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-1-第2讲高分亮点塑造一吸引眼球的亮点词汇要想写出一篇水平比较高的书面表达，高级词汇的使用必不可少，它会大大提升文章的档次，从而帮助考生获得高分。要做到准确使用高级词汇，应该注意以下几个方面：——(一)使用亮点词汇的四种方法——1．标新立异“

语”众不同在写作时，恰当地使用一些别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会体现出自己的高水平。①Ourteam,besidesregulartraining,willjoininavarietyofactivities.→Ourteam,apart/aside

fromregulartraining,willjoininavarietyofactivities.②Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedatthegraduationcere

mony,itwasverypopular.→Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedatthegraduationceremony,itwaswell-received.2．多样表达避免

重复在写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的单词或短语，要尽量用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。③Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivit

ies.Wemayhavedifferentwaystodealwithsuchasituation.→Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayhavevariouswaystodealw

ithsuchasituation.④We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingandwe'vealsobuiltalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.→We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuild

ingandwe'vealsosetupalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.3．单词短语短语优先在单词和短语表示同一个意思时，优先使用短语。恰当使用短语，一方面能使文章更加生动，另一方面也能展示出学生扎

实的语言功底。⑤ThereisnodoubtthatyoushouldknowaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.→Thereisnodoubtthatyouaresupposedtoknowabo

utthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance.⑥Firstly,thefinalexamofthistermiscomingsoIambusypreparingforit.-2-→Tobegi

nwith,thefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingforit.⑦Ihearthatheisill,andIdecidetovisithimthisSunday.→Ihearthat

heisill,andIdecidetopayavisittohimthisSunday.4．用高级词汇取代简单词汇为了表现自己的语言功底，显示出自己的写作水平，应尽量避免反复使用低年级学过的简单词汇，尽量用高中阶段学到的词汇来代替。⑧Ishouldsaysorryforbeingunable

togotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.→IshouldmakeanapologyforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.⑨Solonga

sweholdfasttoouridealsandnevergiveup,wearesuretoachievesuccess.→Solongasweholdfasttoouridealsandnevergi

veup,weareboundtoachievesuccess.即时练1用高级词汇完成句子①Ofthetwo,Ithinkthelatterisbetter.→Ofthetwo,thelatter________________.②Quiteafewthingsc

ausedthetrafficproblem.→Quiteafewthings________________thetrafficproblem.③Wecanlookatthisprobleminmanyways.→Wecan________thisprobleminmany

ways.答案：①winsmyfavor②resultedin/ledto/gaveriseto③view——(二)必备升级词汇——1．动词：have→possess;develop→promote;repla

ce→substitute;bear→putupwith/tolerate;consider→takeintoaccount/consideration;understand→makesenseof/figureout①Isincerelyhopethatyouwilltakem

ysuggestionsintoaccount.我真诚地希望你能考虑我的建议。2．名词：chance→opportunity;choice→alternative;course→curriculum;people→individuals;result→consequence;sho

rtcoming→drawback②Differentindividualshavedifferentopinionsaboutthesafetyoffood.不同的人对食品安全问题有着不同的看法。-3-3．形容词：enough→adequate/ple

ntiful;useful→advantageous;difficult→challenging;proper→appropriate/suitable;important→vital/significant;interesting→

absorbing/striking/appealing/attractive③Inthecomingthreeyears,ourschoollifewillbechallenging.在随后的三年里，我们的学校生活将会

是具有挑战性的。4．副词：finally→eventually;hardly→barely/scarcely/hardlyever;immediately→inaflash/innotime;nowadays→currently④Eventuallyyourch

ildwillleavehometoleadherownlifeasafullyindependentadult.最终，你的孩子会离开家，作为一个完全独立的成年人过她自己的生活。5．连词：so→therefore;and→aswellas/togetherwith⑤Therefore,itsbo

xofficereceipts/takingswillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.因此票房收入极可能略有增长。即时练2同义句改写①Wewilltryourbesttodeve

lopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.→We'lltryourbestto________thetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.②Thisphenomenonm

ayleadtoimportantchangestowardsenvironmentalprotection.→Thisphenomenonmayleadto________changestoward

senvironmentalprotection.答案：①promote②significant——(三)必备加分词汇——1．表达关注的名词：attention,focus,concern①Meanwhile,owingtomygreatintere

