【文档说明】高中英语学案：Unit3FamilymattersPeriodⅣ含解析.docx，共(7)页，1.255 MB，由envi的店铺上传

转载请保留链接：https://www.doc5u.com/view-5ad7928309580881d47d9194f5194358.html

以下为本文档部分文字说明：

PeriodⅣWriting|读后续写——回忆亲人本单元的写作主要是读后续写，写作主题是回忆亲人。在写作此类型文章时要注意以下几点：1．原文中的人称和时态。既然是读后续写，就要和原文的人称和时态保持一致。2．原文中的人物信

息。主题是回忆亲人，对原文出现的人物特点要精准掌握。3．原文中的故事发展。在续写故事时，故事的发展脉络和逻辑要清晰合理。1．Howeverdecisiveshemaybeattheoffice,shewillsecond-guessherselfconstantlyasam

other.任凭她在办公室多么果断，作为母亲，她仍经常后悔当时的决定。2．Iwantmysistertoknowthateverydecisionwillnolongerberoutine.我想让我妹妹知道，她将再也不能按照常规做出决定。3

．Mymommymadeitjustforme.我妈妈专门为我做的。4．Atthefrontofthefirstcarlookingoutthewindowatthetrackthatlayaheadw

ereamanandhisson.在头节车厢的最前面，坐着一个男人和他的儿子，他们正透过窗户观赏着一直往前延伸的铁道。5．Hekeepsbegginghisparentstolethimseehissister.他一直乞求父母，让他进去看看小妹妹

。6．Theotherwomanthatmywifewantedmetovisitwasmymother.我妻子想让我去拜访的另一个女人，就是我的妈妈。7．DadnevertriedtohugorkissmewhenIwasachi

ld.在我很小的时候，爸爸从来不抱我，也从来不亲吻我。8．Whatmakesagoodmotheranyway?是什么能成就一个好母亲？阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Iwastouchedthroughexperiences,memories,book

s,stories,animals,angels,andmostofallotherpeople.Peoplehavemovedmeandmolded(对……影响重大)mewithmomentsofloveandex

amplesofkindness.OnetimeonthedaybeforeChristmasmanyyearsagowhenIwasaminimumwagemill(工厂)worker,Ifoundmyselfwithverylittlemoneyandverylittlet

imetobuymysmallchildrenafewsimpletoys.IknewthattheywouldhavetobecheaponesandIhopedmychildrenwouldlikethem.Ihatednothavingenoughtogivethemmore.Ihat

edbeingpoor.AndIhatedfeelingbadatChristmasratherthanhappy.Ipulledintoastoreparkinglotandcountedmymoneyagain.

Itwasn'tmuchbutmaybeIcouldgetsomethingsmallwithit.AsIwasgettingoutofthecarInoticedtheSalvationArmy(救世军)bell

ringerattheentrance.IfeltbadagainbecauseIdidn'tfeelIcouldspareanythingtogivehim.Istartedwalkingtowardstheentrancew

hentwocarspulledintoemptyparkingspotsinfrontofme.Thefirstwasashiny,newCadillacandIfeltatwingeofjealousywhenIsawit.“Howni

ce，”Ithought,“woulditbetohaveenoughmoneytobuyacarlikethat.”Thesecondcar,though,wasanancientsedan(轿车)morebe

at-upandrustythantheoneIwasdriving.Amanhopped(冲)outoftheCadillacandhurriedintothestorerightpastthebellringerwithou

tasecondglance.Outoftheoldsedancameayoungmotherwiththreesmallchildrenintow(紧随着).Herclotheslookedaswornoutashercar,yetshestoppedinfrontofthe

bellringer,smiled,openedherpurse,anddroppedabillinhisredkettle(钱罐)．注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关

键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Istoodthereforaminuteinastonishment.Paragraph2：In

thatsecondastreamofwarmthtouchedme,myjealousyandhatred(憎恨)leftme,andalltheloveandjoyfilledme.[精彩范文]Paragraph1：Istoodthereforaminuteinastonishment.“

Maybe，”Ithoughttomyself,“it'sbettertoberichontheinsideinsteadoftheoutside.”Thatrichmanshouldhavedonesomethingtohelpthepoor,

buthedidn't.Sometimesitwasreallywrongtojudgeapersonbyhisorherappearance.Ireallyhadrespectforthepoormotherfromthebottomofmyheart.Shesetagoo

dexampleforherchildrentofollow.Paragraph2：Inthatsecondastreamofwarmthtouchedme,myjealousyandhatred(憎恨)leftme,an

dalltheloveandjoyfilledme.Isearchedforabilloutofmyownpurse,droppeditintheredkettle,andwishedthebellringerame

rryChristmas.Ifoundafewfunthingstogivemykidsanddrovehomewithmyheartsinging.IknewitwasgoingtobeawonderfulChristmas.Icouldhardlywaittoseemychil

drenenjoyingthepresentsboughtforthem,includingaspecialgift—loveforthoseinneed.总评文章整体写作流畅自然，心理和精神层面的描写细腻生

