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短文改错专练(四)Test1[2019·济南高三模拟]DearMr.Brown，WehavelearnedthatyouweregoingbacktoAmericaforthesummervacation

.Toexpressourthankforyourexcellentteachinginourschool,wehavedecidedhaveapartyforyou.Thepartywhichwillstartat6：30onFridayev

eninginthelecturehall.Itwillpossiblelastanhour.Tostartwith,ourmonitorwillgiveaspeechonbehalfofawholeclass.Th

enwewouldliketoinviteyoutojoinusandsingingsomeEnglishsongs.Intheendoftheparty,wewillpresentyouwithsomegiftsa

ndcards,mostlymakingbyourselves.Ibelieveyouwillhaveagoodtimetogether.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yourssincerely，Frank答案与解析

：DearMr.Brown，Wehavelearnedthatyouwere①aregoingbacktoAmericaforthesummervacation.Toexpressourthank②thanksforyourexcellentteachinginour

school,wehavedecided∧③tohaveapartyforyou.Thepartywhichwillstartat6：30onFridayeveninginthelecturehall.Itwillpossible⑤possi

blylastanhour.Tostartwith,ourmonitorwillgiveaspeechonbehalfofa⑥the/ourwholeclass.Thenwewouldliketoinviteyoutojoinusandsinging⑦singsom

eEnglishsongs.In⑧Attheendoftheparty,wewillpresentyouwithsomegiftsandcards,mostlymaking⑨madebyourselves.Ibelieveyo

u⑩wewillhaveagoodtimetogether.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yourssincerely，Frank①were改为are考查时态。根据主从句时态一致的原则，并结合语境可知，对方回美国是将

来要发生的事情，故用are,begoingbackto...表示“将要回到……”。②thank改为thanks考查名词。根据前面的“our”并结合语境可知，此处应用名词，故用名词thanks“谢意”。③decided后加to考查固定搭配。decidetodosth.固定短语“决定做某事”，故在d

ecided后加to。④删除which考查关系词。分析句子结构可知，本句是一个简单句，不是一个主从复合句，句中的“willstart”作谓语，which多余，故删除。⑤possible改为possibly考查副词。

分析句子结构可知，本句中的last是动词，表示“持续”，故用副词possibly修饰动词last，在句子中作状语。⑥a改为the/our考查限定词。此处表示“代表整个班级/我们整个班级”，故用定冠词the或形容词性物主代词our修饰。⑦singing改为sing考查非谓语动词。根据and可知，此

处和前面的join并列，应用动词原形。⑧In改为At考查介词。attheendof...固定短语“在……结束时”，符合语境；intheend意为“最后”，单独使用，后不跟介词of。⑨making改为m

ade考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，动词make和其逻辑主语somegiftsandcards构成动宾关系，且和介词by呼应，故用过去分词作后置定语。⑩you改为we考查代词。根据句中的together

和语境可知，此处表示“我们”，故把you改为we。Test2[2019·合肥市质量检测]LastmonthourclassorganizedahikealongtheChaobaiRiver,whichrunthroughHebei,BeijingandTianjin.Muchtomyd

isappoint,Ifoundtheriverwasseriouspolluted.Atthatmoment,IwasdeterminedtodowhatIcouldprotectit.First,undermyteacher'shelp,Iusedtheequipmentsfromth

eschoollabtotestthequalityoftheriverwater.Butthen,IusedthedataIhadcollectedittoanalyzethepollutionoftheriver.Finally,Iwriteareporto

nthepollutionoftherivertothelocalgovernment.IalsogaveapresentationinclasswhereIsuggestedthatwemustmakechangestoprotectourwaterresources.答案与解析：Lastm

onthourclassorganizedahikealongtheChaobaiRiver,whichrun①runsthroughHebei,BeijingandTianjin.Muchtomydisappoint②disappointment，Ifo

undtheriverwasserious③seriouslypolluted.Atthatmoment,IwasdeterminedtodowhatIcould∧④toprotectit.First,under⑤withmyteache

r'shelp,Iusedtheequipments⑥equipmentfromtheschoollabtotestthequalityoftheriverwater.But⑦Andthen,Iusedt

hedataIhadcollectedittoanalyzethepollutionoftheriver.Finally,Iwrite⑨wroteareportonthepollutionoftherivertothelocalgovernment.Ials

ogaveapresentationinclasswhereIsuggestedthatwemust⑩shouldmustmakechangestoprotectourwaterresources.①run改为runs考查时态和主谓一致。此处描述的是客观