stinsports,Ipaycloseattentiontothe32ndOlympicGamestobeheldinTokyoin2020.与此同时，由于我对体育运动很感兴趣，我密切关注2020年将在东京举办的第三十二届奥运会。2．表达争论的名词：discussion,de

bate,argument②Facedwithsuchanargument,differentindividualsmayhavedifferentopinions.面对这样的争论，不同的人可能有不同的观点。3．表达现象的名词：phenomenon③Thesentencesuggests

acommonphenomenon:manyteenagerscaremore-4-abouttheirphonesthantheirfriendsnowadays.这个句子表明了一种常见现象：当今许多青少年关注他们的手机胜过关注他们的朋友。4．表达优缺点的名词：advantage,dis

advantage,strength,weakness④Besides,everystudentmayhavedifferentweakandstrongsubjects,sotheyshouldlearnfromeachothersothattheycanhavemoread

vantagesthandisadvantages.此外，每个学生可能有不同的弱科和强科，因此他们应该互相学习以便比起劣势来他们拥有更多的优势。5．表达增长或下降的动词：increase,accumulate,decrease,de

cline⑤LonghoursofsurfingtheInternetwouldleadtodeclininghealth.长时间上网将导致健康状况下降。6．表达导致后果的动词短语：resultin,leadto,bringabout,contributeto,giveriset

o⑥Computershavebroughtaboutmanychangesinourdailylife.电脑给我们的日常生活带来了很多变化。7．表达支持、反对的动词短语：approveof,beinfavoro

f,objectto⑦Themajorityoftheseniorcitizensdon'tapproveoftheproposalofcelebratingWesternfestivalsinChina.大多数老年人不赞同在中国庆祝西方节日

的提议。8．表达可能性的形容词：likely⑧Ifyoucometoourschool,youarelikelytomeetsomedifficultproblemsinyourlife.如果你来我们学校，很可能会在生活中遇到一些难题。9．表达有好处的形容词：beneficial⑨Frommyp

ointofview,ourlibraryshouldbuysomepopularsciencebooksandliterarybooksbecausetheyarebeneficialtous.按照我的观点，我们的图书馆应该买一些科谱书和文学类图

书，因为这些书对我们有益处。10．表达强调的副词：particularly,especially⑩Themorepeopleearn,themoretheyseemtowant,particularly

whenothersearnmorethantheydo.人们赚得越多，似乎想要的也越多，尤其是当其他人赚得比他们多的时候。即时练3-5-同义句改写①Thenewteachingmethodwilldogoodtoeverystudent.→Thenewtea

chingmethodwill________________everystudent.②Itwashiscarelessnessthatcausedhisfailurethistime.→Itwashiscarelessnessthat___________

_____hisfailurethistime.③Mostofuswereagainsthisplan,whichmadehimangry.→Mostofus________________hisplan,whichmadehimangry.答案：①bebeneficialto②resulte

din③objectedto二夺人耳目的开头和结尾——(一)引人入胜的开头——开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了解要谈什么，最好能立刻吸引读者的兴趣。下面介绍几种开头的常见写法：1．书信的常用开头法——开门见山法①I'mwritingto

inviteyoutoseetheChinesepapercuttingexhibition.我写信邀请你来观看中国剪纸艺术展。②Iamwritingtotellyousomegoodnews.我写信告诉你一些好消息。2．记叙文的常用开头法(1)故事

背景法——交代人物、事件、时间、地点、背景等③AweekbeforeEarthDay,posterswereputuparoundourschool,callinguponustojoinintheactionsforagreenerearth.地球日前的一周，我们学校贴了

很多海报，号召我们加入到让地球更绿色环保的行动中。(2)往事追忆法——回忆过去发生的某件事④IstillrememberhownervousIwasonmyfirstdayinthenewschoolthreeyearsago,whenIfounditdifficu

lttofollowmyteacherinthefirstEnglishclass.我仍旧记得三年前我进入这所学校的第一天，在第一节英语课上我听不懂老师讲课，我是多么紧张。3．说明文的常用开头法(1)点明中心法

——开门见山点明所要介绍的事物⑤Themouseisamosteffectivedeviceusedbypeopletocommunicatewithacomputer.鼠标是人们借以使用电脑的一种非常有效的设备。(2)引入数据法——运用数据引出所要论证的主题⑥Ar

ecentsurveyshowsthatmorethan40%oftheschoolkidsdon'thave-6-breakfast.最近的调查表明，有超过40%的学生不吃早饭。4．议论文的常用开头法(1)点明主题法——提

