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1短文续写一1、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Weallcouldsaythatwehavebaddaystoendureaswegothroughlife,butwhatdoesittaketoha

veareallygoodday?Somewouldsuggestthatadaywouldbegreatifeverythingtheydidturnedoutwell,ortheygotexactlywhattheyneeded.Ontheotherha

nd,haveyoueverthoughtthatwhatyoumaygivesomeoneelsemaybethebestdayyoueverhadespeciallywhenyouputsomeoneelse’swell-beingorhappinessfirstonyourlist?Th

ereisspecialwarmthavailabletoyouandthatwarmthcancomefromahelpinghand,doingasmallfavorforatotalstranger,

orevenasmile.IrecalladayrecentlywhenIhadtogotothehospitalforanappointmentbecauseIwasn’tfeelingwellandmydoctorsentmetoaspecialisttotryanddeterminet

hecause.AsIdrovetothehospital,Iadmittedlywasfeelinggloomyandcertainlywasn’tontopofmygame.AsIapproachedthehosp

ital,Ibeganmysearchforaparkingspot,aspotthatwashardtocomewitheveryoneelsetryingtodothesamething.Ifinally

foundaspotnottoofarfromtheentrancetothehospital.AsIgotoutandbroughtmychangeoutofmypocket,Inoticedamanlookingsomewhatups

etstandinginfrontofaparkingmetertwocarsaway.HeseemedtobesearchinghispocketsforwhatIsupposedwaschangeforthemeter.Although,Ireallydidn’tfee

lthatgreat,IthoughtthatIshouldatleastgoovertohimandfindoutifIcouldhelphim.AsIapproachedhim,heturnedtolookatme,feeling

atalossnotknowingwhattodo.IaskedhimifhehadaproblemIcouldhelpwith,andhesaid,withouthesitation,thathehadnochangeatallbecauseh

eleftitinhishouseonlythinkingaboutvisitinghissickwife.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的

关键词语。Paragraph1:2Facedwithsuchasituation,Ireachedintomypocket.____________________________________________

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hefunnythingwasthatIfeltalotbrighter,andasmallsmilecametomyface.__________________________________________________________________

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给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Haveyoueverhadtoovercomeanextremechallengeinyourlife?Myteenageyearshadbeeninsane.Fromschoolworktoathletics,Ihadalwaysbeenrun

ningaround.Everythingwassodifficult.ThroughoutmyhecticteenageyearsIhavebeenfacedwithmanyextremechallengestha

thaverequiredextremefocusandhardworktoovercome.Ifithadn’tbeenforhardwork,noneofthesechallengesthatIfacedwouldhavebeenconquered.Twoyearsago,whenIw

asafreshmaninhighschool,Idealtwithanextremelysignificantinjury.ThistookplaceinmytennistournamentinJanuaty

.Intheclimaxofmymatch,Ijoltedmybacktotheleftandsoonafterfeltasharp,painfulshockrunthroughmyspine.Iknew

atthatdifficultmomentIseriouslyinjuredmyback.Iwasrushedoffthecourtandmyparentsmadeanappointmentwithanorthopedist(矫形外科医生)forthen

extmorning.Iwalkedintotheofficeextremelynervousandsufferingfromexcruciatingpain.Mytennisseasonforschoolstar

tedinthreemonthsandIabsolutelyneededtobuildupthestrength.3Afterabouttwentyminutesofwaitingintheoffice,w

hichfeltlikeaneternity,thedoctorwalkedintoexaminemyX-rays.Withasorrowfulface,thedoctorlookedintomineandmymother'seyesandsaid,Thereisa50/50chan

cethatLucaswillbeabletoparticipateinthisyearnstennisseason.LucasbrokehisL5vertebraeinhislowerback."MyheartdroppedandI

feltasadnesscomeoverme.ThedoctorsaidthatIwouldbesittingoutofphysicalactivityfortwoandahalftothreemon

ths.Thosethreemonthswerethelongestthreemonthsofmylife.Iwassoeagertogetbacktopracticesfortheseason.Everyday,Iwouldthinkabouthowitwas

goingtobewhenIwasfullyhealthy.Iaskedmyself,"AmIgoingtobeoutofshape?ShouldIevenplaythisyear?Iprobablywon'thaveasuccessfulseason."F

romthatdreadfuldayon,IdecidedthatIwasgoingtoputintheworktobebackintopformandhaveasuccessfulseason.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为15

0左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:AfterIgotthe"allclear"frommyorthopedistlwasgoingto