动，体现了变化和转折，充满正能量。[亮点呈现](1)“Thatrichmanshouldhavedonesomething...”中shouldhavedone表示“应该做某事而实际上没有做”，准确体现出作者对富人行为的批评态度。(2)“fromthebott

omofmyheart”，“setagoodexample”词组的运用准确得当。(3)“withmyheartsinging”，“seemychildrenenjoying”结构的运用简洁生动，令文章句式显得高级。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一

个完整的故事。MyDad'sBestFlowerIremembermyfirsthomewasasmallapartmentonthesecondfloorwithalovelyandspaciousbalcony.Whenmym

umwasbusyinthekitchen,sheletmestayonthebalconywatchingthekidsplayinginthestreet.OnthatbalconyIplayedsometimeswithmyeldersi

ster,Maria.Shewassevenyearsoldandwhenmymumwasabsent,shewaslikeamothertome.Thebalconywasagreathobbyplaceformyfather.

Afterhisworkheusedtogrowcarnations(康乃馨)inflowerboxes.Hiscarnationswerered,pinkandwhite,andeveryoneappreciat

edthemfortheirbeauty.Hetookcareofthemwithsomuchloveanddevotion.Hedealtcarefullywithhisflowerslikeamotherta

kingcareofherbaby.ManytimesIsatonthefloorofthebalconyforhoursobservinghimandhislovelyflowerswithpatience.Hewasalwaysdoingsomethingonthatbalcony.Hewas

wateringthemeveryday,cleaningthebalconyfloor,changingthepottingsoilandwhenthestemswerethick,strongandhighenough,hestartedhisimprovementoperation

attentivelylikeadoctor.Mydadtookatinyknifeandwithhislefthandheheldthestemofthecarnationandmeasuredtheheight.Thenhemadeasmallmarkontheste

mwithhisfinger.Afterwardshemadeasharpcutwiththeknife,justenoughtofitinagrainofbarley(插穗的芽).Thenhebandagedthestemwithasmallband

age.Hisjobwasthentowatertheplantsandtotakecareofthem.“Nooneshouldtouchthem，”hesaidtoMum.Everyday,whenhecamehomefromworkhewentstraighttot

hebalcony.Mumusedtotellus,“DonottouchDaddy'sflowers.”Forusitwasafascinatingexperiencetowatchhowthesmallstemsweregrowingandmakingflowers.Whe

nthecarnationshadgrownbigenough,mydadenjoyedwatchingthemeveryday.Wethekidsdidtoo.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续

写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Oneday,myeldersister,wholovedDadverymuch,hadagreatidea.Paragraph2：Whenmydadarriv

ed,hewentasusual,straighttothebalconyandsawhisflowerslyingonthefloorlikedeadanimals.写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。“我”小的时候，父亲十分爱花，在家里的阳台上种植了康乃馨，他精心照顾这些花，担心他的花受到伤害，特

别叮嘱母亲不要让人碰触他的花。[精彩范文]Paragraph1：Paragraph2：课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。TraditionalChineseWeddin

gTraditionalChineseweddingcustomshavebeenaroundforthousandsofyears.Theymayvaryfromplacetoplaceandtimetotime,buthaveb

eenholding1importantpositioninthelivesofChinesepeople,2(cause)far-reaching(影响深远的)effectsonthewaytheChin

eseleadtheirlives.AtraditionalChinesemarriageusuallyconsists3somenecessaryprocedures,suchasmatch-making,engagement,mee

tingthebride,andthreebows.Inaddition,atypicalChineseweddingnowadays4(go)likethis:whenanewcoupleisengaged,5followsisachoiceofthedateoft

heirmarriage.MostpeoplewouldfavorapublicholidayorspecialChinesefestivalfor6(they)relativesandfriends7(attend)thewed

ding.However,quiteafewothers,8(especial)thoseinthecountryside,wouldfixaluckydatesothattheirmarriagewouldhave“DoubleHappiness”.Theweddingc

eremonyisusuallyhostedwarmlyandweddingguestswould9(treat)toauniqueweddingfeast.10(toast)aremadetowishthenewcoupleeverlasti

nglove,happinessandearlybirthofahealthybabyandsoon.1．2.3.4.5．6.7.8.9．10.答案：1.an2.causing3.of4.goes5.what6.their7．toattend

8.especially9.betreated10.ToastsTraditionalChineseweddingcustomsareconsideredasanimportantpartoftraditionalCh

ineseritualculture.Aweddingisusuallyagrandoccasionwithelaborateformalities.中国的婚礼习俗是中国传统礼仪文化的重要部分。中式婚礼场面正式隆重。