事实，应用一般现在时；分析句子结构可知，which引导定语从句，指代先行词theChaobaiRiver，是第三人称单数，故把run改为runs。②disappoint改为disappointment考查名词。muchtoon

e'sdisappointment固定短语“使某人大失所望的是”，故将disappoint改为disappointment。③serious改为seriously考查副词。修饰动词polluted应用副词，所以将形容词serious改为副词seriously。④protect前加to

考查非谓语动词。句中dowhatIcould为dowhatIcoulddo的省略；根据语境可知，此处表示目的，故在protect前加to。⑤under改为with考查介词。withone'shelp固定短语“在某人的帮助下”，故将under改为wi

th。⑥equipments改为equipment考查名词。equipment是不可数名词，没有复数形式，所以将equipments改为equipment。⑦But改为And考查连词。根据上文中的First和下文中的Finally可知，此处是作者保护河流的第二条措施，所以应是顺承关系而不是转折关系

，故将But改为And。⑧删除it考查代词。该句含有定语从句Ihadcollected，修饰先行词thedata，关系代词作从句谓语hadcollected的宾语而被省略，所以代词it多余，故删除。⑨write改为wrote考查时态。根据第一句中的时间状语“Last

month”可知，该文描述的是发生在过去的事，故用一般过去时。⑩must改为should或删除must考查虚拟语气。此处that引导的是宾语从句，且主句谓语动词为suggest，意为“建议”，that从句

的谓语只能用“should＋动词原形”结构，且should可以省略，故可将must改为should或删除must。Test3[2019·长沙一模]WelcometotheGreatWall.Measuredm

orethan6,000kilometersinlength,theGreatWallisknownasthelongwallintheworld.Ithasalonghistoryofmorethan2,000

years.ThatisamazingabouttheGreatWallisthatitismainmadeofstonesandbricks,andalltheconstructionwasdonebyhand.T

houghitwasusedtoprotectthecountryfromforeigninvaders,everyfewhundredmetersalongwiththeGreatWall,therewasawatcht

ower.Now,assymbolofChina,theGreatWallwillbecomeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsintheworld.ItisnowonderfulthattheGreatWallattracthundredsofthou

sandsofforeigntouristseveryyear.答案与解析：WelcometotheGreatWall.Measured①Measuringmorethan6,000kilometersinlength,theGreatWallis

knownasthelong②longestwallintheworld.Ithasalonghistoryofmorethan2,000years.That③WhatisamazingabouttheGrea

tWallisthatitismain④mainlymadeofstonesandbricks,andalltheconstructionwasdonebyhand.Though⑤As/Since/Becauseitwasusedtoprotectthec

ountryfromforeigninvaders,everyfewhundredmetersalongwiththeGreatWall,therewasawatchtower.Now,as∧⑦asymbolofChina,theGr

eatWallwill⑧hasbecomeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsintheworld.Itisnowonderful⑨wonderthattheGreatWallattract⑩

attractshundredsofthousandsofforeigntouristseveryyear.①Measured改为Measuring考查非谓语动词。分析句子结构可知，动词measure和其逻辑主语theGreatWall构成主谓关系，故应用其现在分词形式。②long改为lon

gest考查形容词。根据该句中的“the”“intheworld”并结合常识可知，长城是世界上最长的城墙，故用形容词的最高级。③That改为What考查主语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处引导主语从句，连接词在从句中作主语，故用What来引导该主语从句。④main改为ma

inly考查副词。修饰动词应用副词，故把main改为mainly。⑤Though改为As/Since/Because考查连词。根据前后句的句意可知，此处表示原因，故用连词As/Since/Because。⑥删除with考查介词。alongtheGreat

