熟练使用形容词enough;副词quietly;连词if,because等引导从句，句子生动不简单。【佳句赏析】句意：我平静地说：“大卫，如果你因为害怕有人会笑而不跑步，那是

一个足够好的理由。”if引导条件状语从句，because引导原因状语从句，以及句子中形容词和副词的运用都显示出作者很扎实的基本功，适合背诵模仿。3.(2022年全国高考新高考II卷)Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyo

ucanshareyourideaswithstudents.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.【选词思路】句子中高级词汇和短语熟练运用

，amazing,share...with;havetroubleindoing;plentyof;dealwith。【佳句赏析】句意：这是一个很棒的项目，你可以与学生们分享你的想法。现在，当他们在学习英语方面遇到困难时，很多学生都很

想知道如何处理它。where引导的定语从句先行词表示抽象地点的program,这是高考中语法填空的常考知识点，作者能将其运用于写作中，实乃妙句。When后运用了省略句，以及句子中大量的短语，都为作文加分亮点。应用文1.(2022年全国高考

新高考I卷写作)假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相

应位置作答。DearCaroline,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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___________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【满分范文】Onepossibleversion:DearCaroline,Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoattendourprogram“TalkandTalk”i

nourschoolbroadcastingstationat7:00p.m.nextFriday.Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”isintendedtoarousestudents’interestin

differentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteacher,youropinionwillbeofimportance.Inthe

program,youcancommunicatewithourschoolstudents,whichnotonlyprovidesaplatformforstudentstorelievetheirpressureandaddspicetotheirdullroutine,butalso

inspirestheirinterestinwesternculture.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldspareyourtimetojoinus.Anearlyreplyaboutyourfinaldecisionwillbehighl

yappreciated.Yours,【佳作赏析】第一段开门见山表达写信目的Iamwritingtoinviteyouto...。紧接着便是节目话题介绍Theprogramwiththetheme“Culturedifferences”isintendedtoarousest

udents’interestindifferentculturesespeciallywesterncultureaboutAmericancuisine.第二段第一句表明邀请参加的目的Asourdistinguish

edfore....接着展开描写参加活动的意义Intheprogram,youcancommunicate...。其中倒装句notonly...butalso是一大亮点。最后一段再次邀请.I’dapp

reciateitifyou...。2.(2022年全国高考新高考II卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括：1.节目介绍；2.访谈的时间和话题。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相

应位置作答。DearCaroline,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________

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________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【满分范文】DearCaroline,ThisismyfirsttimethatIhaveinvitedyou

toattendourprogram—TalkandTalk.ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwasestablished.Thisisanamazingprogramwhereyoucanshareyourideaswithstudent

s.Now,whenhavingtroubleinlearningEnglishwell,plentyofstudentsurgetoknowhowtodealwithit.Asourdistinguishedforeignlanguageteac

her,youraidcanhelpusalot.IfyouareavailableonthisSunday,ItogetherwiththewholeTalkandTalkstaffamwaitingforyourcoming.I’d

appreciateitifyoutakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】1.句型“自从......以来多久了”ItistenyearssinceTalkandTalkwases

tablished.2.省略句whenhavingtrouble的运用。3.短语搭配运用灵活share...with;havetroubleindoingsth;urgetodosth;beavailable;4.虚拟语气句式运用I’da

ppreciateitifyou...3.（2022年1月浙江卷）假定你是李华，在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris，现在他已回国，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.回忆活动经历；2.分享个人收获；3.希望保持联系。注意：1.词数80左右；3.可

适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearChris,_________________________________________________________________________________________

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___________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【满分范文】DearChris,Howareyoudoingthesedays?IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIre

land.Imissyousomuch.IstillremembertheverydaywhenwemetatChina-IrelandCulturalFestivaltwoyearsago.Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousha

redsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,throughwhichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.Werea

llyenjoyedourselvesthere.What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.ThoughIfeltalittlesorrythatyo

uleftChinalastyear,Iampleasedtoknowyouareleadingahappylifeinyourhometown.Ihopewecankeepintouchoften.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】1.句型表

示“自从......以来多久了”IthasbeenayearsinceyoucamebacktoIreland.2.定语从句whenwemetatChina-IrelandCulturalFestival

twoyearsago.3.强调句型Itwasatthatfestivalthatyousharedsomanyinterestingthingsaboutyourcountrytogether,4.非限制性定语从句throughwh

ichIlearnedalotaboutyourfood,cultureandhistory.5.名词性从句中主语从句和表语从句What’sfarmoreimportantisthatwebecamegoodfriendsthen.6.让

步状语从句ThoughIfeltalittlesorrythatyouleftChinalastyear,7.短语灵活运用如：share...with;ampleasedto；areleadingahappylife；keepintouch.5.(2022湖南雅礼中学

测试卷）假如你是李华，你的巴基斯坦笔友Muhammad准备明年来你校做交换生，写信向你咨询如何学习中文。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。要点：1.表示欢迎；2.提出学习中文建议；3.期待与祝福。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearMuhammad

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________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【满分范文】Dear

Muhammad,Welcometobeanexchangestudentatourschoolnextyear.AstohowtolearnChinese,herecomemytips.First,youmighta

swelltakeaChinesecoursetolayasolidfoundation.What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms,whichwillenab

leyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.Plus,befriendingwarmheartedChinesefriendsaroundyouissuretobetteryouroralChinese.Meanwhile,itcanenric

hyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.Ihopemysuggestionsabovemaybenefityou.Hopeyouwillmakesuf

ficientprogressinChinesesoon.Iamlookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】1.Plus,notonlyisbefriendingwarmheartedChinesef

riendsaroundyousuretobetteryouroralChinese,butalsoitcanenrichyourknowledgeofChinesecustoms.2.What’smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVpr

ograms,whichwillenableyoutoaccessstandardandauthenticChinese.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)3.Finally,Isuggestyoutrye-mailingmeinChinese.(运用了省略that的宾语