出一个观点，作为文章要阐明或论述的主题⑦Yearsofschoollifehastaughtmealotofthings,ofwhichteamworkisthemostimportanttome.多年

的学校生活教会我很多东西，其中团队协作对于我来说最为重要。(2)引用名言法——摘录或引用某些名人的名言或常见的习语、谚语作为文章的开头⑧Whenitcomestohowtosucceed,manypeoplemaythinkoftheproverb“Wherethereisawill,th

ereisaway.”当谈及如何成功时，很多人或许会想起了谚语“有志者，事竟成”。(3)列举事例法——通过一个事例或现象引出话题⑨ThreeyearsagoIfailedanimportantexaminmylifeandbecameas

tudentinanordinaryschool.三年前我在人生的一次重要考试中失利，成为普通学校的一名学生。5．图画作文的常用开头法描述图画法——描写图画内容，为下文做好铺垫⑩Inthepicture,

wecanseeaboyinwornclothes,sittingatashabbywoodentablewithapileofbooksonit.在图画中我们可以看到一个穿着破衣服的男孩，坐在破旧的木头桌子旁，桌子上是一摞书。常见开头句式：Aseverybo

dyknows/Asisknowntoall众所周知Astheproverbsays正如谚语所说Asthesayinggoes俗话说Aswecanseefromthetable正如表中所看到的Whenitcomesto

...当提到……Itissaidthat...据说……Itisgenerallyagreedthat...人们通常认为……Itisbelieved/thoughtthat...人们认为……Itisreportedthat..

.据报道……Itiswellknownthat...众所周知……-7-Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...不言而喻/不用说……Thereisnodenyingthat...不可否认的是……Thereisnodoubtthat.

..毫无疑问……即时练1根据提示翻译句子①我想请你给我们学校的英语报纸写一篇文章。(开门见山法)__________________________________________________________________②上周日，我和同学

们去了香山公园。(故事背景法)__________________________________________________________________③俗话说，“没有努力，就没有收获。”(引用名言法)______________

____________________________________________________④人们普遍认为阅读能增长我们的知识，拓展我们的视野。(点明主题法)___________________________________________

_______________________⑤每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪，就忍不住感到悲伤。(往事追忆法)__________________________________________________________________答案：

①I'dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool'sEnglishnewspaper.②LastSunday,myclassmatesandIwenttoFragrantHillsPark.③As

thesayinggoes,“Nopain,nogain.”④Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatreadingincreasesourknowledgeandbroadensourhorizons.⑤Whe

neverIthinkofthecleanstreamnearmyhome,Icannothelpfeelingsad.——(二)回味无穷的结尾——结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调中心思想、升华主题的作用。主要有以下写

法：1．书信的常用结尾法(1)表示感谢法①I'dappreciateitifyoucouldreplytomyletteratyourearliestconvenience.如果您尽早给我回信，我会非常感谢。②I'da

ppreciateitifyoucoulddomeafavor.如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。③Imustthankyouagainforyourgeneroushelp.我必须对你慷慨的帮助再次表示感谢。(2)表示期待法④Hopeyou'llhaveagoodt

imeinChina.希望你在中国玩得开心。-8-⑤Lookingforwardtoyourreply.期待着您的回复。⑥Ihopewe'llgettogetheragainnextyear.希望我们明年再聚。2．记叙文的常用结尾法(1)主题升华法⑦Myexperiencetellsmetha

titisnotwhatyouaregivenbuthowyoumakeuseofitthatdetermineswhoyouare.我的经历告诉我：决定你成为什么样的人，不是你被给予了什么，而是你怎样利用

它。(2)问题设问法——通过问答形式总结全文⑧Isn'titapleasuretohavegreatcalminmindwhileyouarereading?你在阅读时，内心非常平静不是一种快乐吗？3．说明文的常用结尾法总结全文法——总结说明的事物，进一步说明

其特征⑨Inaword,changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebroughtusconvenienceandcomfort.总之，过去20年里我们生活中的变化给