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_______________________________________________________________________________3、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。IamSadie.Iloveoceans,especiallytheo

nenearmygrandma'shousewithbeautifulshells.Why?That'swhatIamabouttotellyou.Itallstartedwhenmyparentsdivorcedafewweeksago.Ihadremainedsilentsinc

ethen.SomymotherdecidedtosendmetoFloridatolivewithmygrandma.Onthewaytomygrandma’shouse,mymothersaid,“Sadie,Iknowweare

notthebestfamilyyoucanhaveandItrulyapologize.Ijustdonotknowhowtobeamother.Butremember,Sadie,whateverhappened,Idoloveyou."Thesewordsmad

emesadder.Whenwearrived,Grandmatoldmetogoupstairsandunpackmythingswhileshespoketomymother.WhenIsawablueandgreenpaintedroomwithahuge

windowandacomfortablebed,Ithought,MovingtoFloridamightnotbethatbad."Icomfortedmy-selfasIwalkedtowardsthewindow.Iopenedthecurtainsandsawsky-blu

ewavesslowlywashingawaythesandonthebeachandseabirdsflyingintheclearsky.Theoceanwasonlyafewhundredmetersawayfromhere.Aftermym

otherleft,Grandmasoftlytouchedmyshoulder,“IwanttotakeyoutotheplaceIcalled'theBigBlue’.AndIthinkyoumightlikeit."(Iguessyoucou

ldknowwhereitis.)BeforeIsteppedonthesandIcouldsmelltheocean.Togetherweenjoyedthesunsetwithawholelotofyellowandorange.Sud

denlyshepickedoutthemostbeautifulshellIhadeverseeninmylife.Itwasalmostgold,shininginthesunlight.Icouldn’tmovem

yeyesoffit.注意:1.所续写短文的同数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键短语Paragraph

1:"WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents'divorce?"Grandmaasked.____________________________________________________________________

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_______________________________________________________4、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Jamieranoutofhishousealongthe

streettowardhisbuilding.Theabandonedbuildingstherewerehisplayground.Jamiemovedawoodenboardfromthedoortooneofthebuildings.Hecrawledinside.

Therewasbrokenglassonthefloor.Jamiewentdownthestairstothebasement.Itwasevendarkerdownthere,anddamp.Thebuildingswereneartherive

r.Sometimeswaterfloodedin.He'dneverfoundanythingaliveuntilhefoundSharon.“Sharon,I’mhere!”Jamiecalled.“Ibroughtacandle,too.I'mgoingtolightitsoIca

nseeyoubetter."Jamietookoutamatchandlitthecandle.Asoftcircleoflightlitupthedarkness.“ComeoverherewhereIcanseeyou,”Jamiesaid.“Pleasedon

’tbeafraid.I’mnotafraid.Itoldyouthat.”Thecreatureslithered(滑行)intothelight.ItwasaboutJamie’ssize.Itsheadandbodywerecoveredwithdarkgreenscales(

鱗片).Inthelightofthecandle,thescalesshonelikediamonds.Thecreature’seyesglowedred,suddenly,likehotcoals.Itsnostrils(鼻孔)fl

ared,givingoffheat.6Jamiestared.Hethoughthehadneverseenanythingsobeautiful.That’swhyhe’ddecidedtocallthecreatureSharon.Hewantedtogiveab

eautifulnametohisnewpet.“Gee,Sharon,”hesaid,“Iwishyoucouldtalk.Idon’tknowifyouunderstandmeornot.AndI,dreallylikeyoutotellmehowyougothe

re.Thecreaturedidn’tanswer.ItjustlookedatJamie.Itsmouthopenedslightlyandsomethingwhitegleamed.Jamiethoughtitwassmiling.“Well,”sa

idJamie,"Ihopeyou’rehungry.Ibroughtyouachickensandwich.”Thecreaturelookeddownatthesandwich,thinkingaboutsomethingelse,butmadenomovetoeat

it.“I'lljustleavethefoodhereforyou,"Jamiesighed.“IwishIcouldstay.ButIhavetogo.Momisonmycaserightnow.I’dhelpher.I’llcom

ebacktomorrowafterschool.”注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtog

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读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。WhenIwastenIwassuddenlyverysad,forIhadtomovefromtheonlyhomeIhadeverknown.Mywholelifehadbeenspentinthatbigoldhouse

whichsawthelaughterandtearsoffourgenerations.Whenthefinaldaycame,Irantothefrontofthehouseandsatalone,crying.SuddenlyIfeltahan

drestonmyshoulder.Ilookeduptoseemygrandfather.“Itisn’teasy,isit,Billy?"hesaidsoftly,sittingdownonthestepsbesideme.“Grandpa,”