从句和虚拟语气)4.词汇积累：至于：asto→asfor；建议：tip/suggestion→advice；明智的：wise→advisable；此外：what’smore→besides6.（2022

年全国甲卷书面表达）你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保护海洋的倡议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。____

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nsibilityDoyouknowJune8,whichisnotonlyadayforthecollegeentranceexaminationtoChineseyoungsters,butalsoWorldOceansDay,designatedbyt

heUNtoarousepeople’sawarenesstoprotecttheoceans?Theoceanisthehometoalllifeonearth,richinnaturalresources,andalsoourbluehomeforah

appylifeandhappygrowth.Tocarefortheoceanistocareforourfuture.Soweshouldshoulderresponsibilitytoprotectit.T

obeginwith,protecttheMarineecologicalenvironmentandadvocategreenenvironmentalprotectionactions.What’smore,tostren

gthentheconsciousnessoftheseainaccordancewiththelaw,consciouslyprotectthebluelandandresourcesenvironment,startfromme,startfromnow,startfromaro

undthings,takeanactivepartingreenvolunteeractivities,andadvocategreenenvironmentalprotection.Doyouagreewithme?Ifso,let’shandinhandtoprotecttheMarin

eenvironment,andinherittheMarinecivilizationfromhearttoheart.（165）【佳作赏析】1.运用定语从句whichisnotonlyadayforthecollegeentranceexaminatio

ntoChineseyoungsters,butalso...，并在其中穿插关联词组notonly...butalso...。2.目的状语Tocarefortheoceanistocareforourfuture.中todo不定式的运用。3.熟练运用

短语arouseone’sawareness...;berichin;carefor;tobeginwith;what’smore;inaccordancewith;takeanactivepartin;handinhand等。7.（2022年全国乙卷书面表达）学校

英文报正在开展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1．学习活动状况描述：2．简单评论；3．你的建议。注意：1．词数100左右；

2．短文的题目和首句已为你写好。LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.____________________________

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________________________________________________【满分范文】LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomTherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.Re

centlyasurveyabouthowtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroomhasbeenconducted.Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthestatistics,appreciating

Englishsongsaccountsfor65percentcomparedwith50%whochoosetowatchmoviesasawayofEnglishlearning.ReadingEnglishbooksprovetobethelesspopularwaysmakin

gup18%,togetherwithvisitingEnglishlearningwebsites,takingup12%.Itturnsoutthatstudentsattachgreaterimpo

rtancetointerestandentertainmentinsteadoftraditionalapproachessuchasreadingbookswhenlearningEnglish.However,frommypointofview,whatben

efitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,foritisoneofthebestwaystoincreasevocabularyandtostrengthentheunderstandingofgrammar.Therefore,studentsbecomebe

stEnglishlearnersquickly.【佳作赏析】文中加分句型和短语都能运用自如。1.Therebe句型的运用TherearemanythingswecandotolearnEnglishwell.2.As引导

的定语从句Ascanbeclearlyseenfromthestatistics3.动名词短语作主语appreciatingEnglishsongsaccountsfor65percentcomparedwith50%4.定语从句whochoosetow

atchmoviesasawayofEnglishlearning.5.动名词短语做主语ReadingEnglishbooksprovetobethelesspopularwaysmakingup18%...6.句型Itturnsoutthatstudents......的运用.7.名词性从句

中主语从句的运用whatbenefitsstudentsmostisreadingEnglishbooks,8.（2022重庆一中模拟）假定你是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。内容

包括：1.表示同意；2.计划拍摄的内容（1~2点）；3.邀请对方提建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当増加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearJames,_______________________________________________

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_________Yours,LiHua【满分范文】DearJames,Howiseverythinggoing?It’smygreatprivilegetorecordashortvideoaboutmycampuslifeforyourclassma

tes.I’mwritingtotellyouwhatwillbeincludedinthevideo.Firstofall,asastudent,takingdifferentclassesismydailyroutine,soI

wouldliketorecordascenefocusingononeofmyChineseclassestoshowmyacademiclifeandChineseculture．Inaddition,awidevarietyofextra-curricularactivities

areheldeverydayinmyschoolandthereforeshowingmyafter-schoolactivitiesisalsoinmyplan,fromwhichyourclassmatescanlearnthediversityofChinesehi

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ngforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【佳作赏析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。1.Firstofall,asastudent,tak

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想邀请他参与下周学校组织的“劳动实践周”（LabourWeek）活动。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.邀请Kim参加活动；2.介绍活动目的和内容。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearKim,_______________________________

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________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearKim,It’sgreattoknowyouwillvisitourschoolnextweekandI’dliketoinv

iteyoutojoinintheactivity—LabourWeekinourschool.Theevent,whichwilllastaweekasscheduled,isintendedtoraiseourawarene

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：raise此外：besides各种各样的：various10.（2022福建厦门测试卷）你校英语俱乐部将要举办“职业规划”主题分享会，请你结合个人情况写一篇稿件，内容包括：1.理想职业；2.个人优势；3.相关准备。

注意：1.词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。MapOutMyCareerPath___________________________________________________________

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___________________________【答案】MapOutMyCareerPathHelloeveryone,itismygreathonorandpleasuretosharewithyoumyideason

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