我们带来了便利和舒适。4．议论文的常用结尾法(1)得出结论法——结尾总结全文，得出结论⑩Therefore,thefilmindustryshouldmakegreatereffortstoattractmorev

iewers.所以，电影业应该做出更大努力来吸引更多观众。(2)深化中心法——结尾进一步深化主题⑪Inreality,weshouldlearnfromtheblackpencil:nottomindwhatotherssaysolongasweareconfidentinwhat

wehavedone.事实上，我们应该向这支黑色铅笔学习：只要我们对自己做过的事情有信心，就不要去介意别人说什么。(3)提出建议法——结尾提出建议以及应对措施⑫Ithinkallofusshouldmin

dourbehaviorinpublicplaces.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveinmorecomfortableandbeautifulsurroundings.我认为，我们都应该注意自己在公共场合的行为。只有这样我们才

能生活在更舒服和美丽的环境中。(4)引用名言法——结尾用名言总结全文⑬Anyhow,differentcultures,differentcustoms.Ifyou“DoastheRomansdo-9-wheninRome”，youwillen

joymoreyourstayhere.不管怎么说，不同的文化就有不同的习俗。如果你“入乡随俗”，你就会更好地享受这里的生活。(5)照应开头法——结尾对开头进行照应⑭Differentwaysoftravelingcanmakepeoplehappy,butIliketr

avelingbytrainmost.不同的旅行方式都能让人愉快，但是我最喜欢乘火车旅行。常见结尾句式：I'dappreciateitif...如果……我将不胜感激Itishightimethat...确实到了……的时候了Inthisway,Ibelievetha

t...用这种办法，我相信……Onlywithcombinedeffortscanwe...唯有通力合作我们才能……Wecan,therefore,cometotheconclusionthat...因此，我们可以得出结论：

……Therefore,wehavethereasontobelievethat...因此，我们有理由相信……Therefore,weshouldrealizethat...因此，我们应当意识到……Ifwecandoasmentionedabove,therecan

benodoubtthat...如果我们能做到如上所述，毫无疑问……We,therefore,canmakeitclearfromtheabovediscussionthat...因此，从上面的讨论中我们可以明白……即时练2根据提示翻译句子①我希望你会在中学过丰富多彩的生活。(表示期待

法)__________________________________________________________________②如果你能到机场接我，我将不胜感激。(表示感谢法)______________________________________

____________________________③找一个伙伴和我们一起去如何？如果这样，我们可以相互帮助并且乐享旅游。(问题设问法)-10-_____________________________________

_____________________________④因此，我们得出结论：世界上没有什么东西和自由一样珍贵。(得出结论法)__________________________________________________________________⑤总之，成功是重要

的，失败也是重要的，因为它是成功之母。(引用名言法)__________________________________________________________________答案：①Ihopeyouwilllivearichandcolorfullifeinmiddleschool.②I

'dappreciateitifyoucouldmeetmeattheairport.③Howaboutfindingacompaniontobewithus?Ifso,wecanhelpeachotherandbehappyduringthet

rip.④We,therefore,cometotheconclusionthatnothingissopreciousasfreedomintheworld.⑤Inaword,successisimportant,andsoisfai

lure,becauseit'sthemotherofsuccess.三词顺句畅的过渡和衔接衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间、段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。高中阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语归

纳如下：——(一)表示顺序的过渡性词语——firstly，firstofall，tobegin/startwith，then，later，intheend，finally，atlast，afterth

at，afterwards，sincethen，meanwhile等。①Firstly,Ihavealwaysbeeninterestedinreadingbooks.Secondly,I'dliketosharem

ybookswithothersaswell.首先，我一直对读书感兴趣；其次，我也喜欢与别人分享我的书籍。②Firstofall,we'lltrytofindaplacetolive.首先，我们得设法找个住的

地方。即时练1用过渡性词语完成句子首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，然后我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，之后我扫地、拖地。①________，Icollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscat

teredintheroomsandputtheminplace.②________Iwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.③____________，Isweptandmoppedthefloors.答案：①

Firstly②Then③Afterthat-11-——(二)表示并列转折关系的过渡性词语——and，or，but，yet，however，while，otherwise，onthecontrary，despite，inspiteof，insteadof等。

Otherwisewe'llhavetoanswerforourselfishnesssoonerorlater.否则的话，我们迟早会为我们的自私付出代价。即时练2用过渡性词语完成句子相反，智能手机不仅占用我们宝贵的时间，而且对我们的健康造成极大的危害。_______________