IrepliedhowcanIeversaygoodbyetoyouandallmyfriends?”“Goodbyeissuchasadword,"hesaid."Itseemstoofinal,toocool,whichhasonethingincommon:sadness.”H

egentlytookmyhandinhis.“Comewithme,myfriend,”hewhispered.Wewalked,handinhand,tohisfavoriteplaceinthefrontyard,wheretherewasahugeredrosebush—hi

sbelovedrosebush."Whatdoyouseehere,Billy?”heasked.Ilookedattheflowers,notknowingwhattosay,"Iseesomethingbeautiful,Grandpa."“Itisn’tjustthe

rosesthatarebeautiful,Billy.It’sthatspecialplaceinyourheartthatmakesthemso.”Hiseyesmetmineagain.“Billy,Iplantedtheserosesalongtimeago—beforeyo

urmotherwasevenadream.Iputthemintothesoilthedaymyfirstsonwasbom.ItwasmywayofsayingthankyoutoGod.Thatboy's

namewasBilly.Iusedtowatchhimpickrosesforhismother.Isawmygrandfather’stears.Ihadneverseenhimcrybefore.Hisvoicebecamehoarse(嘶哑的)."Onedayat

erriblewarcame,andmyson,likesomanysons,wentawaytofightagreatevil.HeandIwalkedtothetrainstationtogether...Threemonthslateratelegramcame.

MysonhaddiedinItaly.AllIcouldthinkofwasthatthelastthingIsaytohiminhislifewasgoodbye."注意:1.所续写短文的同数应为

150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;83.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Grandpaslowlystoodup._________________

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____________________________________________________________6、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。TommyandMicklewalkedalongthebeach,l

ookingforanadventure.Theyjokedthatsomedaytheywouldfindatalkingfishoramermaidorabottlewithatreasuremapinside.

Sofartheyhadonlyfoundshellsandrocksandseaweed.Todaywasdifferentthough.Theboysfeltexcited.Seacrabsscamperedontherocks,uponesideand

downtheother.Theywerequickandlively.Thetidedidn'tseemtoeverwashthemaway.ThenTommysawafish.Itwastrappedon

thebeach,justfloppingaround."Canittalk?''Mickleasked.“Itlookslikeanyotherfish,”Tommysaid.Hepickeditupgentlyandcarriedittothewater.“Doyouthink

itwillgrantusanywishes?"Micklelaughed.Theboyswatchedasthesilverfishspedoffthroughthewater.“No.Maybenexttime”,Tommygrinned.9A

sthetwofriendswalkedfartherdownthebeachtheycameuponabottle.Itwasgreenwithacorkinthemouth.“Ourluckwillchange.Do

esithaveamaporagenieinside?”Micklejoked.Micklereacheddownandpickedupthebottle.Herubbedit.Nothinghappened.Hepulledonthecork.Not

hinghappened.Heshookit.Nothinghappened.“Trythecorkagain.Ibetthegenieiswaitingforustoreleasehim.Orwe'll

findatreasuremapandhavearealadventure,Tommyexclaimed.Mickletuggedagainonthecork.Hewiggleditbackandforth.Hetwisteditaro

undandaround.Finallyitpoppedoutwithoutbreaking.Mickleshookthebottle.Nothingcameout.Lookinginsidehecouldn,tseeanything

.Tommylookedtooandshookhishead.Empty.“It’sjustanoldwinebottle,”Tommycomplained.Hegrabbedthebottleandtosseditbackontothesand.注意:1.所续

写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Thebottlehitarockan

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___________________________________________7、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Everyyearonmybirthday,fromthetime1turned12,aw

hitegardeniawasdeliveredtomyhouseinBethesda,Maryland.Nocardornotecamewithit.Callstothefloristwerealwaysin

vain—itwasacashpurchase.AfterawhileIstoppedtryingtodiscoverthesendersidentityandwasjustdelightedinthebeautyandfragranceo

fthatmagical,perfectwhiteflowerplacedinsoftpinktissuepaper.However,Ineverstoppedimaginingwhotheanonymousgivermightbe.Mymothercontributedtot

heseimaginings.Andatthattime,she’daskmeiftherewassomeoneforwhomIhaddoneaspecialkindnessshowingappreciation.Asateenager,Ihadmorefunimagini

