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2018高考英语写作专题（7）（求助信）含参考范文07求助信模板①Dear______,Iamwritingtoformallyrequestto______（请求的内容）.Thereasonfor_____________isthat______

_______（给出原因）.I___________,soI_____________（给出细节）.Iwouldalsoliketorequest___________（提出进一步的要求）.IamsorryforanyinconvenienceIhavecaused.Thankyoufo

ryourattentiontotheserequests.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,donothesitatetocontactmeat__________（电话号码）.Ilookforwardtoafavorablereply.Yourss

incerely,LiMing模板②Dear________,Mynameis_______________(自我介绍).I’mwritingalettertoyoutoaskforsomehelp.Ihavemetdifficultyin_______________(求助内容).First,

Ifind___________(困难1).Besides,________(困难2).What’smore,__________(困难3).Facedwithsomuchdifficulty,Ihaveto

askyouforsomehelp.Wouldyouliketo____________(委婉提出请求)？Inthemeanwhile,Ibegyouto(请求内容)sothat___________(请求目的).Also,Iwouldlikeyouto(请求内容).

I’msurethatIcanmakegreatprogressin_____________(表达期待).Yours,LiHua常用句型：（做某事有困难）1.Ihavetroubleindoingsth.2.Ifinditextremelyhardf

ormetodosth.3.Doingsthisanotherterribleheadacheforme.常见困难：【生活方面】与人相处getalongwellwithmyclassmates/thenewteacher/myparents.和我的同

学/新老师/父母相处把握时间arrangeandmakegooduseofmyeverydaytimeforvaluablethings.安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情明确目标knowthepurposeofmylifeandthedestinationofmy

futureinordertopassionatelyliveapurpose-drivenlifeeveryday.知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活【学习方面】不懂

语法havetroubleinmasteringtheadvancedgrammarrulesandputthemintouseinmyspeakingandwriting.进步太慢findmyselfmakingprogressnotasfastasbefore,whichhas

beenannoyingmeforalongtime.精力有限can’tbepassionateandenergeticalldaylongsoastomakeeverymomentmeaningfulandsplendid.典例假设你是

李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病(leukemia)而住院，目前已经花光了家里的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植(bonemarrowtransplant)，需要20万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点如下：1.对病人的简单介绍；2.目前的困难；3

.希望得到捐助。联系电话：白天5221600；晚上5221610。注意：1.词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dearfriends,I’mverysad

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____________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua【写作指导】该写作根据要求可分为三部分来写

，即先说明王强患病的情况，再简单介绍王强目前所处的困境，最后写出求助要求和帮助方式。可用第一人称写，时态可以一般现在时为主。【范文赏析】Dearfriends,I’mverysadtotellyouthatmyclassmateWangQiang,aSeniorThreestud

ent,suddenlyfeltfaintwhenhewaspreparingforthecomingCollegeEntranceExamination.Heissufferingfromaseri

ousillness"leukemia".Hehasbeeninhospitalforaboutthreemonthsandspentallthemoneyhisparentssaved.Hisparents,bothfarmers

,triedeverymeanstosavehim.WangQiangisatopstudentinourclass,butheisinhospitalnow.Heisinurgentneedofabonemarrowtransp

lant.However,hisfamilyistoopoortoaffordtheexpenses,whichtotal200,000yuan.Howcanapoorfamilyaffordsuchhighexpenses?Buttimeislife.Wecan’twaittoseesuc

hasunshineboylosehislife.Soyourhelpisbadlyneeded.Let’sdowhatwecantosaveourfellowstudent.Thelifeofalovelyboyisinyourha

nd.Yourlovecansavealife.Youcancontact5221600inthedaytimeand5221610atnight.Yourstruly,LiHua【范文亮点】该范文结构合理，层次分明，语言表达地道，行文流畅。内容涵盖了所有的要点，运用了较多的高

级语法结构和词汇，如which引导的非限制性定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句等。Writting1假如你是李华。最近，你与父母之间关系紧张，甚至发生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友Charlie写一封信，向他求助。内容包括：1.谈谈你目前遇到的问题；2.针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。注

意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearCharlie,Howareyougettingalong?__________________________________________________________

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_____________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHuaWriting2假设你是学生李华，你的家乡剪纸艺术负有盛名，

你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮助润色。请根据提示，用英语给Bob写一封求助信。内容包括：1.求助事由；2.求助内容；3.表达感激。注意：1.词数120左右；2.信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。DearBob

,I’mwritinginthehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtodomeafavor.____________________________________________________

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______________________________________________Yours,LiHua【范文】DearBob,I’mwritinginthehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtodomeafavor.Whenitcomestopapercutting