___，smartphonesnotonlytakeupourvaluabletime,butalsodogreatharmtoourhealth.答案：Onthecontrary——(三)表示因果关系的过渡性词语——th

us，because，thanksto，dueto，foronereason，so，asaresult/consequence，therefore等。Therefore,Iamwritingtoaskforyourhelpaswellasprofessionalad

vice.因此，我写信向你寻求帮助和专业建议。即时练3用过渡性词语完成句子①因此，我们没有理由轻视普通的工作。__________________，wehavenoreasontolookdownuponordinaryjobs.②多

亏当地媒体的协助，他在13个国家找到了32对同年同月同日出生的人。__________________theassistanceofthelocalmedia,hehasfound32timetwinsacross13countries.答案：①Asaresult/consequence②Than

ksto——(四)表示递进关系的过渡性词语——besides，what'smore，furthermore，moreover，what'sworse，tomakemattersworse，still，even，inaddition等。①Thewea

therwascoldandwet.Still,wehadagreattime.天气又冷又潮，不过我们仍旧玩得很开心。②Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-known

sightseeingspots.而且，沿河的风景很美，有很多著名景点。-12-即时练4用过渡性词语完成句子①另外，我可以看到不同种类的美丽的鸟。________________，Icanseedifferen

tkindsofbeautifulbirds.②更糟的是，如果我们在电话上花费过多的时间，我们会失去将来所需要的交际技能。______________________________，ifwespendtoomuchtimeonphones,wewi

lllosethecommunicationskillsweneedinthefuture.答案：①Inaddition②Tomakemattersworse/Worsestill/What'sworse——(五)表示观点的过渡性词语——asfarasIamconcerned，asforsb

./sth.，inmyopinion，inmyview，frommypointofview，personally等。①AsfarasI'mconcerned,allourclassmateshavelearnedalotfromou

rcommunicationandthevariousactivities.就我而言，我们都从彼此的交流和各种各样的活动中学到了很多东西。②AsformyfavoritefigureinChinesehistoryi

tmustbeWeiYuan,agreatthinkerinthelateQingDynasty.至于中国历史上我最喜欢的人物，一定是魏源，一位晚清的伟大思想家。即时练5用过渡性词语完成句子①在我看来，这里的每个人都是我

们大家庭的一员，我们从对方身上学到很多东西。__________________，everyonehereisamemberofourbigfamilyandwelearnalotfromeachother.②至于考试作弊，我会告诉他们诚实的重要性。______________

____cheatingintheexams,Iwilltellthemtheimportanceofhonesty.答案：①Inmyopinion/view/Frommypointofview/Personally②Asfor——(六)表示总结的过渡性词语——allinall，onthew

hole，inshort，inbrief，inconclusion，inaword，tosumup，ingeneral等。①Inconclusion,Ilikebeingpraised,butIknowsometimesit'sno

talwaysgood.-13-总之，我喜欢被表扬，但是我知道有时候表扬并不总是好的。②Allinall,travelingisthebestchoicetorechargeourselvesandgetreadyforth

enewchallenges.总的来说，旅游是充实自己、准备迎接新挑战的最佳选择。即时练6用过渡性词语完成句子①总之，如果我们有这么一块有魔力的手表，我们的生活将会变得更加方便。__________________，ifw

ehadsuchamagicwatch,ourlifewouldbecomemoreconvenient.②总的来说，我发现自行车比摩托车更令人喜欢。__________________，Ifindabikemoreenj

oyablethanamotorcycle.答案：①Inaword/Inshort/Inbrief②Onthewhole/Ingeneral/Allinall过关检测(限时：50分钟)Ⅰ.请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文假如你是中学生李明，家住泉州。

你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的故乡London，并希望了解你家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。回信必须包括以下内容：1.自然情况：地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等；2.发展成就：经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等；3.存在问题：交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题