ngthatitmightbeaboyIfellinloveoronewhohiidnoticedmeeventhoughIdidn’tknowhim.WhenIwas17,aboybrokemyheart.Thenighthecalledforthelasttime,Ic

riedmyselftosleep.WhenIawokeinthemorning,therewasalineofwordsonmymirrorinredlipstick.IthoughtaboutthatquotationfromEm

ersonforalongtime,anduntilmyhearthealedandwenttogettheglasscleaned,mymotherkneweverythingwasallrightaga

in.Onemonthbeforemyhighschoolgraduation,myfatherdiedofaheartattack.Myfeelingsrangedfromgrieftoabandonment,fearandoverwhelmi

nganger;mydadwasmissingsomeofthemostimportanteventsinmylife.Ibecamecompletelyuninterestedinmycomingg

raduation,theplayandtheprom.Butmymother,inthemidstofherowngrief,wouldnothearofmyskippinganyofthosethings.Thedaybeforemyfatherdied,mymotherandIhadgon

eshoppingforapromdress.We'dfoundaspectacular,andimpressiveone,withyardsandyardsofdottedSwissinred,whitea

ndblue.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。11Paragraph1:

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____________________________________________________________________8、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Alexstaredthroughthecabinwindowatthedarkness

.Soonhisdadwouldcallhim.“We’reready,”Dadsaidashecameinfromtheporch.“Grabyourrod.”Alexturnedawayfromthewindowandslowlypickeduphisfishingrod.“

Weshouldhavedonethisbefore,’’Dadsaid.‘‘Let’sgocatchingabigone!Maybewecanseesomerareinsectsandanimals,suchasfirefliesandwhippoorwills!’’Dadpickeduph

istacklebox,rod,andbaitcanfromtheporch.Theywalkeddownthehilltowardthelake.TheonlythingAlexcouldseewast

hecircleofweedsandrocksattheirfeet.Insectvoicesfilledhisears.Hundredsofbugswaitedinthedarktoattack.“Mosquitoes,’’Dadsaid.

“Ibroughtsomespraytokeepthemoff.”SuddenlysomethingrushedpastAlex’shead.Hegasped.“Whatwasthat?”“Probablyabat,”Da

dsaid.12“Willbatsbeflyingaroundourheadsthewholetime?”“Thisistheirtimetobeoutcatchinginsects,’’Dadexplained.“Theywo

n’thurtyou."Hepushedtheboatoffthegravelandjumpedin.Dadrowedtothemiddleofthelakeandstopped.“We’lljustlettheb

oatdriftforawhile.Keeptheflashlightinthebottomoftheboat.Thefishwon'tbiteiftheyseelightflashingaround.Whenwe

Vedonebaitingourhooks,we'llturnthelightoff.”Leaningdowntogetclosertothelight,Alextriedtothreadawormonhishook,buthecouldn’tseemtoworkhisfingersrigh

t.Sowhatifthewormwasonlypartlyonthehook?Hedidn’twanttofishanyway.Hedidn’tevenwanttobehere.Dadswitchedofftheflashlight

,andthenightfelloverthemlikeaheavycape.“Ican’tseeanything,”Alexsaidweakly.“Themoon’shalffull.Itgivesussomelight,"Dadsaid.Alexlooke

dup.Surelyenough,therewasthemoon.Andhecouldseetheshorelineandthedarkformsoftrees.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.

至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Lookingintothetreesontheshore,Alexnoticedtinypointsoflighttwinklingt

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________________________________________________________________答案1答案：Paragraph1:Facedwithsuchasituation,Ireachedintomypocket.SoonIpulledo

utsomechangeandgaveittohim,withouthesitationandsavingasingleword,Iwentontowardscompletingmyownbusiness.Asyouknow,Ihadanappoint

ment,foraresponse,IturnedonmvheelandsaidtohimasIwaswalkingaway,"Haveagoodday."Paragraph2:ThefunnythingwasthatIfeltalotbrighter,andasmallsmileca

metomyface.AndIseemedtowalkjustalittlequicker.Iwaswalkingawaywhenhecalledout"thankyousomuch"farbehind.Honestly,Ididn’tevenexpecthimtosa

yanything.ItwassatisfyingenoughtoknowthatIhadmadeasimplegesturetohelpsomeoneelsewhoneededalittlehand,alittlehelp.However,itbroughtto