,thereisnodenyingthatitenjoysagreatreputationinmyhometown.ForalongtimeIhavebeenlongingtowriteanappealingarticletomakeitbetterknown.However,onlywhenI

puttheideaintopracticedidIfindthatmyEnglishisfarfromsatisfaction.AsfarasI’mconcerned,youhaveagoodcommandofwrittenEnglish,whichimpress

esmealot.Wouldyouliketodomeafavortohavemydraftpolished?Iwillpayyouavisitatyourearliestconvenience.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyrequestintocons

ideration.Yours,LiHuaWriting3假如你叫李华，上高中快一年了，发现自己还是不能适应高中的学习生活。现在请你就目前的情况给自己初中时最信任的老师写一封求助信，信的重要内容如下：1.高中生活

基本情况：(1)有9门课程；(2)每天作业时间4—5小时，课外活动时间少；(3)睡眠时间不足，上课有时感到疲劳；(4)考试压力大，家长期望高。2.你目前遇到的最大问题以及现在的感受并希望得到建议。注意：1.内容应包括以上所有信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。2

.词数120左右。信的开头和结尾已经写好，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：压力pressure;家长的高期望highexpectationsfromparentsDearMr.Li,I'mLiHua.Doyouremember

me?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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______________________________________Allthebest.Yourstruly,LiHua【范文】DearMr.Wang,I’mLiHua.Doyoustillrememberme?Howareyounow?Iamwriting

toyou,askingforyourhelpbecauseIfindI’mnotveryusedtotheseniorhighschoollife.Wehaveninesubjectswhichare

morethanIhadinjuniorhighschool.EverydayIhavetospendfourtofivehoursdoingmyhomework,sothereislittletimeleftforafter-

schoolactivities.IhardlyhaveanytimetodowhatIwant.Besides,IsometimesfeelsleepyinclassbecauseIdon’thaveenoughsleep.Thegreatpre

ssureofexamsandhighexpectationsfrommyparentsoftenmakemeevenmoretired.ThebiggestproblemImeetnowismymaths,whichismorediff

icultthanthatinjuniorhighschool.Idon’tknowhowtoimproveit.SoIhopeIcangetsomeadvicefromyou.Allthebest.Yourstruly,LiHuaWriti

ng4假设你是李华，是一名高三学生。你的同班同学王强因患白血病(leukemia)而住院,目前已经花光了家里的所有积蓄，现在需要骨髓移植(bonemarrowtransplant),需要20万元。请你帮他写一封求助信。要点如下：1.对病人的简单介绍；2.目前的困难；3.希望得到捐助。联系电话：白天

5221600；晚上5221610。注意:1.词数100左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dearfriends,I’mverysadtotellyouthat_______

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_________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua【范文】Dearfriends,I’mverysadtotel

lyouthatmyclassmateWangQiang,aSeniorThreestudent,suddenlyfeltfaintwhenhewaspreparingforthecomingCollegeEntranceExaminat

ion.Heissufferingfromaseriousillness"leukemia".Hehasbeeninhospitalforaboutthreemonthsandspentallthemoneyhisparentssaved.

Hisparents,bothfarmers,triedeverymeanstosavehim.WangQiangisatopstudentinourclass,butheisinhospitalnow.Heisinurgentneedofa

bonemarrowtransplant.However,hisfamilyistoopoortoaffordtheexpenses,whichtotal200,000yuan.Howcanapoorfamilyaffordsuchhighexpenses?Buttim

eislife.Wecan’twaittoseesuchasunshineboylosehislife.Soyourhelpisbadlyneeded.Let’sdowhatwecantosaveourfel

lowstudent.Thelifeofalovelyboyisinyourhand.Yourlovecansavealife.Youcancontact5221600inthedaytimeand5221610atnight.Yourstruly,LiHuaWriting5假如你是李

华。本期你校开设了英语口语课,由于你不太适应外教Chris的授课，你决定给她写一封求助信。内容包括：1.告诉她你的困难；2.求助的内容(推荐一些听力材料、周末和她练习口语等)；3.希望得到帮助。注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.可适当增

加细节，以使行文连贯。DearChris,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinOralEnglishclass._____________________________________________

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___________Yours,LiHua【必背范文】DearChris,IamLiHua,oneofyourstudentsinOralEnglishclass.Iamwritingtoseekhelpfromyou.Youknow,Icomefromajuniorhighschoolin

thecountryside,whereteachersdon’tspeakmuchEnglishinclass.ThatiswhyIamnotgoodatlisteningorspeaking.NowIfindit

reallyhardtofollowyouinclass.IhopeyoucanrecommendsomelisteningmaterialstomesothatIcanimprovemylisteningafterclass.Besid

es,couldIpracticespeakingwithyouforhalfanhouratweekendsatyourconvenienttime?IthinkitcanhelpmeimprovemyspokenEnglish.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucou

ldlendmeahelpinghand.Yours,LiHua