等；4.对泉州发展的看法：内容由考生自己拟定。注意：1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息；2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；3.词数100左右。参考词汇：高层建筑high-risebuilding[考生作文]DearJason，-14-I'm1.veryhappytohearfromy

ouandknowaboutyourbeautifulhomecityLondon.NowI'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometownQuanzhou.Quanzhouisabeautifulplaceforpeople

tolive.Itseconomyhasbeendeveloping2.fastduringthepasttenyears.Newbridgesandroadshavebeen3.built,_high-rise

buildingsstandinginmanypartsofthecity.Thereare4.more_and_moreschoolsandhospitalsforthenativepeople.Itisdevelopingintoamo

dernand5.beautifulcity.6.Buttherearestillsomeproblems,7.such_asheavytrafficinrushhoursand8.seriousairpollu

tion,whichhaveabad9.effectonpeople'sdailylife.10.I_thinkQuanzhoushouldstrivetodevelopandbuildanenvironmentallyfriendly,healthyandattractivec

ity,sothatwecouldhaveabetterhometowninfuture.Yours，LiMing[升格作文]DearJason，I'm1.______________happytohearfromyouandknowaboutyourbeautifulhom

ecityLondon.NowI'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometownQuanzhou.Quanzhouisabeautifulplaceforpeopletolive.Itseconomyhasbeendeveloping2.__

____________duringthepasttenyears.Newbridgesandroadshavebeen3.______________，high-risebuildingsstandinginmanypartsofthecity.4.______________schoolsa

ndhospitalsareavailableforthenativepeople.Itisdevelopingintoamodernand5.______________city.6.____________

__，therearestillsomeproblems,7.______________heavytrafficinrushhoursand8.______________airpollution,whichh

aveabad9.______________onpeople'sdailylife.10.______________，Quanzhoushouldstrivetodevelopandbuildanenvironmentallyfrie

ndly,healthyandattractivecity,sothatwecouldhaveabetterhometowninfuture.Yours，LiMing答案：1.morethan/pretty2.rapidly/swiftly3

.setup4.Anincreasingnumberof5.attractive/charming6．However7.forexample8.severe9.influence/impact10.Inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcernedⅡ.根据要求，为下面的话题写作设计

一个开头段假设你是李华，你的学校校报新开设的栏目MyFavoriteTraditionalChineseFestival正在向全校师生征集稿件。请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。-15-1．开门见山式：2．概括式：答案：1.OfallthetraditionalChinesefest

ivals,IlikeMid－AutumnFestivalbest./TherearealotoftraditionalfestivalsinChina,ofwhichIlikeMid-AutumnFestivalbest.2．Chinesepe

oplehavebeencelebratingMid-AutumnFestivalforcenturiesandIlikeitbest.Ⅲ.根据要求及首段内容，为下面的话题设计一个结尾段假如你是李华，你有一种超能力，那么你将用它来做

什么呢？请用英语写一篇短文，畅谈一下你的打算。Ihavebeendreamingofhavingasuperpowersincemychildhood.1．首尾呼应式：2．画龙点睛式：答案：1.HowIwishIwouldreallyhavesuchasuperpower.2．IfIhadsuch

asuperpower,Iwoulddomoretohelpthepeopleontheearthlivehappily.Ⅳ.写作练习假如你是李华，高考后想出国留学，但担心不适应国外生活，请给外籍教师Peter写一封信，告诉他你的担忧，请他介绍美国大学生的学习和生活并给出相关

建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearPeter，-16-Yours，LiHua[精彩范文]Dear_Peter，Howiseveryth

inggoingthesedays?IamLiHua,oneofyourstudents.I'mwritingtoyoutoaskforsomeadviceonhowtoadapttothelifeabroad.OnthinkingthatIwillbeexposedtoacomp

letelyunfamiliarenvironment,Ican'thelpfeelingnervous.SonowIameagertoknowwhatrealAmericancollegelifeislikeandwhatproblemsforeignstuden

tsmaycomeacrossatthebeginning.Besides,thoughIhavemadealotofpreparationsforEnglishlanguage,IamstillafraidthatImighthav

edifficultiesincommunicatingwithothersinEnglish.Couldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonit?Ihopemysillyquestionswillnotbotheryo

utoomuch.ThanksforyourtimeandIamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，Li_HuaⅤ.用过渡性词语完成句子1．在我看来，那些得到她的捐赠的人会被鼓励着更努力地学习。_______

_______________________________________，thosewhohavereceivedherdonationswillbeencouragedtostudyevenharder.答案：Inmyopinion/view/From

mypointofview/Personally/AsfarasIamconcerned2．而且，其他人能得到他们想要的书，他们有更多自由的时间阅读书籍。________________，otherpersonscangetthebooks

theywantandtheyhavemorefreetimetoreadthem.答案：Besides/Furthermore/Moreover/Additionally3．这辆自行车好像很笨重，很难控制。更糟的是，我从车子上掉下