Wall表示“沿着长城”，with多余，故删除。⑦as后加a考查冠词。symbol为可数名词，此处泛指“中国的一个象征”，且symbol的发音以辅音音素开头，故在as后加a。⑧will改为has考查时态。根据语境可知，此处表示长城已经成为全世界最著名的风景名胜之一

，故应使用现在完成时。⑨wonderful改为wonder考查固定用法。Itisnowonderthat...固定短语“……不足为奇”。⑩attract改为attracts考查时态和主谓一致。此处描述的是一般的情况，应用一般现在时；句子主语为theGreatWall，是第三人称单数，故把a

ttract改为attracts。Test4[2019·山西八校联考]Hi,Mike.Howareyougoingtocelebrateyourbirthdaythenextmonth?Ifyouha

dn'tarrangedanything,cometotheconcerttobeholdingbymyfavoritebandinthecitystadium.I'msureyouwillnotregretit

.TheconcertwillbeSunday.Clearlyitwillbeahit,becausetheticketoftheconcertaresoldverywell.Theonlyproblemiswhenthep

erformancestartsquitelately—atninep．m.Wecantakeabusthere,sotherewillbenobuswhentheconcertisover.Iwillaskyourdadt

opickusupandyoucanstayinmyhomeforthenight.答案与解析：Hi,Mike.Howareyougoingtocelebrateyourbirthdaythenextmont

h?Ifyouhadn't②haven'tarrangedanything,cometotheconcerttobeholding③heldbymyfavoritebandinthecitystadium.I'msureyouwil

lnotregretit.Theconcertwillbe∧④onSunday.Clearlyitwillbeahit,becausetheticket⑤ticketsoftheconcertaresold⑥sellingverywell.Theonlyproblemiswhen⑦thatthe

performancestartsquitelately⑧late—atninep．m.Wecantakeabusthere,so⑨buttherewillbenobuswhentheconcertisover.Iwillaskyour⑩

mydadtopickusupandyoucanstayinmyhomeforthenight.①删除next前的the考查冠词。nextmonth表示从现在算起的下一个月。thenextmonth表示从过去或将来某时

算起的下个月。从全文看，作者现在在询问对方下个月如何庆祝他的生日，显然是指从现在算起的下个月。②hadn't改为haven't考查时态。如果你还没有安排任何生日庆祝活动，请来看我最喜欢的乐队在市体育场举行的演唱会吧。表示“你还没有安排”，应该

用现在完成时，而非过去完成时，因为这里不存在“过去之过去”。③holding改为held考查非谓语动词。此处作后置定语，hold与被修饰词之间是逻辑上的动宾关系且表将来故用不定式的被动式。④be后加on考查介词。如果没有介词，表示“演唱会是一个周日”，不符合逻辑。加

上介词后，表示“这个演唱会在周日举行”，符合上下文意思。⑤ticket改为tickets考查名词。本句谓语是are，再根据上下文，演唱会的票应是复数，故用tickets。⑥sold改为selling考查语态。sell在此表示“有销路”，sth.sellwell/b

adly固定短语“某物畅销/不畅销”，不用于被动语态。⑦when改为that考查表语从句。根据句意和分析句子结构可知，表语从句成分及意思完整，是在说明“演唱会开始的时间很晚”这一情况，故用that引导该表语从句。⑧lately改为late考查副词。late表示“晚，迟”，但lately

表示“最近”，与上下文意思不符，故lately改为late。⑨so改为but考查连词。此处表示“我们去的时候可以坐公交车，但是演唱会结束时就没有公交车了”，前后分句为转折关系，故用but。⑩your改为my考查代词。根据下文的“你可以在我家

过夜”可知，此处应是“我会让我爸爸来接我们”，故用my。