myfaceasmile.Itdoesn'ttakemuchtolendthoseinneedahelpinghand;abigpayoffiswhatyougetinreturn.Moreimportantl

y,withsuchwarmthcatchingon,oursocietywillbecomemoreandmoreharmoniousandcomfortable.(164words)2答案：Paragraph1:AfterIgotthe"allclea

r''frommyorthopedistIwasgoingtogettowork.PracticesweregoingtostartintwoweeksandIwasdeterminedtogetbackonthecourt.Myhungerforsucces

smademeplayandworkoutfortwohoursevendaybeforetheseason.Throughpractices,IwouldhitthegymandtrytobuildupthestrengththatIhadb

eforetheinjury.Paragraph2:Myhardworkprovedtobeveryeffective.Ihadthemostsuccessfulseasonofmycareer.Imadeittothefinals.AlthoughItrulywa

ntedtowin,Iknewthatitwasagreataccomplishmentformetobeinthatpositionevennotinthefirstplace.Theinjuryw

asalmostagoodthing14becauseIprovedtomyselfthatIamcapableofachievinggoalsthatIstrivefor,throughhardworkofcou

rse.Thatseasonwasbyfarthemostrewardingseasonofmycareer.Ifeltsoaccomplishedattheendoftheseason.Hardworkalwayspaysoff.(154words)3

答案：Paragraph1:“WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents’divorce?”Grandmaasked.Shesmiledtomeandcontinued,"Intho

sedays,Ifeltverysorrowfulbecauseneitherofmyparentscaredaboutme,whichmademewanttoendmylife.Butfinally,Ididn'tdolikethat.Inordertokilltime,Ialwayswentt

othebeach(Icalledit'theBigBlue’).Muchtomysurprise,Ifoundthatthereweresuchbeautifulshellsonthebeach”.Paragraph2:"Thebeaul

ifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveon,"Grandmasaid."Honey,youarestillhappy.Althoughyourparentsdivorced,thevbothlove

you.Yourmotherrangmethismorning,tellingmethatyouloveoceans.Therefore,Ibroughtyouhere.AlsoIhopeyoucangetinspirationandcourage."HearingthisIlookedup

attheblueskyandthevastsea.Suddenly,Ifeltalittlerelaxedandnatural,andheldthefirmbeliefthatImustcheerup,justlikethemostbeautifulshell,fullofcol

or.(150words)标准范文Paragraph1:"WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents'divorce?”Grandmaasked.Seeingmenoddingcuriously,sheconti

nued,“Ifeltextremelypainfulasyoumightbenow.Idon'tknowwhytheyseparatedfromeachother.Iaskedmymotherthereasonsfordivorce

overandoveragain.Butshewouldn'ttellme,whichmademefeelevenmoredepressed.ThenIthoughtof‘theBigBlue’.AtthatmomentIwantedtoendm

ylifehere.ButIdidn’t."Paragraph2:Thebeautifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveont"Grandmasaid."Justno

w,yourmothertoldmethatyoulikeoceans.SoIbroughtyouhere.AndIhopeyoucanseethecouragetoo."Ilookedcarefullyatthemostbeautifulshellinmygrand

ma’shand,thenthevastoceanandthebluesky.OnlythendidIunderstandthebeautyandmeaningoflife.MovingtoFloridawasnotbadatall!15(156words)4答案：高分范文Paragraph1:

Jamieturnedtoso.Hewalkedbackslowlvalongthebasementfloor.Thecreatureraiseditsheadandwatchedhimcarefully.anditsmouthopenedslightlyandase

riesofbubblescameoutswiftly.Itlookedasifitwastalkingalot.AfterJamiedisappearedinthedistance,thecreatureslitheredbackintoitscorne

r.Paragraph2:WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.Shegrabbedhim,andasked,“Oh,myGod!Annoyingguy,andvou’reallright.Wherehav

evoubeen?Youmademesoworried!Why,justlastweekalittleboydisappearedonhiswayhomefromschool."However,hereallydidn'tlisten,insteadheseemedt

obethinkingaboutsomethingelse.“Mommy,whynotbuyapetforme?I'mlonely,soIranout.”Hearingthis,Jamie'smothersmiledbyherself."Okay,okay,I’llthinkabo

utitseriously,butyouhavetopromisetotakegoodcareofyourpel.Youdoneedaplaymate.”Jamiehuggedhismotherhappily."Oh,thanks.Mom.I'lltellSharonthegood

newsimmediately!"Jamierushedout.(170words)标准范文Paragraph1:Jamieturnedtogo.Thecreaturewatchedhim,anditsmoutho