来很多次。Thebikeseemedtooheavyanddifficulttocontrol.________________，Itookmanyfallsoffthebike.答案：Worsestill/Tomakemattersworse/What'sworse4．最后，我想问关于

他私人生活的几个问题，那一定很有趣。____________，Iwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispersonallife,whichmustbeveryinteresting.答案：Finally/Atlast/Int

heend5．总之，他必须为他缺席会议作出解释。-17-____________________，hemustgiveanexplanationforhisabsencefromtheconference.答案：Inshort/Inbrief/Inaword6

．另外，我们应该学会与别人友好相处。____________________，weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.答案：Inaddition/Additionally7．一般来说，这个季节去泰山旅游的人是最多的。____________

________，thenumberofpeoplevisitingMountTaiinthisseasonisthelargest.答案：Generallyspeaking/Ingeneral8．尽管生病了，怀特先生还是来参加了毕业典礼。

____________________illness,MrWhiteattendedthegraduationceremony.答案：Despite/InspiteofⅥ.根据下面的提示写一篇短文，注意使用适当的过渡性词语假定你是李华，你的英国网友Anna在她的学

校举办的一次作文比赛中荣获一等奖，你写信向她表示祝贺，并在信中谈及自己在英语写作上存在的困难，希望得到她的帮助。注意：1.词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

DearAnna，IamverygladtolearnthatLookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours，LiHua[精彩范文]Dear_Anna，I_am_very_glad_to_learn_thatyouhav

ewonthefirstprizeinyourschool'sEnglishwritingcontest.Iamwritingtooffermywarmestcongratulationsonyourexcellentperformance.Honestlyspeaking

,it'sarealencouragementtometoseeyoureffortsrewarded.HowIadmireyourwritingskills!IhavebeenlearningEnglishforseveralyearsandI-18-have

littletroubleinlistening,speakingandreading.However,Ifindithardtowriteagoodcomposition.Inspiteofsomanyeffortsputintoit,Ijustcan'tfindawayout.If

eelstressedout.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesomespecificadviceonit.Looking_forward_to_your_early_reply.Y

ours，Li_Hua强化特训11书面表达(二)(限时：50分钟)Ⅰ.请用更高级词汇替换黑体词汇1．Theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemorediffi

cultcourses.________答案：difficult→challenging2．We'lltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.________答案：develop→promote3．Icannolonger

bearthewayhespeakstous.________答案：bear→putupwith4．Imetoneofmyclassmatesonmywaytoschoolyesterday.________答案：met→cameacros

s5．Hehasdecidedtobeateacherwhenhegrowsup.________答案：decided→determined/madeuphismind6．Developingveryquickly,the

Internetcausesthebreakdownofface－to－facecommunication.________答案：causes→givesriseto7．Whenyouareboredwit

hthepeoplesometimes,you'dbetterfindaquietplace,listeningtosomeclassicalmusic.________答案：boredwith→fedupwith8．Morea

ndmorevisitorshavebeenattractedtothisplace.________答案：Moreandmore→Anincreasingnumberof9．Hedidn'tlistentowhatIsaidintheclass.________答案：did

n'tlistento→turnedadeafearto10．SuddenlyIthoughtofanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.________答案：Ithou

ghtofanidea→anideaoccurredtomeⅡ.按要求改写下列句子1．Myfavoritehobbiesarereadingbooksandnewspapers.Theyhavebecomea-19-necessarypartofmydailylife.→_

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________(用定语从句合并句子)答案：Myfavoritehobbiesarereadingbook

sandnewspapers,whichhavebecomeanecessarypartofmydailylife.2．Thattheyhadhadprofessionaltrainingimpressedmemost.→____________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________(用主语从句和表语从句

改写句子)答案：Whatimpressedmemostwasthattheyhadhadprofessionaltraining.3．Afterwehadpracticedplayingbasketballforalmo

sttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.→__________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_(用分词作状语改写句子)答案：Havingpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths,westronglydesiredtobethewinner.4．Ididn'tknowr

ealhappinessuntilImetyou.→________________________________________________________________________________________

________________________________________(用强调句型改写句子)答案：ItwasnotuntilImetyouthatIknewrealhappiness.5．Theweatherwassocoldt

hatwehadtostayathome.→___________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________(用倒装句改写句子)答案：Socoldwastheweatherthatwehadtostayathome.6．Thelocalgovernmentdidn'trealizetheproblemuntiltheriv

erwasseriouslypolluted.→_____________________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________-20-(用倒装句改写句子)答案：Notuntiltheriverwasseriouslypolluteddidthelocalgovernmentrealizetheproblem.7．It'stimeforustotakemeasur

estoprotectendangeredanimals.→_____________________________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________(用虚拟语气改写句子)答案：It'stimethatwetook/shouldtakemeasurestoprotectendangeredanim

als.8．Whenweapproachedthecitycenter,wesawastonestatueofabout10metersinheight.→_______________________________________________________

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________________(用现在分词短语作时间状语改写句子)答案：Approachingthecitycenter,wesawastonestatueofabout10metersinheight.9．Theyareexperienced,knowled

geable,patientandunderstanding.→____________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________(用notonly...butalso...句

型改写句子)答案：Theyarenotonlyexperiencedandknowledgeable,butalsopatientandunderstanding.10．WeshouldspeakmoreEnglish.Wethinkitisveryi

mportant.→______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

__________________(用it作形式宾语合并句子)答案：WethinkitveryimportanttospeakmoreEnglish.Ⅲ.用过渡词汇或句式补全句子1．____________________(首先),themostsignificantt

hingistosetagoal,workoutaplanandcarryoutyourplanstepbystep.答案：Firstofall/Tobeginwith2．____________________(就我而言),Ilovewealth,butIvaluehealthmore.

答案：AsfarasIamconcerned3．____________________(事实上),advertisementplaysaninformativerolein-21-ourdailylife.答案：Asamatteroffact/Infact4．_______________

_____________________(况且),listeningtosomesoftmusicdoesrelaxyourmoodandgiveyouanewstart.答案：Besides/Inaddition/What'smo

re/Moreover5．Ilostmywayintheforestand__________________________(更糟的是),itgotdark.答案：tomakemattersworse/worsestill6．____________

__(因此),Isuggestweliveinharmonywiththenature.答案：Therefore7．__________________________(总之),changesinourlifeinthepasttwentyyearshavebrou

ghtuscomfortandconvenience.答案：Inaword/Inconclusion/Inshort/Inbrief8．____________________________(到了……的时候了)wetooksome

measurestosolvetheproblem.答案：It's(high)timethat9．____________________________(我们可以得出一个结论)oursocietyisprogressingandpeoplearelivingabet

terlifethaneverbefore.答案：Wecandrawaconclusionthat10．______________________________________________(从这次经历

中，我了解到)beingcarefulisveryimportantandthatwecan'tbetoocareful,especiallyinexaminations.答案：Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedth

atⅣ.翻译下列开头和结尾句1．我代表学生会给您写信请求帮助我们的校友。_______________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________答案：Iamwritingtoyou,onbehalfofStudentUnion,toaskforhelpforo

urschoolmate.2．如果方便的话，我希望您能接受我们的邀请。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

_____________________答案：Wehopethatyouwillacceptourinvitationifitisconvenientforyou.3．我写信申请在您的大学里学习。_________________________

________________________________________答案：I'mwritingtoapplytostudyinyouruniversity.-22-4．我写信告诉您我的问题，这个问题困扰了我很长时间。_____________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

答案：Iamwritingtotellyoumyproblem,whichhastroubledmeforalongtime.5．我写信给您是因为我有些确实严肃的问题想要和您交流。________________________________________

__________________________________________________________________________________________答案：IamwritingtoyoubecauseIhavesomethingreal

lyserioustocommunicatewithyou.6．7月25日至8月10日在北戴河将有一个英语暑假夏令营。______________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________答案：ThereisgoingtobeanEnglishsummercampinBeidaihefromJuly25toAugust10.7．我的确希望你能考

虑我的建议。_________________________________________________________________答案：Idohopeyouwillconsidermysuggestion.8．对于您的慷慨帮助，我再次

表示感谢。_________________________________________________________________答案：Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.9

．我为给你带来这么大的麻烦再次向你道歉。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________答案：Iapologizetoyouagainforhavingputyouinsuchgreattrouble.10．我想向你致以最诚挚的祝贺。_____________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Iwouldliketoco

ngratulateyouwithallmyheart.11．如果你能认真对待我的投诉，我会非常高兴。_______________________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________答案：Iwouldbeverydelightedifyoucouldconsidermycomplaintseriously.12．请一定按时参加。________

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：Besure

toattenditontime.-23-