penedslightly.Itlookedlikesmiling.Thecreatureslitheredbackintoitscomer.Hemadehiswaycarefullyacrosstheslipperybasementfloor.Jamiehurriedalongthestreet

towardhisbuilding.Paragraph2:WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry."Wherehaveyoubeen,youngman?Now,getintothatroomofyoursandclean

itup.’’ButJamiewasn’treallylistening.Heseemedtobethinkingaboutsomethingelse."Well,therearenokidsofmyageinthisbuildin

g.That’swhyIgooutsomuch.IfIhadapettoplaywith,I'dtakecareofit,too.CanIhaveapet,please?”Jamie’smotherla

ughedinspiteofherself.‘‘Okay,okay,"shesaidsmiling.“Iguessyoudoneedaplaymate.Ijusthopeitisn’ttoodirty.”Jamiehuggedhismotherar

oundthewaist."Oh,thanks,Mom.I'llgogetSharonrightnow.Iknowyou’lllikeher!”Jamiedisappearedagain.16(158words)5答案：高分范文Paragraph1:Grandpaslowly

stoodup.Hesaid,"Myfriend,pleaseneversay,goodbyeforever,andnevergiveintovoursadnessandloneliness.Instea

dlifeisuncertain,andonlywhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriendareyourjoyandhappinessofthosetimesworthcherishing.Pleaseleavethatsp

ecialhelloinyourheart."Paragraph2:Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Threemonthslater,doctorsfinallyannouncedtha

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hecouldseehisbelovedrosebush.Eventually,I,ashisoldestgrandchild,wasassignedtosaygoodbyetohim."Hello,Grandpa,"Isniffed.Hiseyesslowlyopened,"Hello,Bi

lly,don'tsob."Hesmiled.ButIwasoutofcontrol,cryingoutside.Anunclecametotellmethatmygrandfatherhadpassedaway.However,hisdeepwords

willnevergoaway.(151words)标准范文Paragraph1:Grandpaslowlystoodup."Don'teversaygoodbye,Billy.Don'tevergiveintothesadnessandtheloneliness.InsteadIwan

tyoutorememberthejoyandthehappinessofthosetimeswhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriend.Takethatspecialhelloandlockiti

nyourheart.”Paragraph2:Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Whenhereturnedfromthehospitalthreemonthslaterhewan

tedhisbednexttothewindow,fromwherehecouldseehisbelovedrosebush.Thenthefamilywascalledhome.Itwasdecidedthathisgrandchildrenw

ouldbeallowedtosaytheirgoodbyestohimonebyone."Hello,Grandpa,"Iwhispered.Hiseyesslowlyopened,"Hello,myfriend,”hesaid,withasmile.Eventuallymygra

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ehadmeantaboutneversayinggoodbye—justrefusingtogiveintothesadness.(155words)176答案：Paragraph1:Thebottlehitarockandshatte

redintomanypieces.BothTommyandMicklegaspedastheysawalong,silverkeyonthegroundintheglasspieces.Thentheylookedateachother.Whydidn'titmakenoisewhenth

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entheyenteredthesea,astonishinglytheydidn'tsinkintothewaterbutfloatedonthesurfaceofit.Theyfeltexcited.Theyfollowedthebottleand

thenitstoppednearanislandwheretherewasmuchtreasurelikediamondsandstones.“Youcantakeasmuchaspossible,”avoicec

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tomeallthetime.ButIdidn'tknowthetruthuntilmymotherdiedbecausethegardeniastoppedcoiningafterthatyear.Andatthattime,Icouldnotst

opmytearsofgratituderollingdown.(158words)8答案：18Paragraph1:Lookingintothetreesontheshore,Alexnoticedtinypointsoflighttwinklingthere.Thelongerhe

looked,themoreflasheshesawinthedark.Theylookedlikestarsthatcamedownfromthesky."Look,Dad,fireflies!”“Perfect!’’Dadnodded.Alou

dwhistlingsounderuptedfromthewoods.“Listen!”saidDad.“It’sthewhippoorwill.We’rereallyluckytohearthewhippoorwill!"Alexhadneverheardsucha

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te."Myfavorite!"AfterawhileDadrowedintotheshore.Theydidnotcaughtabigone一onlythreesmallfishandtheyputthembackintothelake.Buttheyhadagood

time.Theytieduptheboatandwalkedbacktothecabinthroughthelightofthefireflies.(147words)